.Requiem Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 The Pure InnocenceThe Pure Innocence Well as my other Innocence cards Weren't that good, so I decided to improve the design. So tell me what to improve on or not. http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/8656/43681a.jpg' alt='43681a.jpg'>[/center]http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/9306/43681o.jpg' alt='43681o.jpg'>[/center]http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/1752/43681v.jpg' alt='43681v.jpg'>[/center]When this card is activated select 1 monster on the field. The select monster's name is treated as "Innocence - The Slave" and switches the Battle Position to Defense Position. If your opponent selects a monster you control as an attack target you can switch the attack to the selected monster. If the selected monster is destroyed by battle, remove this card from play and Special Summon 1 "Innocence" monster from your Deck with a Level equal to the Level of the selected monster. http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/457/43681.jpg' alt='43681.jpg'>http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/3975/43681x.jpg' alt='43681x.jpg'>[/center]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/8656/43681a.jpg' alt='43681a.jpg'>[/center]http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/457/43681.jpg' alt='43681.jpg'>[/center] If you control 1 "Innocence" monster you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, if this card destroys a monster by battle, put 3 Innocence Counters on this card (max. 4). If a monster you control is an attack target, you can remove 2 Innocence Counters from this card to negate the attack.If you control 1 "Innocence" monster you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, if this card destroys a monster by battle, put 3 Innocence Counters on this card (max. 4). If a monster you control is an attack target, you can remove 2 Innocence Counters from this card to negate the attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Wouldn't you be putting 1 counter on this card (The Innocence of Life) for each card on the field, not "any number" of counters? If there's a specification on number, it's not any amount. Still, it's better. There's a whole lot of potential for abuse. Turning your hand into field removal is cool stuff, and she's not so deadly that a field wipe wouldn't give your opponent recovery time. Still, I think the effect could be toned down a LITTLE. Just so that discarding a card frmo your hand gave her an Innocence Counter for each face-up "Innocence" monster you control, though it seems like the words ["Innocence" monster] were suddenly removed from the card. "...to put any number of Innocence Counters on this card for each...on the field." Lol what? I'll just be cool and assume you get a Counter for each Innocence monster you control. 9/10 The Despair Innocence is pretty mean. She can negate an effect when she comes out of the Graveyard (assuming she gains those Innocence Counters for each Spell/Trap when she's Summoned; that's not specified). Then she can transfer some counters over to her innocent friends for 500 Life Points when her low stats are abused. Another removal for The Innocence of Life? Or.... 8/10 The Joy Innocence is funny. You need some clauses about timing on these effects. Specifically: - When does she gain the Innocence Counters for each Innocence monster in your Graveyard? When she's summoned? Does she always hold a number of counters that reflects the number of Innocences in your Graveyard? - Do you remove a card on the field when there's enough of your opponent's cards that the ATK is brought back down to 0, or do you get to do it once per turn if her ATK is at 0? "Becoming" 0 sounds kind of weird, especially since it can be done repetetively. It's still a nice turn for these cards. The combination with The Despair Innocence is nifty, too. 9/10 The Spell Card is okay, and a useful turn for this little mini-Theme. It's not bad. 8/10 Good stuff. These were really bad at first, as I'm sure I mentioned once before. =P They got a lot better, for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Yes you have thanks for your input. Yea I knew the first version sucked, couldn't think of anything. So glad you like theses. I will take what you said into advice, I will work on them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Why won't people rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kizzfan911 Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Why won't people rate?I think they're good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 These cards are pretty good X-31. I like the Spell the most. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Well okay then thanks >_> anymore ratings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Question: Are you going to make more of these? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Yea, I got some cards I am going to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Well thats good because I think this would be a great set if you kept adding cards. Mostly Spell and Traps though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Where did you get the images? As for the cards themselves, 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Image credit is not needed. Funny enough I found all of theses on photobucket.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 BUMP I added 1 card >_> I think it is decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 hey is this the knew set we talked about any way insane if u were to work on them some more i basically agree everything with Skyson. Oh and by they way i think hes addicted to writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 He isn't he just gives in depths reviews. I prefer him if he did. Yes this is the new set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 yea kno im just impressed because every time he replies its deep and at least 2 paragraphs long lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Is that a bad thing? Well that is good, someone has to and also he points out things some people don't notice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 no its not bad.....ahhhh startin to spam........off topic any way u should keep gon with the set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 I like the new card. It still doesn't beat the first Spell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Well okay then thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Hey X, I see you changed your name....... 9.5/10 btw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 Yes I did......... Any reason? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plaguespreader Zombie Posted March 27, 2009 Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 I like these cards. But you need a little variety in the effects, perhaps a new spell or trap not focusing on tokens? Nonetheless, they are good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2009 lol I got an 8/10 >_> serious rating mean nothing. Well I am I just started this set >_> I am still making more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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