∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 [img]http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/3261/136478.jpg[/img] Card Lore [Spoiler=Click] "Spirit Chamber" + "Frozen Knight" This card cannot be Special Summoned, this card can only be Fusion Summoned. When this card is Fusion Summoned, select 1 monster in your opponent's control and place the selected monster in your hand. When the selected monster is in your hand, draw 4 cards from your Deck and decrease your Life Points by 2000. When this card is destroyed your opponent can Special Summon 1 monster card with a lower DEF than this card. [/Spoiler] Image Credit: http://nictey.deviantart.com/art/Death-Knight-105676523 http://s287.photobucket.com/albums/ll158/abortwolf/ NOTE: This is my first Fusion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 OCG filled, but for a first fusion, not bad. 7.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Filled=? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuki Shuheiwa Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Filled = So much text it's nearly unreadable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrickyPooBoy Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 The start of the card is a bit shaky. "This card cannot be Special Summoned, this card can only be Fusion Summoned." Should be "This card cannot be Summoned except by Fusion Summon." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 You dont need that start of the effect. The "this card cannot be Special Summoned". Just say "This card can only be Fusion Summoned". Other then that I think this card is a little Under powered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∑VÌl ÀNG€L Posted March 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Hmm, well I havn't made a card in a while, (thats why it says returning) so I guess I need to update on my OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted March 26, 2009 Report Share Posted March 26, 2009 Yeah just look at the Gammer / OCG Thread and you'll get what you had back but maybe a little better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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