miker3 Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Hi guys this is my first attempt at a hand drawn card.Pls correct me on ocg and help me to make it a better card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 Props for making your own image (though it doesn't look like a Dragon IMO). ^_^ Kinda overpowered though; your opponent would be unable to protect his/her life points from battle damage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skaj Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 OCG is pretty much fine.. I think... here's my attempt to fix anything and maybe spelling? Haha. I'm sure it was an honest mistake.If this card attacks a Defense Position monster your opponent controls, it can attack once again during this Battle Phase. I do think it's a bit overpowered, so I would change it to something like... If this card destroys a Defense Position monster your opponent controls, it can attack 1 more monster once again in a row. Just so it isn't so overpowered and it can't attack directly with the mombo 2800 ATK points it has. The artwork:I myself am a creator and I only use my card art for my cards.. unless of course I add an older card to a set I make then I will take the original picture from the card, but even then, I like to make Alternate Artworks. Got one made out for Change of Heart, looks badass man! Anyway, I think it's not a Best Artwork piece, only because, and let me explain, Yugioh tends to use digital art, your medium was of colored pencils, and that doesn't seem to realistic. It looks somewhat like a dragon, but it doesn't really have to even, I mean, look at Phantom Dragon, it looks like a fiend. Try tightening up your lines, not making it so "Sketchy" and the color themes, use different colors for the backgrounds than the actual monster, sometimes it clashes, especially when using colored pencils. It needs more detail, that just says a lot right there. Shading tech's, muscle lines, or wrinkles make a HUGE difference, definitely when drawing dragons. I have done a number of pieces on them, and I can tell you, they are hard to get looking great. Keep working on it though because it is hard to make artwork that people actually like, BUT if you aren't worried about that, then just make it for yourself, that's what I do. If you're happy with it, then f**k everyone else. You know what I'm saying? Haha. Anyway, it's a very good attempt, even for a dragon, and do keep drawing for your cards, eventually they'll look badass. Some digi art programs I recommend that are free are Artweaver, Gimp, and even MS Paint (you can do a whole lot in there, you just have to have patience and time). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andre007 Posted March 28, 2009 Report Share Posted March 28, 2009 its pretty good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted March 29, 2009 Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 Not a bad job. I really like it. I can't figure out what it is, other than a dragon. It kinda looks like it is in a dress. Going for something like AFD? Anyways, good job. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miker3 Posted March 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2009 thx for the replys i think i will get ms paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Get GIMP. Google it, and I think it should be the first thing that comes up. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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