Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 ...WHAT. That was almost as random as Holy Babylon accusing me of secularist preaching. How does that have anything to do with the last comic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 It doesn't. It's a comic. It doesn't have anything to do with the plot. If you want a plot, I'll do one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 You need more detail. Where the heck does Zangoose come from? This is just randomized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 ... So you guys want me to quit? It's fine if you do, speak the truth. It's hard to update so much, with angry fans shouting at you -_- " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Make it have more sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 I'll try. Next comic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 It doesn't. It's a comic. It doesn't have anything to do with the plot. If you want a plot' date=' I'll do one.[/quote']Teh plotz NAO. Every successful comic has a plot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 I'll do one tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 1. Give it a plot2. Make them longer, MUCH longer3. Give the sprites speech bubbles4. Can you please label some so we know who says what first, they are in random places5. Get better BG's for the comic if you make those 5 changes it will change the opinion of many viewers of this comic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 1. Working on it2. Don't overwork me, this is just for fun. ;)3. My paint program can't do that4. Too hard5. Why? They were the best I could find. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 1. Okay2. Just a little bit longer then.... please3. just draw a speech bubble then put the type text into it4. i mean label them 1,2,3 etc. like in order when each person says their line5. You draw your own card, draw your own BG's , and at least try to find better ones...Please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 1. Give it a plot2. Make them longer' date=' MUCH longer3. Give the sprites speech bubbles4. Can you please label some so we know who says what first, they are in random places5. Get better BG's for the comic if you make those 5 changes it will change the opinion of many viewers of this comic.[/quote'] 1. Working on it2. Don't overwork me' date=' this is just for fun. ;)3. My paint program can't do that4. Too hard5. Why? They were the best I could find.[/quote'] 1. Yes.2. Four panels is fine.3. Get GIMP. NOW.4. Get GIMP. NOW.5. The BGs do suck. Take them off TSR, et cetera. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 To make them better, use GIMP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 The second part is stupid. (Sorry) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 I know. My dad won't let me download GIMP. He already has plenty of space getting used up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 Wrong section. Waaaay too random' date=' and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot. If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort. The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores. With all due respect,|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM *cough* self-centered *cough*Pretty good, not bad, but not brilliant. Can I request Chimchar? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 Wrong section. Waaaay too random' date=' and of terrible quality. At least add some semblance of a plot. If you're breaking the fourth wall already, you're doing it wrong. Fourth wall breaking is a last resort. The BGs are awful, and the speech bubbles, when readable, are eyesores. With all due respect,|||~Supreme Gamesmaster Yddisac|||||||Spritecomic Master of YCM*cough* self-centered *cough* Disgustingly arrogant and proud of it. :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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