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[align=center]This contest looks at 3 categories:

[1] Cards ／ [2] A Compiled Deck ／ [3] A well thought out character

 

with these three things in perfect balance, you can win this contest and take a place in my Fan Fiction, Transcending Caliginosity, which i will be updating soon. The reason for the contest is that i will be needing new characters, which i will add into the storyline sporadically, and i would like to involve the members of out forum in my fan fic to make it as realistic as possible.

 

Written cards are accepted in this contest.

 

[spoiler=[b]Guidlines[/b]]

[1] Cards

to get a high score in this category, you need to adhere to this point system:

• Concept. your cards need to be something new. you can add cards you have already created or cards that are brand new just for this contest. The cards must be custom from this site. [5/10]

• Presentation. you need to have your cards looking pretty. i will be adding the cards into the fan fic, so if you want your card to be known to be yours, you should have it written on the card. it should have good art, though that is the least of my worries. However, if you have a good idea that is written and you wish to enter in this contest, please do. just give a description of the monster. [5/10]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

to get a high score in this category, you need to adhere to this point system:

• A balanced deck. you can add as many cards as you want into it, it just has to be realistic, ie. no more than 3 of any particular card. you can add real cards into your deck to enhance the realisticness of your deck. in this regard, your real cards must adhere to Advanced Format Limited/Banned Lists. [7/10]

• A theme. it would be nice if you told me the theme you wanted to go for, like telling me the overall strategy of the deck. try to have all your cards fit together in a nice blend. [3/10]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

to get a high score in this category, you need to adhere to this point system:

• Name. Something realistic, but isnt too common. please no Joes or Sallys. no "first name only" creations either. just a name. [1/10]

• Appearance. tell me what s/he looks like. what they like to wear, what accessories they have, etc.[1/10]

• Description. tell me how they think and act. tell me how they get along with others. tell me what their hobbies are. tell me how the like to Duel, etc. [2/10]

• Backstory. Tel me how they got to the present, any struggles they had, how they acquired their cards, why they think the way they do, etc. no future concepts, leave that to me. [6/10]

 

Total

[30/30]

 

The member with the best score will be placed on top, and the following members will be ranked one step lower, in a row. In the event of a tie, i will decide who's presentation is better based on: • Whether or not i like the concept of the Deck / Character submitted. • How easy of a time i had with viewing the submitted entry. So make it look better than a thrown together entry. Spoilers are nice, just not too many, okay?

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Prizes[/b]]

[1] 2+reps and his/her character added to my fic, Transcending Caliginosity.

[2] 1+rep + 500 points, and his/her character added to my fic.

[3] 500 points, and his/her character added to my fic.

[4▼] i will choose if their character will be added to my fic.

 

 

 

 

Newly Added Rules

[1] You can edit, update, or change anything in your entry as much as you like. i just ask that you keep it all in the same post, the original one that you posted with it, and that when you do update your entry that you tell me so.

[2] I changed my mind a little on the presentation: i want you to give a written style of all of your cards. for monsters that means their Name, Attribute, ATK/DEF, Level, and Effect. For Spell and Traps, please include the Name, Type, and Effect. here is a code for what i would like:

[spoiler=Codes]

for monsters:

[place name here]
[copy this • and paste it here to represent the level]
[in all CAPS write the Attribute here.]
[Type is written here]
[ATK/DEF here]
Now write the effect here.


for spells and traps:

[place name here]
[place type here, (normal, continuous, etc)]
now write the effect here.

 

thank you for changing you format for this. sorry for the inconvenience.

 

 

 

 

End Date

2009.5.2

That is one month from today. Judging will take place no later than:

2009.5.9

One week from the end date.

 

 

Contestants

 

:Completed:

Aelsthla-Mental

Kastor

Nitton

Ƨőųł~ɸ~Ƒĭɍҿ

Cyber_Ice

Xander Royce

wildfire5 + Fix

X-L YEAHHHH!!!

sonicfan31

 

:Reserved:

tommers2008

 

 

 

Notices

[x] - 2009.4.2 - Added Contest

[x] - 2009.4.3 - 6 competitors join competition, one complete entry.

[x] - 2009.4.4 - Added New Rules!

[x] - 2009.4.7 - so far there are 7 competitors, 4 have a completed entry.

[x] - 2009.4.14 - so far there are 7 competitors, 5 have completed their entry. 2 weeks left!

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Woah, cool. Another contest by the amazing Kale!

 

Well, I won't bore you with the same cards/character as last time. Here is something (somewhat) new. I think i entered it in a different contest, but it should be fine (looks like one of those dead things that attention will never be paid to, so yeah...).

 

Name: Onika Bakar (Tell me if it's a little too 'out there')

 

Appearance: 18 years old. Dark brown skin (mother Greek, father African). Rather tall (about 210cm), has black hair and blue eyes. A wiry toughness and has small scars on his arms and his left leg, a large one on the right side, close to his ear from his forehead to his chin. He usually wears colors that blend with the environment, but if not available he'll wear a light blue shirt and jeans. The only trinket he usually wears is a small badge that is a single paper doll made of silver.

 

Description: Often blunt and to the point with people, dislikes working with others, sees most people as nothing more then obstacles and irritants. Despite this, he can grudgingly accept being in a team. His main hobby is exercise, usually going to a secluded place to do so. Although he occasionally practices on a piano and Duel Monsters. He usually duels harshly, showing no mercy and eliminating every one of his opponent's cards coldly. When his own cards get eliminated, he usually sighs and says 'I suppose he outlived his use, so let's see his replacement.' Usually the main people he respects are the ones who are capable of beyond-human abilities, even if they were used against him.

 

Backstory: His life started, alas, as an accident during a small battle. His mother Keres Melena was a medic sent to help the Africans from a revolt. She met an injured soldier called Azikiwe Abidemi at the medical camp with minor injuries, and it was "love" at first sight.

 

The war was over after weeks, but it was discovered that Keres was pregnant. She stayed with Azikiwe for a time, and when Onika was born, they argued over which traditions he should follow. In the end Keres went home and they improvised, the poor boy sent to Africa and back every few months or so to learn about both countries. It turned out to be a poor mix however, and he would be 'softened up' in Greece having an education then battered down in Africa learning to be a soldier. He may have been able to do both, but his parents not getting along didn't help his mental stability. In the end, before he broke, his father died from a vendetta-enraged man while he was in Africa, he was 15 years old.

 

However, he didn't go back to Greece, instead he continued training to fight, the only thing he kept doing to remember his mother was Duel Monster cards, a leisure at one point became all that remained of his other life.

 

Meanwhile, the force he was in was in trouble, it was larger then most of the others of the time, but when another riot broke out, guerilla tactics whittled down the amount of troops. Onika was disgusted for a time that so few men could wipe out superior numbers, but then started to respect it. In time, he started to go out on his own, managing to take on groups on his own through luck more then skill, not that he would admit it, and not without injuries.

 

In the end, the battle ended and Onika began to dislike this country for all it had done (his father's death, numerous wounds), he left without a word, managing to scrounge enough money to get a boat for parts unknown, looking look for a somewhat less violent job then a war zone...

 

[spoiler=Deck: Lone Battlers]

Signature Card(s): "Lone Battler, Warlord Michael"

Total Cards: 42

Deck List:

Monsters 20

Lone Battler, Yoxera (x2)

Lone Battler, Zycision

Lone Battler, Twastra (x2)

Lone Battler, Sustra (x3)

Lone Battler, Warlord Michael

Lone Battler, Tossroba

Lone Battler, Ragaber (x2)

Lone Battler, Diras

Lone Battler, Lone Ballter, Unstoda (x2)

Lone Battler, Kiramas (x3)

Lone Battler, Survivast (x2)

Spells 12

Kaiser Colosseum (Real Card)

Deceptive Revival

Lone Struggle

Strategic Backstab

Lone Stand

Thousand Slaughter

Crazed Rush

Lone Manipulation

Two as One (x2)

Lone Invasion (x2)

Traps 9

Dying Cry (x2)

Lone Matyr

Desperation Teamwork (x2)

Decimation Blow (x2)

Lone Mirage

Equal Tactics

 

 

 

Oh, and you don't need appearances for the spell/trap cards, right?

 

[spoiler=Card Names/Effects]

Lone Battler, Yoxera

Fiend

••••

WATER

1800/1800

If this is the only monster on your side of the field this monster gains 600 attack and defense, if there is another monster on your side of the field this monster loses 600 attack and defense.

 

App: A dark blue humanoid-shaped creature with piercing red eyes, it is made of what appears to be rushing water, it wields a large longsword made of the same material. The water in fact has massive pressure and can easily crush and destroy what apposes it.

 

Lone Battler, Zycision

Fiend

••••••

WIND

2450/1400

If this is the only monster on your side of the field this monster can attack all monsters on your opponents side of the field. If there is another monster on your side of the field this monster cannot declare an attack.

 

App: A wiry, tough tanned man wearing a thin, green outfit that allows easy movement. He wields twin katana's (about 70cm in length). Often he has a cocky expression and moves with immense speed.

 

Lone Battler, Twastra

Warrior

•••

EARTH

1500/300

If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, once per turn at the cost of 500 life points destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. If there is another monster(s) on your side of the field, none of your monsters may declare an attack. Once per turn, you may release one face-up monster on your side of the field to draw a card.

 

App: A monk-like figure wearing robes and a long staff made of wood. He is bald and a calm expression on his face.

 

Lone Battler, Sustra

Warrior

••

DARK

600/400

If this card is destroyed as a result of battle when it is the only monster on your side of the field, you can special summon one level 4 or less "Lone Battler" from your deck. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, destroy one monster on the field.

 

App: A robed man wielding a wicked curved dagger.

 

Lone Battler, Tossroba

Beast-Warrior

••••

FIRE

1900/1500

If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, once per turn you can inflict damage equal to half this card's original attack to your opponent's life points. If there is another monster on your side of the field, you must pay 500 life points during your standby phase. If not, this card is destroyed.

 

App: A massive (3 meters tall) grizzly-esque bear wearing a breastplate, it wield a massive (1.1 meters) club.

 

Lone Battler, Ragaber

Beast-Warrior

••••

EARTH

1750/100

If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If there is another monster on your side of the field, you can and must tribute this card to destroy one spell or trap card on the field.

 

App: A large orange with black stripes tiger with a fiery gaze and two blades attached to it's head.

 

Lone Battler, Diras

Warrior

•

WATER

200/100

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effect of all "Lone Battler" monsters (except this card). As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the attack of all "Lone Battler" monsters by 400. As long as you control another monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target.

 

App: A man wearing flowing robes and holding a scroll

 

Lone Battler, Unstoda

Warrior

•••••

LIGHT

2350/1550

If this card is the only monster on your side of the field and it declares an attack, negate all of your opponent's card effects until the end of the damage step. If there is another monster on your side of the field, you cannot activate spell or trap cards during your opponent's battle phase. If this card is destroyed by a card effect you control, Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase.

 

App: A paladin warrior with shiny armor covering his entire body except for eye-holes. And a large, glowing blade he wields in two hands.

 

Lone Battler, Kiramas

Warrior

••••

EARTH

1800/800

If this card is the only monster on your side of the field and this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, draw a card. If there is another monster on your side of the field, when this card is destroyed, your opponent draws two cards. When this card is destroyed, you can add one "Lone Battler" from your deck to your hand.

 

App: A demonic-looking figure (red eyes, light skin) in black armor wielding a scythe.

 

Lone Battler, Survivast

Spellcaster

•••

WATER

600/200

During your Standby Phase, if this card is face-up on the field, you can add one Continuous Spell or Trap from your graveyard to your hand. If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. If there is another monster on the field, this card cannot be destroyed by card effect and must be in face-up attack position.

 

App: A pale, almost ghostly figure with rags for clothes and a holster where he keeps several daggers.

 

Lone Battler, Warlord Michael

Warrior

•••••••••

LIGHT

3500/2400

This card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card can only be special summoned by releasing three "Lone Battler" monsters you control. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the controlling player is treated as only having one monster on the field for "Lone Battler" card effects, or effects that designate "Lone Battler" cards. When this card would be removed from the field by a card effect, you can send one "Lone Battler" monster you control to the bottom of your deck to negate the card effect and destroy it.

 

App: A man in simple armor, and average muscle size. Yet he exudes an aura that leads many to fear him, and he strikes with speed and power usually impossible for a human.

 

Deceptive Revival

Continuous Spell

Special Summon two "Lone Battler" monsters from your graveyard. When one of those cards are removed from the field, destroy this card. When this card is removed from the field, destroy the monsters special summoned by this effect.

*Note: This card would usually be overpowered yes, but don't forget Lone Battlers get negative effects when they have another monster out usually, so it sort of evens out (I hope).*

 

Lone Struggle

Quick-Play Spell

You can only activate this card while you have only one "Lone Battler" monster on your side of the field. Double that monster's attack until the end phase. After the end phase of the turn this card is activated, if the targeted monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, draw a a card.

 

Strategic Backstab

Continuous Spell

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, any monster on the field can attack a monster with the same controller. Whenever a monster on the owner's side of the field is destroyed by a monster they control, inflict 500 damage to the controller's opponent and draw a card.

 

Lone Stand

Equip Spell

You can only equip this card to a "Lone Battler" monster you control. As long as the equipped monster is the only monster on your side of the field, when the equipped monster is destroyed, Special Summon it and equip it with this card. During battle between the equipped attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When the equipped card declares an attack, destroy all other monsters you control and inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed.

 

Thousand Slaughter

Normal Spell

This card can only be activated when five "Lone Battler" monsters are on your side of the field, destroy all cards on your side of the field and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the destroyed cards x600. You cannot declare an attack during the turn this card is activated.

 

Crazed Rush

Normal Spell

This card can only be activated when you have only one "Lone Battler" monster on your side of the field. Activate one of the following abilities:

:the targeted monster can attack your opponent's life points directly this turn.

:destroy one Spell or Trap on the field, the selected monster cannot attack this turn.

 

Two As One

Continuous Spell

This card can only be activated when you have only one "Lone Battler" on your side of the field. Send one "Lone Battler" from your deck (Except "Lone Battler, Warlord Michael") to the graveyard, the targeted card get's the effect of the monster sent to the graveyard by this effect. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you cannot normal summon, flip summon or special summon.

 

Lone Manipulation

Quick-Play Spell

This card can only be activated when you have only one "Lone Battler" monster on your side of the field and your opponent has at least one monster on their side of the field, control of one of your opponent's monsters shifts to you. Then, send the "Lone Battler" monster to the bottom of your deck. After this effect resolves, your opponent must discard one Spell or Trap card from their hand to the graveyard.

 

Lone Invasion

Quick-Play Spell

"Lone Battler" monsters cannot be destroyed by card effects Until the end phase of the turn this card is activated. If this face-down card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon one level 6 or less "Lone Battler" monster from your deck.

 

Dying Cry

Normal Trap

This card can only be activated while you have only one "Lone Battler" on your side of the field and it is destroyed. Special Summon one level 4 or less "Lone Battler" monster from your deck.

 

Lone Martyr

Continuous Trap

You can only activate this card when you have no monsters on your side of the field. special summon one "Lone Battler" monster from your graveyard. When the monster special summoned by this effect would be destroyed, destroy this card instead and remove one "Lone Battler" in your graveyard from play.

 

Desperation Teamwork

Continuous Trap

You can only activate this card while you have 1000 life points or less. Special summon one "Lone Battler" from your deck. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all "Lone Battler" monsters have their effects treated as if they were the only monster on your side of the field, and any Spell Cards that can only be activated if only one Lone Battler is on the field can be activated regardless of conditions.

 

Decimation Blow

Counter Trap

You can only activate this card when a "Lone Battler" would be effected by a card effect controlled by your opponent. negate the card effect and destroy it, then destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Lone Mirage

Normal Trap

You can only activate this effect while you control only one "Lone Battler" monster. Special summon one "Lone Mirage" token (4/?/?). The token's attack, defense, Type, Attribute and Effect is the same as the "Lone Battler" monster you had on the field when you activated this card. the "Lone Mirage" Token doesn't count as being on the field for a "Lone Battler" card effect or a card that involves "Lone Battler" monsters. Also, this card's effect is always treated as if it is the only monster on he field.

 

Equal Tactics

Continuous Trap

If you have more then one monster on your side of the field, negate this effect. As long as your opponent has more then one monster on the field, negate your opponent's monster card effects.

 

 

 

 

The main tactic is beatdown with a dash of burn and field control. The main weakness is that they only work well alone (a couple of exceptions) and are usually vulnerable to swarm with a card removal or two. I suppose despite the flaw I tried to put in, it might have an OPed card or two still... We'll see I guess.

 

Well, hope you like it and good luck with your contest!

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I will gladly join.

 

Will post my character when I come home from vacation on monday. It is possible that I can make it before that' date=' but i hope it will be ok.

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thank you for your reservation, your name is on the list. ;)

 

Entry reserved..!!!

 

wow' date=' thanks! :D your name, too, is on the list.

 

Woah, cool. Another contest by the amazing Kale!

 

Well, I won't bore you with the same cards/character as last time. Here is something (somewhat) new. I think i entered it in a different contest, but it should be fine (looks like one of those dead things that attention will never be paid to, so yeah...).

 

Name: Onika Bakar (Tell me if it's a little too 'out there')

 

Appearance: 18 years old. Dark brown skin (mother Greek, father African). Rather tall (about 210cm), has black hair and blue eyes. A wiry toughness and has small scars on his arms and his left leg, a large one on the right side, close to his ear from his forehead to his chin. He usually wears colors that blend with the environment, but if not available he'll wear a light blue shirt and jeans. The only trinket he usually wears is a small badge that is a single paper doll made of silver.

 

Description: Often blunt and to the point with people, dislikes working with others, sees most people as nothing more then obstacles and irritants. Despite this, he can grudgingly accept being in a team. His main hobby is exercise, usually going to a secluded place to do so. Although he occasionally practices on a piano and Duel Monsters. He usually duels harshly, showing no mercy and eliminating every one of his opponent's cards coldly. When his own cards get eliminated, he usually sighs and says 'I suppose he outlived his use, so let's see his replacement.' Usually the main people he respects are the ones who are capable of beyond-human abilities, even if they were used against him.

 

Backstory: His life started, alas, as an accident during a small battle. His mother Keres Melena was a medic sent to help the Africans from a revolt. She met an injured soldier called Azikiwe Abidemi at the medical camp with minor injuries, and it was "love" at first sight.

 

The war was over after weeks, but it was discovered that Keres was pregnant. She stayed with Azikiwe for a time, and when Onika was born, they argued over which traditions he should follow. In the end Keres went home and they improvised, the poor boy sent to Africa and back every few months or so to learn about both countries. It turned out to be a poor mix however, and he would be 'softened up' in Greece having an education then battered down in Africa learning to be a soldier. He may have been able to do both, but his parents not getting along didn't help his mental stability. In the end, before he broke, his father died from a vendetta-enraged man while he was in Africa, he was 15 years old.

 

However, he didn't go back to Greece, instead he continued training to fight, the only thing he kept doing to remember his mother was Duel Monster cards, a leisure at one point became all that remained of his other life.

 

Meanwhile, the force he was in was in trouble, it was larger then most of the others of the time, but when another riot broke out, guerilla tactics whittled down the amount of troops. Onika was disgusted for a time that so few men could wipe out superior numbers, but then started to respect it. In time, he started to go out on his own, managing to take on groups on his own through luck more then skill, not that he would admit it, and not without injuries.

 

In the end, the battle ended and Onika began to dislike this country for all it had done (his father's death, numerous wounds), he left without a word, managing to get a boat for parts unknown, to look for a somewhat less violent job then a war zone...

 

[spoiler=Deck: Lone Battlers]

Signature Card(s): "Lone Battler, Warlord Michael"

Deck List:

Monsters 20

Lone Battler, Yoxera (x2)

Lone Battler, Zycision

Lone Battler, Twastra (x2)

Lone Battler, Sustra (x3)

Lone Battler, Warlord Michael

Lone Battler, Tossroba

Lone Battler, Ragaber (x2)

Lone Battler, Diras

Lone Battler, Lone Ballter, Unstoda (x2)

Lone Battler, Kiramas (x3)

Lone Battler, Survivast (x2)

Spells 12

Lone Struggle

Strategic Backstab

Lone Stand (x2)

Thousand Slaughter

Crazed Rush

Lone Manipulation

Two as One (x2)

Lone Invasion (x2)

Lone Pillager

Traps 8

Dying Cry (x2)

Lone Matyr

Desperation Teamwork (x2)

Decimation Blow (x2)

Lone Mirage

 

 

 

Oh, and you don't need appearances for the spell/trap cards, right?

[spoiler=Card Effects/Description]

Lone Battler, Yoxera

Water

Fiend

Level 4

Att: 1800

Def: 1800

Eff: if this is the only monster on your side of the field this monster gains 600 attack and defense, if there is another monster on your side of the field this monster loses 600 attack and defense.

App: A dark blue humanoid-shaped creature with piercing red eyes, it is made of what appears to be rushing water, it wields a large longsword made of the same material. The water in fact has massive pressure and can easily crush and destroy what apposes it.

 

Lone Battler, Zycision

Wind

Warrior

Level 6

Att: 2450

Def: 1400

Eff: if this is the only monster on your side of the field this monster can attack all monsters on your opponents side of the field. If there is another monster on your side of the field this monster cannot declare an attack.

App: A wiry, tough tanned man wearing a thin, green outfit that allows easy movement. He wields twin katana's (about 70cm in length). Often he has a cocky expression and moves with immense speed.

 

Lone Battler, Twastra

Earth

Warrior

level 3

Att: 1500

Def: 300

Eff: If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, once per turn at the cost of 500 life points destroy 1 Spell or Trap card on the field. If there is another monster(s) on your side of the field, none of your monsters may declare an attack. Once per turn, you may tribute one face-up monster on your side of the field to draw a card.

App: A monk-like figure wearing robes and a long staff made of wood. He is bald and a calm expression on his face.

 

Lone Battler, Sustra

Dark

Warrior

Level 2

Att: 600

Def: 400

Eff: If this card is destroyed as a result of battle when it is the only monster on your side of the field, you can special summon one level 4 or less "Lone Battler" from your deck.

App: A robed man wielding a wicked curved dagger.

 

Lone Battler, Tossroba

Fire

Beast-Warrior

Level 4

Att: 1900

Def: 1500

Eff: If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, once per turn you can inflict damage equal to half this card's original attack to your opponent's life points. If there is another monster on your side of the field, you must pay 500 life points during your standby phase. If not, this card is destroyed.

App: A massive (3 meters tall) grizzly-esque bear wearing a breastplate, it wield a massive (1.1 meters) club.

 

Lone Battler, Ragaber

Earth

Beast-Warrior

Level 4

Att: 1750

Def: 100

Eff: If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If there is another monster on your side of the field, you can and must tribute this card to destroy one spell or trap card on the field.

App: A large orange with black stripes tiger with a fiery gaze and two blades attached to it's head.

 

Lone Battler, Diras

Water

Warrior

Level 1

Att: 200

Def: 100

Eff: As long as this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effect of all "Lone Battler" monsters (except this card). As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the attack of all "Lone Battler" monsters by 400. As long as you control another monster, this card cannot be selected as an attack target.

App: A man wearing flowing robes and holding a scroll

 

Lone Battler, Unstoda

Light

Warrior

Level 5

Att: 2350

Def: 1550

Eff: If this card is the only monster on your side of the field and it declares an attack, negate all of your opponent's card effects until the end of the damage step. If there is another monster on your side of the field, you cannot activate spell or trap cards during your opponent's battle phase.

App: A paladin warrior with shiny armor covering his entire body except for eye-holes. And a large, glowing blade he wields in two hands.

 

Lone Battler, Kiramas

Earth

Warrior

Level 4

Att: 1800

Def: 800

Eff: If this card is the only monster on your side of the field and this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, draw a card. If there is another monster on your side of the field, when this card is destroyed, your opponent draws two cards. When this card is destroyed, you can add one "Lone Battler" from your deck to your hand.

App: A demonic-looking figure (red eyes, light skin) in black armor wielding a scythe.

 

Lone Battler, Survivast

Water

Spellcaster

Level 3

Att: 600

Def: 200

Eff: If this card is the only monster on your side of the field, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. If there is another monster on the field, this card cannot be destroyed by card effect and must be in face-up attack position.

App: A pale, almost ghostly figure with rags for clothes and a holster where he keeps several daggers.

 

Lone Battler, Warlord Michael

Light

Level 9

Att: 3500

Def: 2400

Eff: This card cannot be normal summoned or set, this card can only be special summoned by tributing four "Lone Battler" monsters. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the controlling player is treated as only having one monster on the field for "Lone Battler" card effects, or effects that designate "Lone Battler" cards. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, increase this card's attack equal to half the destroyed monsters.

App: A man in simple armor, and average muscle size. Yet he exudes an aura that leads many to fear him, and he strikes with speed and power usually impossible for a human.

 

Lone Struggle

Quick-Play Spell

You can only activate this card while you have only one "Lone Battler" monster on your side of the field. Double that monster's attack until the end phase. After your end phase, if the targeted monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, draw a a card.

 

Thousand Slaughter

Normal Spell

This card can only be activated when five "Lone Battler" monsters are on your side of the field, destroy all cards on your side of the field and inflict damageto your opponent's Life Points equal to the destroyed cards x600. You cannot declare an attack during the turn this card is activated.

 

Crazed Rush

Normal Spell

This card can only be activated when you have only one "Lone Battler" monster on your side of the field. Activate one of the following abilities:

:the targeted monster can attack your opponent's life points directly this turn.

:destroy one Spell or Trap on the field, the selected monster cannot attack this turn.

 

Two As One

Continuous Spell

This card can only be activated when you have only one "Lone Battler" on your side of the field. Send one "Lone Battler" from your deck (Except "Lone Battler, Warlord Michael") to the graveyard, the targeted card get's the effect of the monster sent to the graveyard by this effect. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you cannot normal summon, flip summon or special summon.

 

Lone Manipulation

Quick-Play Spell

This card can only be activated when you have only one "Lone Battler" monster on your side of the field and your opponent has at least one monster on their side of the field, control of one of your opponent's monsters shifts to you. Then, send the "Lone Battler" monster to the bottom of your deck. After this effect resolves, your opponent must discard one Spell or Trap card from their hand to the graveyard.

 

Lone Pillager

Continuous Spell

Pay 500 Life Points during your standby phase, if not, this card is destroyed. As long as this card remains face-up on the field and you only have one "Lone Battler" on your side of the field, when a "Lone Battler" destroys a monster as a result of battle, increase your life points equal to half the destroyed monster's attack, and your opponent has to discard one card from their hand to the graveyard.

 

Lone Invasion

Quick-Play Spell

"Lone Battler" monsters cannot be destroyed by card effects Until the end phase of the turn this card is activated. If this face-down card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon one level 6 or less "Lone Battler" monster from your deck.

 

Dying Cry

Normal Trap

This card can only be activated while you have only one "Lone Battler" on your side of the field and it is destroyed. Special Summon one level 4 or less "Lone Battler" monster from your deck.

 

Lone Matyr

Continuous Trap

You can only activate this card when you have no monsters on your side of the field. special summon one "Lone Battler" monster from your graveyard. When the monster special summoned by this effect would be destroyed, destroy this card instead and remove one "Lone Battler" in your graveyard from play.

 

Desperation Teamwork

Continuous Trap

You can only activate this card while you have 1000 life points or less. Special summon one "Lone Battler" from your deck. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all "Lone Battler" monsters have their effects treated as if they were the only monster on your side of the field, and any Spell Cards that can only be activated if only one Lone Battler is on the field can be activated regardless of conditions.

 

Decimation Blow

Counter Trap

You can only activate this card when a "Lone Battler" would be effected by a card effect controlled by your opponent. negate the card effect and destroy it, then destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field.

 

Lone Mirage

Normal Trap

You can only activate this effect while you control only one "Lone Battler" monster. Special summon one "Lone Mirage" token (4/?/?). The token's attack, defense, Type, Attribute and Effect is the same as the "Lone Battler" monster you had on the field when you activated this card. the "Lone Mirage" Token doesn't count as being on the field for a "Lone Battler" card effect or a card that involves "Lone Battler" monsters.

 

 

 

 

The main tactic is beatdown with a dash of burn and field control. The main weakness is that they only work well alone (a couple of exceptions) and are usually vulnerable to swarm with a card removal or two. I suppose despite the flaw I tried to put in, it might have an OPed card or two still... We'll see I guess.

 

Well, hope you like it and good luck with your contest!

 

Holy Moley, an entry already? Well, i wouldnt expect less from you Aelsthla-Mental.. :D you are always very prompt and go all the way with everything you do.. i see you got about 20 new reps since i last saw you. ;)

 

anywho, thanks for submitting your entry! i will rate it at the end of the contest, so that others dont become discouraged at what your result might be. ;) i glanced over your monsters, and i thought that this idea was really quite good. ;) thank you for following all the steps. if i see something that needs to be fixed, i will let you know; i dont think that will be necessary though. :D

 

 

Anyone else want to be included? please reserve your entry, so i can estimate how many people will enter..

 

thank you all. :D

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Dude I am so in. I just made a new set. Its gonna be tight!

Man. . . I'm so pumped!!!!

 

I'll enter.

 

Name: Garett Greyson

 

Appearance: Garett is 15 years. About 5' 5'' and a little stubby. He has really big brown hair and tan skin. He wears black pants with various pockets, and always carries around an I- Pod Touch®. He wears a light blue shirt with white stripes and a couple of symbols that symbolize a mech with a gun pointing out. He has ligh- brown eyes and a hard- to- get face. He makes a lot of friens, but is sometimes mean and destructive. He always wears his black and grey headphones and are at maximum volume at all time, even in class.

 

Description: Garett is usually friend and walks with a high- school swag. He always tries to keep his friends colse, but he can't help to think he doesn't need them. He blocks out the noises around him by wearing his headphones and putting on heavy metal at full volume. Garett isa straightforward thinker and is usually smart. In class, he gets almost perfect grades and all the teachers love him. He usually plays Duel Monsters but sometimes plays football with his friends. He likes to duel in a violent style, always matching his monsters moovements. He is one of the few people that actually can destroy the battlefield when he is done dueling.

 

Backstory: When Garett was born, his father had run away at how interesting his son looked. While he was growing up, he thought of all people like his father and tried to avoid him. At the start of Middle School, his first friend talked to him. He was so duprised at how interesting the situation was, and started to talk. He found out how fun having friends could be, and then opened up a little. He started getting more friends, and his techers like him a bit more. When he first got a Deck for the first time, he was interested at how his friends dueled, and started learning. He plays with a machine like duel disk now that extendeds a long way and is a fan of Yusei Fudo. He wants to be like him, but sometimes, he can't undestand his morals.

 

Deck: Armored Core

[spoiler=Small Description] Garett plays an armored core Deck. I got the Idea when I saw the Iron Core of Core Chimair and twisted it around. I have not yet finished, but I will update this deck when I can. I have about 12- 14 cards at the moment. In the creator part, I put Metal Raven because thats going to be my new name.

 

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Ok, so thats all I have right now. But As I said, I will update every day or so, I might update in a couple of minutes/hours. But now you know. Image Credit: Photobucket Find.

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20 reps? I suppose it has been a while... Such a pity, your fanfic have been missed. Your older and new one.

 

It was a tad quick, wasn't it? I'll probably tweak it around a bit though, I realized despite what I said about making a new characte his 'family problem' was somewhat similar to the last one... Perhaps different enough, I don't know.

 

And perhaps the cards need longer effects! They really get you places...

 

Yay! More people!

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Dude I am so in. I just made a new set. Its gonna be tight!

Man. . . I'm so pumped!!!!

 

I'll enter.

 

Name: Garett Greyson

 

Appearance: Garett is 15 years. About 5' 5'' and a little stubby. He has really big brown hair and tan skin. He wears black pants with various pockets' date=' and always carries around an I- Pod Touch®. He wears a light blue shirt with white stripes and a couple of symbols that symbolize a mech with a gun pointing out. He has ligh- brown eyes and a hard- to- get face. He makes a lot of friens, but is sometimes mean and destructive. He always wears his black and grey headphones and are at maximum volume at all time, even in class.

 

Description: Garett is usually friend and walks with a high- school swag. He always tries to keep his friends colse, but he can't help to think he doesn't need them. He blocks out the noises around him by wearing his headphones and putting on heavy metal at full volume. Garett isa straightforward thinker and is usually smart. In class, he gets almost perfect grades and all the teachers love him. He usually plays Duel Monsters but sometimes plays football with his friends. He likes to duel in a violent style, always matching his monsters moovements. He is one of the few people that actually can destroy the battlefield when he is done dueling.

 

Backstory: When Garett was born, his father had run away at how interesting his son looked. While he was growing up, he thought of all people like his father and tried to avoid him. At the start of Middle School, his first friend talked to him. He was so duprised at how interesting the situation was, and started to talk. He found out how fun having friends could be, and then opened up a little. He started getting more friends, and his techers like him a bit more. When he first got a Deck for the first time, he was interested at how his friends dueled, and started learning. He plays with a machine like duel disk now that extendeds a long way and is a fan of Yusei Fudo. He wants to be like him, but sometimes, he can't undestand his morals.

 

Deck: Armored Core

[spoiler=Small Description'] Garett plays an armored core Deck. I got the Idea when I saw the Iron Core of Core Chimair and twisted it around. I have not yet finished, but I will update this deck when I can. I have about 12- 14 cards at the moment. In the creator part, I put Metal Raven because thats going to be my new name.

 

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Ok, so thats all I have right now. But As I said, I will update every day or so, I might update in a couple of minutes/hours. But now you know. Image Credit: Photobucket Find.

 

alrighty, first thing i would like is a written style to all of the cards, i need to write that at the top.. sorries. :) that would be easier for my fan fic.. plus i cant read some of them, like your Assault Mode version monster. you also need a decklist, but i know you said you werent finished. that is fine, you can edit anything you want until the end. i should write that too..

thanks for entering! added to list.

 

20 reps? I suppose it has been a while... Such a pity' date=' your fanfic have been missed. Your older and new one.

 

It was a tad quick, wasn't it? I'll probably tweak it around a bit though, I realized despite what I said about making a new characte his 'family problem' was somewhat similar to the last one... Perhaps different enough, I don't know.

 

And perhaps the cards need longer effects! They really get you places...

 

Yay! More people!

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well, feel free to fix anything you want, like i told Alph. ;)

 

I'm so in

 

I can post my character but the cards aren't done.

 

thats fine' date=' you have a month. :D just be sure to add them to the same post, and tell me when you have added new stuff.

 

Hey, Aesthla, your cards are good! I really like em. Your sure to get something better.

 

wow, nice comments between competitors already! :D

 

*blinks* Oh hey Alph' date=' your reputation precedes (that the right word?) you!

 

Nice to see you entering this contest.

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no no no, its nice to have the both of you entering. ;) i like participants to my events.

 

I know. . . I don't really get what you mean in your first line. But' date=' Oh well, not hat smart, see. . . And well. . . Nice to see you entering too.

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lulz. :D

 

:ENTRY RESERVED:

 

cool, thank you! added to list. ;)

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Ok, Kale. I'll get the written Versions in a cople of minutes.

Dude I am so in. I just made a new set. Its gonna be tight!

Man. . . I'm so pumped!!!!

 

I'll enter.

 

Name: Garett Greyson

 

Appearance: Garett is 15 years. About 5' 5'' and a little stubby. He has really big brown hair and tan skin. He wears black pants with various pockets' date=' and always carries around an I- Pod Touch®. He wears a light blue shirt with white stripes and a couple of symbols that symbolize a mech with a gun pointing out. He has ligh- brown eyes and a hard- to- get face. He makes a lot of friens, but is sometimes mean and destructive. He always wears his black and grey headphones and are at maximum volume at all time, even in class.

 

Description: Garett is usually friend and walks with a high- school swag. He always tries to keep his friends colse, but he can't help to think he doesn't need them. He blocks out the noises around him by wearing his headphones and putting on heavy metal at full volume. Garett isa straightforward thinker and is usually smart. In class, he gets almost perfect grades and all the teachers love him. He usually plays Duel Monsters but sometimes plays football with his friends. He likes to duel in a violent style, always matching his monsters moovements. He is one of the few people that actually can destroy the battlefield when he is done dueling. When he duels, and he is ready to Summon his DS monster, he uses this phrase: 'From the Flames of Hell Came This Force, Destroyin All At Its Will!' When his cards are destroyed, he ususally says: '*Sigh* I really need that, now that you took it, I'm mad!'

 

Backstory: When Garett was born, his father had run away at how interesting his son looked. While he was growing up, he thought of all people like his father and tried to avoid him. At the start of Middle School, his first friend talked to him. He was so duprised at how interesting the situation was, and started to talk. He found out how fun having friends could be, and then opened up a little. He started getting more friends, and his techers like him a bit more. When he first got a Deck for the first time, he was interested at how his friends dueled, and started learning. He plays with a machine like duel disk now that extendeds a long way and is a fan of Yusei Fudo. He wants to be like him, but sometimes, he can't undestand his morals.

 

Deck: Armored Core

[spoiler=Small Description'] Garett plays an armored core Deck. I got the Idea when I saw the Iron Core of Core Chimair and twisted it around. I have not yet finished, but I will update this deck when I can. I have about 12- 14 cards at the moment. In the creator part, I put Metal Raven because thats going to be my new name.

 

[spoiler=Deck]

Monster Cards

x2 Armored Core- Greyling the Rookie

x3 Armored Core- Tank the Core Shield

x1 Armored Core- Dilator the Big Gun

x2 Armored Core- Anti the Distorter

x2 Armored Core- Mystron the Heavy Weapon

x2 Armored Core- Core the Combiner

x1 Armored Core- Shune the Light

x1 Armored Core- Shune the Light/Assault

x1 Armored Core- Sheyu the Dark

x3 Armored Core- Grandios the Big

x1 Armored Core- Demik the Toolman

x2 Armored Core- Lazer the Shooter

x2 Armored Core- Descra the Swordsman

x3 Armored Core- Deci the Executor

x3 Armored Core- Reckla the Shine

x2 Armored Core- Fira the Flame

x2 Jade Knight (Real)

x1 Great Battlefortress of Armored Core

x2 Black Salvo (Real)

 

Spell Cards

x3 Strike From Above

x2 Armored Core Sword

x1 Armored Core Battlegrounds

x1 Limiter Removal (real)

x1 Armored Core Battle- Ready

x2 Armored Core Return

 

Trap Cards

x2 Great Blast of Armored Core

x1 Assault Mode Activate (Real)

x1 Total Destruction of Armored Core

x2 Armored Core Stand- Still.

 

 

 

Ok, so thats all I have right now. But As I said, I will update every day or so, I might update in a couple of minutes/hours. But now you know. Image Credit: Photobucket Find. Please wait for effects, I will have them up soon.

 

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Armored Core- Greyling the Rookie

• • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Tuner

ATK 1200 DEF 1200

Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned except when there is 1 or more "Armored Core" monsters on the field. You can discard 1 card to have this card gain 500 ATK and DEF. When this card is sent to the Graveyard for the Special Summon of a Synchro Monster, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the Level of a card they control x100.

 

Armored Core- Tank the Core Shield

• • • • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 0 DEF 2400

Effect: When this card is Tribute Summoned in face- up Defense Position, increase the ATK of 1 other "Armored Core" monster you control by 500. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to negate an opponents attack. If you activate this effect, "Armored Core" monsters cannot be Special Summoned until your next turn. If this card is destroyed while in face- up Defense Position, destroy 1 card your opponent controls other than the attacking card.

 

Armored Core- Dilator the Big Gun

• • • • • • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 2500 DEF 1200

Effect: This card cannot be Tribute Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 Level 5 or higher "Armored Core" monsters you control with 2000 or more ATK or DEF. If this card is equipped with a Union monster, increase the ATK of this card by 700 until the End Phase. You can discard 1 card each turn to inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each Level 4 or lower monsters they control.

 

Armored Core- Anti the Distorter

• • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 1000 DEF 1400

Effect: Cards cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard by a card effect. If this card attacks, increase the ATK of another "Armored Core" monster you control other than this card. If this card was Special Summoned from your hand by the effect of an "Armored Core" monster you control, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

Armored Core- Mystron the Heavy Weapon

• • • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 1900 DEF 2000

Effect: This card gains 500 ATK for each "Armored Core" monster you control. When this card attacks, you can decrease the ATK of this card by 400 to destroy 1 face- up Spell Card they control. If you control a face- up Defense Position "Armored Core- Tank the Core Shield", increase this cards DEF by 800.

 

Armored Core- Core the Combiner

• • • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 2300 DEF 2000

Effect: Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face- up "Armored Core" monster you control OR unequip it to Special Summon it in face- up Attack Position. When equippedto an "Armored Core" monster by this cards effect, that monster gains 500 ATK and cannot be destroyed by battle. When the equiiped card destroys an opponents monster by battle, Special Summon 1 "Armored Core Token" (Machine- Type/DARK/Level 5/ATK 2300/DEF 2300). These Tokens cannot be sent to the Graveyard for the Special Summon of a Synchro Monster or Tributed for a Tribue Summoned. You can Tribute 1 "Armored Core Token" you control to inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

Armored Core- Shune the Light

• • • • • • •

LIGHT

Machine- Type

Machine- Type/ Synchro/ Effect

ATK 2700 DEF 1300

Effect: 1 Machine- Type Tuner + 1 or more non- Tuner monsters.

This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your Extra Deck. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to equip 1 Union monster to this card. When this card attacks, you can select 1 "Armored Core" monster you control and increase the ATK and DEF of that card by half of this cards ATK. By Tributing 1 Machine- Type Token monster you control to inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

Armored Core- Shune the Light/Assault Mode

• • • • • • • • •

LIGHT

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 3200 DEF 3000

Effect: This card cannot be Tribute Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Assault Mode Activate". Once per turn, you can send 1 Union monster you control to the Graveyard to inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. By discarding 2 cards, equip 1 Union monster to a card you control other than this card. By sending 2 or Machine- Type Token monsters you control to the Graveyard, you can increase the ATK of 2 "Armored Core" monsters you control by 400. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Armored Core- Shune the Light" from your Graveyard.

 

Armored Core- Sheyu the Dark

• • • • • • • • (- 8, Sheyu's a Dark Synchro)

DARK

Machine- Type/ Dark Synchro/ Effect

ATK 2900 DEF 2300

1 non- Tuner monster - 1 Dark Tuner Monster.

Once per turn, you can unequip a Union monster you control to increase this cards ATK by 700. Whent his card attacks, and you have 5 or more "Armored Core" monsters in your Graveyard with different names. you can destroy all face- up Spell or Trap Cards your opponent controls. By discarding your hand, you can select 1 of the following effects: - Increase the ATK of this card by 500. - By Tributing 1 Machine- Type monster you control, you can destroy 1 face- up non- Machine- Type monster your opponent controls. If this card is destroyed, draw 4 cards.

 

Armored Core- Grandios the Big

• • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 1600 DEF 1200

Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned, you can discard 1 card to decrease the ATK of a card your opponent controls by 600. If this card is destroyed by battle, draw 2 cards and then inflict 400 damage for each card you control. By discarding this card from your hand, treat 1 Level 5 or lower monster you control as a Union monster.

 

Armored Core- Demik the Toolman

• • • • • • • • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Dark Tuner

ATK 0 DEF 0

This card can only by Tribute Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Garveyard by a card effect. Once per turn, you can add 1 DARK Machine- Type monster from your Deck to your hand. By discarding 1 card, you can increase the ATK of this card by 2000 until the End Phase. If you activate this effect, draw 1 card.

 

Armored Core- Lazer the Shooter

• • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Union

ATK 1600 DEF 1000

Effect:Once per turn, you can equip this card to a face- up "Armored Core- Shune the Light/Assault Mode" you control OR unequip it to Special Summon it in face- up Attack Position. The equiiped card gains 700 ATK and loses 700 DEF. Whe the equipped card is destroyed, you can discard 2 "Armored Core" cards to negate the equiped cards destruction and draw 1 card. When the equipped card is destroyed, you can destroy this card instead.

 

Armored Core- Descra the Swordsman

• • • • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 2300 DEF 2000

Effect: When this card is Tribute Summoned sucessfully, you can equip 1 Union Monster to this card or add 1 Equip Spell Card to your hand. By discarding 1 card, destroy 1 Trap Card your opponent cotnrols. You can Tribute this face- up card to decrease the ATK of all non- Machine- Type monsters you control.

 

Armored Core- Deci the Executor

• • • •

DARK

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 1200 DEF 1200

Effect: This card is treated as Warrior- Type. When this card attacks, you can discard 1 card to activate 1 of the following effects: - Increase the ATK of this card by 500. If you activate this effect and this card destroys an opponents monster by battle, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. - Destroy 1 Spell Card during your End Phase.

 

Armored Core- Reckla the Shine

• • • •

LIGHT

Machine- Type/ Effect

ATK 1700 DEF 1200

Effect: When your opponent declares an attack on a face- up Machine- Type monster you control, you can discard 1 card to negate the ATK and draw 1 card. If you control a face- up "Armored Core" monster when this effect is activated, you can increase the ATK or DEF of that card by 800. When this card attacks, you can increase this cards ATK by 400 or draw 1 card during the Damage Step.

 

Armored Core- Fira the Flame

• • •

FIRE

Machine- Type

ATK 1000 DEF 1200

Effect: When this card is Noral Summoned, you can discard 1 card to treat it as a Special Summon. You can Tribute this face- up card to inflict damage to your opponent equal to the combined Levels of all cards you control x300. During your Draw Phase, Special Summon 1 "Tool Token" (Machine- Type/ DARK/ Level 2/ ATK 0/ DEF 0). These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon.

 

Great Battlefortress of Armored Core

• • • • • •

LIGHT

Machine- Type

ATK 0 DEF 2300

Effect: Once per turn, you can equip 1 Equip Spell Card to this card. When this card is attacked, increasse the DEF of this card by 1000. You can Tribute 1 "Armored Core" you control to destroy 1 Spell Card your opponent controls. You can Tribute this face- up card to destroy all cards on the field. If your control a face- up Dark Tuner monster, both players draw 3 cards.

 

 

[spoiler=Spells]

Strike From Above

Type: Normal

Effect: This card can only be activated during the Battle Phase. When a card you control attacks, increase the ATK of a card you control by 500. If a card your opponetn controls attacks a Defense Position monster you control, you can discard 1 card to increase the DEF of the targeted card by 500. When this card is sent to the Graveyard after its activation, decrease the ATK of all cards affected by this cards effect by 700.

 

Armored Core Sword

Type: Equip

Effect: You can equip this card to a face- up "Armored Core" monster you control to increase the equipped monsters ATK by 700 OR decrease the ATK of 1 card you opponent controls by 700. You can discard 1 card to increase the ATK of another card you control by 500. If you activate this effect, you cannot declare an attack on a card your opponent controls until your next turn.

 

Armored Core Battlegrounds

Type: Field

Effect: All face- up "Armored Core" monsters gain 500 ATK. When this card is targeted by a card effect that targets this card, you can Tribute 1 Level 4 or lower monster you control to negate that effect and destroy 1 face- up Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. If you control a face- up "Armored Core- Sheyu the Dark" you can decrease the ATK of all cards your opponent controls by 600. Face- up "Armored Core- Sheyu the Dark" cannot attack your opponent directly as log as this card remains face- up on the field. If a face- up Machine- Type monster you control is destroyed, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 "Armored Core Token" (Machine- Type/DARK/Level 5/ATK 2300/DEF 2300). These Tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon.

 

Armored Core Battle- Ready

Type: Continuous

Effect: When this card is activated, select 1 "Armored Core" monster you control. That card can attack twice this turn. If that card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon 1 "Tool Token" (Machine- Type/ DARK/ Level 2/ ATK 0/ DEF 0). These Tokens cannot be Tribute Summoned. If these Tokens are sent to the Graveyard for the Special Summon of a Synchro Monster, your opponent cannot declare an attack on a face- up "Armored Core" monster you control. If this card is destroyed, take 300 damage instead.

 

Armored Core Return

Type: Continuous

Effect: Once per turn, you can Special Summon 1 Level 6 or lower monster from your Graveyard. If this cards effect is negated, you can discard 1 card to draw 2 cards. Then, discard 1 Machine- Type monster from your hand. By discarding 1 card, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. During your Draw Phase, you can draw 1 additional card equal to the number of "Armored Core" cards you control.

 

 

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Great Blast of Armored Core

Type: Normal

Effect: This card cannot be activated except when your opponent declares an attack. You can discard this card from your hand to negate the attack and inflict 700 damage to your opponent. If your opponent negates this effect, destroy 1 card they control and increase the ATK of an "Armor Core" monster by 600. Whe this card is sent to the Graveyard after activation, destroy all Spell Cards on the field.

 

Assault Mode Activate

Type: Normal

Effect: Tribute 1 Synchro Monster. Special Summon 1 "/Assault Mode" monster whose name includes the Tributed monster's name from your Deck in Attack Position.

 

Total Destruction of Armored Core

Type: Continuous

Effect: Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to Special Summon 1 "Armored Core" monster from your hand. During your Draw Phase, whenever you draw an "Amored Core" monster, Special Summon it and your opponent draws 1 card. If this cardis targeted by an effect that would destroy this card, you can Tribute 1 card Special Summoned by this cards effect to negate that cards effect and destroy it. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, draw 2 card OR add 1 "Armored Core" monster from your Deck to your hand.

 

Armored Core Stand- Still

Type: Continuous

Effect: This card can only be activated during your Battle Phase. You can discard 1 card to change the Battle Position of a face- up Attack Positon card your opponent controls to face- up Defense Psotion. By Tribtuing 1 "Armored Core" monster your opponent controls, you can inflict 700 damage to your opponent.

 

 

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Alph, when you are finished just say so. ;)

 

 

Well' date=' unless you also require us to put in a /effect with type or I accidentally made a mistake in it, the new rules should be dealt with in mine.

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exactly, i dont need it. ;) thanks for asking and updating that.

 

I put that in there just to say what they are. I don't think you need it' date=' but wait for Kale.

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tru dat. :D

 

Before we join' date=' do we have to describe the look of our character or can we post the appearance picture in a spoiler?

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either-or, or you could do both. ;) i think that a pic is less creative than a description, as i have to pull what i think you mean from the pic into a paragraph rather than reading exactly what you mean, but a pic is really awesome. ;)

 

EDIT: alrighty Alph. ;) looks good, i will add you to the completed list.

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Sweet bro. Thanks man.

 

de nada, mi amigo. ;)

 

...Spanish I ftw? XD

 

anywho, so far i have two completed entries and 4 reserveds. anyone else want to join? i want creativity peeps! tons! :twisted: (maniacal laughter)

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Gotta change my entry to Kastor' date=' Kale. I got the name change a couple of minutes ago.

Yeah thats right. No more Alph. I was getting sick of 4 letters. Don't really like the number 4.

 

I'm spanish so I can say your spanish FTW!

10/10 for your Spanish and fic.

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oh, alrighty! at first i thought that a new person joined the contest, then i saw your banner and was like: "Whaa..?"

 

alrighty, i will change your entry name. this isnt the first time that someone's name has changed in the middle of a contest. :D

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Character

 

Name: Gary Hammond.

 

Appearance: Often wearing a pale-white t-shirt and black-dyed jeans, along with a dark-gray jacket and fedora hat. Gary originally had blue eyes, but wears special lenses so that they appear crimson. He also wears, around his left wrist, a pair of intertwined black leather bands. His skin is quite pale, and he has shoulder-long almost-but-not-quite white hair.

 

Description: Gary usually works well with other people once he gets to know them, but isn't keen to make new friends. It comes easy for him to dislike people, as I will elaborate on in the backstory, and he isn't afraid to use harsher language.

Gary's dueling style is a bit different, as he focuses on dealing damage to himself rather than to his opponent, but it levels out in the end.

 

Backstory: Twenty years ago, Oscar and Beatrice Hammond had their first children: Twins, Isabel and Gary. The Hammonds were rich, and so forth the siblings had a very wealthy childhood, always getting the toys they wanted. At school, they were among the popular, the higher-level, the nobility, the ones everyone either wanted to be or hated from the bottom of their soul. Everything seemed to go along well for the Hammond twins.

 

Then, it all fell apart. One day Isabel didn't come home after school. Her parents - and her brother - thought she was just out with her friends. She had left her cell phone on charge at home, but they weren't worried. The hours went by, but the girl didn't show up. At midnight, Gary's parents went to bed, but he remained. At some point, he must have fallen asleep, for he woke up in the couch ten minutes before the school bus would be there. When he got to the school, a brief chat with Isabel's friends confirmed what he had dreaded. His sister was missing.

 

Not wasting a minute, he called his parents and hurried back home. There, he found his father in tears and his mother on the phone, apparently talking with a very stubborn policeman. She slammed the phone, and Gary could see she was struggling to hold the tears back. "He told me they'd do what they can, but..." She sniffed. "He didn't have much faith. He said... said that... sometimes, people just vanish. "

 

The Hammonds never recovered. They never heard from the police again, and Isabel was presumed dead. Slowly, Gary watched his parents decline until their money had run out. By then, he had turned himself inside out, canceling out everything and everyone but himself. He didn't see it - but somehow, he just knew - but his friends at school started to ignore him. Isabel had been such a large part of him, and when she was gone... It wasn't right. Two years later, shortly after his eighteenth birthday, Gary dropped out of school and moved out from his near-bankrupt parents.

He even picked up an old card game he hadn't touched in years. It felt... right somehow.

 

Cards

 

Gary's strategy is focused around dealing damage to himself, while forcing the opponent to do the same.

 

Wicked Illusion

Spell Card

You take 1000 damage. Select 1 monster your opponent controls. That monster's effect becomes: "Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you take 1000 damage. When this card is destroyed, you take 1000 damage."

 

Mirror Lady

DARK

Fiend

8 / 0 / 0

You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Deck by taking 2000 damage. When you would take damage except by this card's effect, you can take 800 damage to inflict the same amount of damage you would have taken to your opponent instead. You can only control 1 face-up "Mirror Lady".

Appears as a woman, but her skin shows the reflections of those around her. Her eyes glitter red and purple.

 

Damage Converter

Continuous Trap

When you would take Direct Damage, halve the damage and Special Summon 1 "Collateral Token" (DARK / Machine / Level 2 / ? / ?) to your opponent's side of the field. The ATK/DEF of the "Collateral Token" is equal to the damage you would have taken / 2. If a "Collateral Token" is destroyed, inflict 400 damage to it's controller.

 

Masochistic Retrieval

Spell Card

Take 1000 Direct Damage. Look at the top 5 cards in your Deck, and add 1 of them to your hand. Shuffle the rest of the cards back into your Deck.

 

Endless Hurt Dragon

DARK

Dragon / Synchro

8 / 0 / 0

1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. While this card is face-up on the field, inflict 500 damage to the turn player during their End Phase. Any Battle Damage taken from a battle involving this card is treated as Direct Damage and is decreased by 500 points.

 

A dragon towering over most, her great shape covered in black scales. Her everwatching eyes have seen all of this world's pain, and they are scarred. (Note: Gary has a special bond with Endless Hurt Dragon, as it represents Isabel to him.)

 

Deck

 

Monsters: 20

Yubel - Terror Incarnate x2

Yubel x2

Mirror Lady x2

Doom Shaman x2

Armageddon Knight x3

Dark Grepher x2

Chaos Sorcerer x1

Krebons x2

Psychic Commander x2

Mystic Tomato x2

 

Spells: 13

Allure of Darkness x2

Masochistic Retrieval x2

Wicked Illusion x2

Brain Control x1

Monster Reborn x1

Foolish Burial x2

Emergency Teleport x1

Instant Fusion x2

 

Traps: 8

Battle Mania x3

Damage Converter x2

Limit Reverse x3

 

Extra Deck: 15

Dark Dive Bomber x2

Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Boundary x1

Goyo Guardian x1

Explode Wing Dragon x2

Endless Hurt Dragon x1

Magical Android x2

Cyber Saurus x2

Darkfire Dragon x2

Charubin the Fire Knight x2

 

 

Good enough?

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