Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 [align=center] Ok, so, I have made a lot of cards in the past week and I just wanted to share on of them. Its part of a set I made know as Distortion World. Its main Cards are the Distortion archetype. Now, here it goes. Hope you like. Auridausen, Distortion Beast Effect: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can destroy 1 Spell Card. You can send 1 "Distortion" monster you control to the Graveyard to increase this cards ATK by 400 until the End Phase. If this card is destroyed by battle or a card effect, inflict 200 damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Distortion" monsters you control other than "Cerilion, Distortion Driller". [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leonidas135 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Be easier to rate if I get to see the rest of the distortion beasts but by the sound of it it's good 8/10.And sorry about the spamming just had a momment.:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 I'm sharing te set with Kale so when I can get my Card Maker working and I can upload again, I'll then give it to Kale to put on his Inventory thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 again, i think it is good. ;) though, what happens when there is no Spell Card to destroy? that is the only problem i see.. I'm sharing te set with Kale so when I can get my Card Maker working and I can upload again' date=' I'll then give it to Kale to put on his Inventory thread.[/quote'] erm.. when was this decision made? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 I don't know I'm just really believing. Ok, so, when theirs no Spell Card. Nothing happens. Or, at least I think thats what happens. I never quite thought about that possibility. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leonidas135 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 When this card is Tribute Summoned,you can destroy 1 Spell Card. I sugest change it to this then no one can complain :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Well, If I get 2 more comments other than from you guys, then I'll change the cards effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 When this card is Tribute Summoned' date='you can destroy 1 Spell Card. I sugest change it to this then no one can complain :)[/quote']seems quite sensible to me. oh and does that neko nurse come with a set or is it single?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 "If this card is destroyed by battle or a card effect, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Distortion" monsters you control other than "Cerilion, Distortion Driller". " You didn't specify how much damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Sh*t, You're right, I'll change it quickly. Like, right after this post, and I'll post the new one. EDIT:There I changed it up with all the corrections you guys have given me. Should I pos the actual Set now. I'll decide when I have 4 yeses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Innovative and very well thought out it seems, 9/10 for the image and 9/10 for the concept of the card. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manu34 Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Good card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Cool, thanks for the rating guys. So, should I put up the set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister Sir Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Ok, so in 2 or three more yeses, I'll put up the set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 I LOVE the image for this card. It's incredible. Lemme see if I can fix the OCG a little bit: This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can destroy 1 face-up Spel Card on the field. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 "Distortion" you control to increase the ATK of this card by 400 until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle or an opponent's card effect, inflict 200 damage to your opponent for each face-up "Distortion" on your field, except for "Cerilion, Distortion Driller". Not 100% sure, but this looks a bit better. Wasn't sure if the tributing monster to gain ATK was supposed to be once per turn or as many as you have, but it can easily be fixed. Nice balance to it, though. Stats are good and Level is good as well. Me likey. 10/10 =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 About the ATK gain, I took the no once per turn or as many as you have from Dark Crusader. It sates that "You can discard 1 DARK monster to increase the ATK of this card by 400 (I think.)" Its states nothing about about once per turn, so I think that it is. So, anyways, I think the OCG is correct, but I'll keep it the way I have it. Tanks for the rating. Should I put up the whole Set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 About the ATK gain' date=' I took the no once per turn or as many as you have from Dark Crusader. It sates that "You can discard 1 DARK monster to increase the ATK of this card by 400 (I think.)" Its states nothing about about once per turn, so I think that it is. So, anyways, I think the OCG is correct, but I'll keep it the way I have it. Tanks for the rating. Should I put up the whole Set?[/color'] That works. Just trying to help, that's all. It's still good. As for putting up the whole set - YES!(It would help to see what "Cerilion, Distortion Driller" looks like and why it is excluded in this card's effect) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 Ok, I'll see if I can dput up the set after the post. You'll really love Cerilion, heheh. . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyrant Phoenix Posted March 24, 2009 Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 "When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can destroy 1 Spell Card."You forgot to mention on the field: "Spell Card on the field/your opponent controls." And also if it has to be face-up. From the wording, i'm taking it it is face-up so state that as well. You can just put destroyed since there is no other way a card can be destroyed."When this card is destroyed..." You also may want to put a "-" instead of a "," between name and archetype. The comma is signifying as the name whole while the dash is properly seperating the name from its archetype so card effects can work with "selectively named" cards. From one card, I can only say that I am quite interested in the others. Yes, you should post the entire set. Rest of the day full in cheers from TK10 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2009 I've posted the set, and as for your comment Tyrantking10, I put the comma there after I saw that in the Lightsworn monsters name.As for the destroying Spell Card effect is meant to be a Spell Card anywhere on the field.And for the destroying my card effect, I guess I'll consider changing it. As I said: The true set is posted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute Summoned' date=' you can destroy 1 face-up Spell Card on the field. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 "Distortion" monster you control to increase the ATK of this card by 400 until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed by battle or [b']by a card effect controlled by your opponent, your opponent loses 200 Life Points[/b] for each face-up "Distortion" monster on your field, except for "Cerilion, Distortion Driller". Fixed._________________________ Nothing much to say after reading all the previous posts. And I will look at the set too. ^_^ 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Ok, I'll change it later. Perhaps tomorrow. Tanks DeMeNTeD!Ok, cool. I'll wait for your raing in my. . . Can't say too much of it. Not yet. You'll just have to read the thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 BUMPED! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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