krey13 Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 tell me if u like my new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Use name capitalization: Dark Knight of Lightningwarrior= WarriorThe picture is a bit too pixellatedI don't see why it's a Tuner. It's already powerful by itselfOCG errors:"If this card is selected as an attack target, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the attack."Do NOT use language such as "u" for "you". Just follow my advice, and it would look a lot better.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krey13 Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Use name capitalization: Dark Knight of Lightningwarrior= WarriorThe picture is a bit too pixellatedI don't see why it's a Tuner. It's already powerful by itself 5/10i just dont cap my name on the card and im going to chang the tuner to effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Use name capitalization: Dark Knight of Lightningwarrior= WarriorThe picture is a bit too pixellatedI don't see why it's a Tuner. It's already powerful by itself 5/10 agreed..but still a good card....^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krey13 Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 here i did work on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Much better 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krey13 Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 thanks for the good ranks u guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 No need for a poll in such a thread.Fix more your OCG, please. In the card's name: "Dark Knight of Lightning"The lore has terrible OCG, so instead of bolding the errors, replace it completely by this: "If this card is attacked by one of your opponent's monsters, you may pay 1000 Life Points to cancel the attack." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krey13 Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 ok hows this yes i know the pic is relly bad and pixellatedMuch better 7/10[/quotelook at your dragon card its ATK and DEF r the same as blue eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 It's perfect! Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krey13 Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 thanks darkhedge Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Just two errors in the effect:may= cancancel= negate But that aside, it's better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Just two errors in the effect:may= cancancel= negate But that aside' date=' it's better![/quote']totaly agree with you Starly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonicwolf Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 the picture is the Lich King from World Of Warcraft Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Cool, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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