Luna Lovegood Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 "Izani, Warrior Lady's" you control. If this card is the target of an attack, roll a 6-sided die 3 times. Add the numbers rolled in order to activate 1 of the following effects:3-7: Destroy all cards on the field.8-10: Your opponent draws 3 cards and discards 2.11: Destroy all cards your opponent controls.12-15: Destroy all cards you control except this card. This card gains 2000 ATK and DEF.16-18: Role a fourth die. Add the number rolled the the current total.19-20: Your opponent must discard their entire hand.21-22: Your opponent names 2 random names, 1 of which is an athlete, the other of which is not. Guess which one is the Athlete. If you guess correctly, your opponent must remove from play they control. If you guess incorrectly, your opponent must select 1 card you control and remove it from play.22: Flip a coin and have your opponent guess heads or tails. If he/she guesses it correctly, you lose the duel. If he calls it incorrectly, you win the duel.23-24: This card gains 2000 ATK and loses 2000 DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 make it a 1 time dice roll. There would be no way for anybody to ever read that card if it was real. P.S.: not many members like normal cards. i dont have a problem with it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 The normal monster is just for a ribute for this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted March 25, 2009 Report Share Posted March 25, 2009 The normal monster is just for a ribute for this one.people will still bash you for it though. like i said. i have no problem with normal monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Thanks for the comment, but I like it Normal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Nice and I see why you put up a villan but too much of an effect try 2 dies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Thanks for the comment' date=' but I like it Normal[/quote']i'm not bashing the card if thats how it's coming across. I actually like them, but i still you should lower the amount of dice rolls on the other card because it would never be readable. Know what im saying? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Well, yes, but this way, it can really be a risk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Well' date=' yes, but this way, it can really be a risk[/quote']YOU CANT READ IT THOUGH. make it 4 choices AT MOST anything else is virtually unreadable on a card. If you look at a card and can't read it, either you're a bad speller or there's to much text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 These cards do not have the proper text adjustment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 These cards do not have the proper text adjustment.Can you read this.text adjustment can't fix something with really tiny text if it has 10 lines in a small space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 3 "Izani, Warrior Lady's". If this card is the target of an attacked, roll a die 3 times. The combined total of the three numbers determines what happens nextAdd the numbers rolled in order to activate 1 of the following effects:3-7: Destroy all cards on the field.8-10: Your opponent draws 3 cards and discards 2.11: Destroy all cards your opponent controls.12-15: Destroy all cards you control except this card. This card gains 2000 ATK and DEF.16-18: Role a fourth die. Add the number rolled the the current total.19-20: Your opponent must discard their entire hand.21-22: Your opponent names 2 random names, 1 of which is an athlete, the other of which is not. Guess which one is the Athlete. If you guess correctly, your opponent must remove from play 1 card on his/her side of the field. If you guess incorrectly, your opponent must select 1 card on your side of the field and remove it from play.22: Flip a coin and have your opponent guess heads or tails. If he/she guesses it correctly, you lose the duel. If he calls it incorrectly, you win the duel.23-24: This card gains 2000 ATK and loses 2000 DEF.I think that is right. However, this card is not realistic. I think it should go under Any other Cards. But not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Thanks +rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 "Izani, Warrior Lady's" you control. If this card is the target of an attack, roll a 6-sided die 3 times. Add the numbers rolled in order to activate 1 of the following effects:3-7: Destroy all cards on the field.8-10: Your opponent draws 3 cards and discards 2.11: Destroy all cards your opponent controls.12-15: Destroy all cards you control except this card. This card gains 2000 ATK and DEF.16-18: Role a fourth die. Add the number rolled the the current total.19-20: Your opponent must discard their entire hand.21-22: Your opponent names 2 random names, 1 of which is an athlete, the other of which is not. Guess which one is the Athlete. If you guess correctly, your opponent must remove from play they control. If you guess incorrectly, your opponent must select 1 card you control and remove it from play.22: Flip a coin and have your opponent guess heads or tails. If he/she guesses it correctly, you lose the duel. If he calls it incorrectly, you win the duel.23-24: This card gains 2000 ATK and loses 2000 DEF. This should be correct, I don't like this card. Well more correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madfreeman501 Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 wow the idea is pretty cool but the text is a bit much but the pic really goes well with the theme  sort out the txt and repost a excellent card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 +rep for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 I just capitalized tribute and fix'd the "side of the field" part you had. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Whatever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 I like how many people are trying to fix the OCG and aren't changing the "Role" on the 16-18 effect to "Roll." Seriously, what? The card is horrible. You just Tributed 3 Level 6 Normal Monsters with 2000/2000. I have no idea how you managed to get 3 of them on the field, I couldn't name a single card that would help you do this. All of these crazy effects, and you can't do any of them until she's targetted as an attack? I would MUCH rather not attack her and draw into a card that can kill her off. There's nothing to worry about from a 1000 ATK monster that can't do anything without my (the opponent's) input. >_> The 21-22 is where I stopped believing this was anything serious. This is reinforced by the fact that rolling/accumulating a 22 will trigger both the 21~22 and 22 effects. You could guess the name of an athlete AND win the Duel with a [miscalled] coin flip! **** yeah! =D  1/10, not bothering with the OCG of a non-realistic card trying to pass by as one. =o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 What the hell is an athlete..?? An actual athlete..?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Athlete as in Athlete Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 thats pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Thanks. First good review his card got Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
•:Elonar:• Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Interesting idea, but WAY too much text, and this card is definetly not realistic. Plus there are a handful of spelling errors, which were already mentioned. Overall, not blown away, but not disgusted, 5/10Just move it to a different section Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Right, I'll do that, I'm obviously a mod, so can eqasily do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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