.Requiem Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 The InnocenceThe Innocence Yea, I got bored so I decided to make a mini-set. This set will be converted to actually cards real soon. The Innocence of LifeSpellcaster/EffectLevel 3 / Light1200 ATK / 700 DEFEffect:“If you control 1 “Innocence” monster, you can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand. You can discard 1 card from your hand, to put any number of Innocence Counter on this card for each on the field (max. 3). You can remove 2 Innocence Counters from this card to remove 1 card on the field from play.” The Despair InnocenceSpellcaster/EffectLevel 4 / Dark900 ATK / 1500 DEFEffect:“If you control 1 “Innocence” monster, you can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. Place 1 Innocence Counters on this card for each Spell Card you control (max. 2). If your opponent activates an effect of a Spell, Trap or Monster Card, you can remove 2 Innocence Counters from this card to negate the card. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can pay 500 Life Points to place 2 Innocence Counters on an “Innocence” monster you control.” The Joy InnocenceSpellcaster / EffectLevel 5 / Water0 ATK / 1500 DEFEffect:“This card can only be Summoned by Tributing 1 “Innocence” monster you control. Put 1 Innocence Counter on this card for each “Innocence” monster in your Graveyard (max. 3). Increase this card’s ATK by 1000 for each Innocence Counter on this card. Decrease this card’s ATK by 500 for each card your opponent controls. If this card’s ATK becomes 0, remove 1 card on the field.” Link to comment
goldenboy820 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 I like but you should make more.Also, the names can be a little more...creative...Still good. If you don't agree with me then reply. Link to comment
.Requiem Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 I am making more, I like the names. I can't really think of anything else. Link to comment
goldenboy820 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Well I can give you some names if u want, then tell me if you like them. Link to comment
.Requiem Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Fine any help is great, I am will keep the names for now. Link to comment
goldenboy820 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Well first the monsters should be some sort of being. Calling them innocence dosent give the reader a clear idea of what the monsters actually are.Some examples are "innocence-joy witch" or "the innocence herald of despair".Get it?(Btw if you do listen to me then you should also call the cares innocent:makes it easier.)Well first the monsters should be some sort of being. Calling them innocence dosent give the reader a clear idea of what the monsters actually are.Some examples are "innocence-joy witch" or "the innocence herald of despair".Get it?(Btw if you do listen to me then you should also call the cards "innocent":makes it easier.) Link to comment
.Requiem Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Well I do get what you are saying. Well innocent seems to be plural as the innocence is something singluar. Link to comment
goldenboy820 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 Yes.I also just noticed there are no spells and traps up here. I can help out, if you want... Link to comment
.Requiem Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 I am currently making 1 support card, it will be up soon. You can PM me any ideas you want. Link to comment
goldenboy820 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 K.But it will have to wait, I am updating my thread right now.(Btw read my Megaancient sun cards and trinity cards in the written section.) Link to comment
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