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Should have been three days ago. But' date=' knowing Kale, he's really busy right now.[/font']

 

True, sorry. I got very busy, I haven't been able to write the second half of my next chapter yet. End of year tests and such..

 

Today judging should take place...

 

You're right, and it should have. I got through half of them and then got distracted again. I will have the rest out by tomorrow. Just be one more day patient with me. So far all the entries are great! =D

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[align=center]Results!

 

[spoiler=01 Aelsthla-Mental: 26/30]

[1] Cards

• Concept. interesting, seems like a reverse form of the SixSam. ;) creativity is genius here. You could have added a little more support that changed them out, similar to the Glad Beasts or my Deserter Knights, but that is okay. It is still a good idea, and i rather like it. [4/5]

• Presentation. There are errors in the way the effects are worded, but i still could understand where you were coming from. The cards have descriptions, and detailed ones at that. [3/5]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

• A balanced deck. The deck looks good. Good Monster to S/T ratio, and nice that you pointed out the Key Card. [7/7]

• A theme. Stellar. Nothing more to say, it is a character deck. [3/3]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

• Name. truly unique. [1/1]

• Appearance. very detailed, me likey. [1/1]

• Description. Good, not awesome. There seems to be a trend of people with grudges, but we need those. It is good, nothing to remove points for. [2/2]

• Backstory. Extremely well written, and ties in with history very well! it reminds me of the time period around Apartheid and the Rwanda incidents. i liked that interesting new concept about the character, with parents basically "divorced". It only seemed a little too serious, so only 1 point taken. No biggie. :D [5/6]

 

Total

[26/30]

 

 

 

[spoiler=02 Καsτοr: 22/30]

[1] Cards

• Concept. it is an okay concept. i could use an all machine deck in my fic most likely, but it seems the set features around burn. that could be fun. :D [3/5]

• Presentation. not many errors i see, though there arent any descriptions or card pics for the cards. :| that kinda hurts your score, and if you win a spot in the fic i will need you to add those. [3/5]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

• A balanced deck. kinda edging upon the max... [5/7]

• A theme. complete theme. ;) [3/3]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

• Name. works. ;) [1/1]

• Appearance. typical jock/popular kid... XD [1/1]

• Description. pretty good, mate. ;) [2/2]

• Backstory. eh, it was a little rushed. though thats a nice allusion to 5D's.. :D [4/6]

 

Total

[22/30]

 

 

 

[spoiler=03 Nitton: 26/30]

[1] Cards

• Concept. cool, fits the evil theme quite well. [4/5]

• Presentation. very good, and descriptions are above par. ;) [5/5]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

• A balanced deck. True the deck is balanced, and it is quite good, but is somewhat defeats the purpose of a character deck, saying that there was a Yubel deck in the anime before.. and there are only 5 new cards you created.. [5/7]

• A theme. Good theme, though there could have been more of them. [2/3]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

• Name. pushing it, but it is just barely out of the 'common name' category. [1/1]

• Appearance. very original. ;) [1/1]

• Description. just like i said before, this theme is resounding. though it isnt enough to take points away, because it is a good description. ;) [2/2]

• Backstory. This is one of the best backstories i have ever read... i wish i could give bonus points here. that was seriously an awesome start. ;) [6/6]

 

Total

[26/30]

 

 

 

[spoiler=04 Ƨőųł~ɸ~Ƒĭɍҿ: 24/30]

[1] Cards

• Concept. an interesting take on fairies, and they are quite fast. though this is basically like an anime-only concept, which is ironically funny, i am lyre about the Void Force concept. :| [4/5]

• Presentation. OCG and descriptions are to par. ;) [5/5]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

• A balanced deck. your deck has 40 cards, but one of the ones included in the main deck is the Synchro Monster, meaning that it is a 39 card deck. :| i would assume the rest of the extra deck is the normal stuff? :D [6/7]

• A theme. certainly is a theme. ;) [3/3]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

• Name. edging to the weird a bit... sorry.. [0/1]

• Appearance. interesting appearance. ;) [1/1]

• Description. There isnt really much of a description based on how he acts, except a tiny bit in the bio. :| [1/2]

• Backstory. interesting story, but it is very general. could have been longer.. [4/6]

 

Total

[24/30]

 

 

 

[spoiler=05 Cyber_Ice: 26/30]

[1] Cards

• Concept. similar to the aliens, only.. colder. :D [4/5]

• Presentation. pretty good, though you are missing descriptions on a lot of the cards. :| [4/5]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

• A balanced deck. good balance. [7/7]

• A theme. 'tis themed. [3/3]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

• Name. a little un-creative [0/1]

• Appearance. very good. ;) [1/1]

• Description. even though i have said that this is a resounding theme, you truly made it your own. ;) i liked the twist you added about the egocentrism. ;) [2/2]

• Backstory. pretty good, though there was a lot of room for interpretation left in it. [5/6]

 

Total

[26/30]

 

 

 

[spoiler=06 Xander Royce: 23/30]

[1] Cards

• Concept. a cool take on plagues, but it is rather bland.. its still pretty interesting though. [4/5]

• Presentation. nice pics for the monsters! that helps a whole lot.. but there are a few errors in OCG. [4/5]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

• A balanced deck. Good deck, though there arent many custom cards in it, and that was the point of the contest... [6/7]

• A theme. 'tis a theme, and a pretty good one. [3/3]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

• Name. a little on the uncreative side... [0/1]

• Appearance. works. edging on too simple though.. [1/1]

• Description. eh.. needs more.. [1/2]

• Backstory. moderately good.. needs more descriptors imo. ;) [4/6]

 

Total

[23/30]

 

 

 

[spoiler=07 wildfire5: 24/30]

[1] Cards

• Concept. nice concept, i can see some strategies already. ;) [5/5]

• Presentation. a few OCG errors.. [3/5]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

• A balanced deck. some cards are overpowered, and others are dead draws.. :| [6/7]

• A theme. pretty good theme nonetheless.. :D [3/3]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

• Name. works. ;) [1/1]

• Appearance. very descriptive. [1/1]

• Description. something seemed missing while i read through it.. :| [1/2]

• Backstory. a little too much like a more revenge-seeking Yusei.. XD [4/6]

 

Total

[24/30]

 

 

 

[spoiler=08 X-L YEAHHHH!!!: 25/30]

[1] Cards

• Concept. pretty amazing concept, i must say. ;) their effects let a few of them attack multiple times, and that is a cool concept. though, the subtype was unnecessary. [4/5]

• Presentation. Pretty good, no errors i saw. ;) [5/5]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

• A balanced deck. very good! i liked that you bolded the custom cards. that makes it so much easier.. though you have a Synchro Monster, and there are no Tuners.. i think you meant for Bullet Synchron to be a Tuner, but you didnt specify.. [6/7]

• A theme. tis a theme. ;) [3/3]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

• Name. just barely works. the last name saved ya. ;) [1/1]

• Appearance. seemed a little too much like an ordinary fellow.. [0/1]

• Description. something seemed missing.. [1/2]

• Backstory. seemed to be missing somethng as well.. not sure what it was. i just found it wanting after i read it. :| [5/6]

 

Total

[25/30]

 

 

 

[spoiler=09 sonicfan31: 25/30]

[1] Cards

• Concept. eh.. they seem like they arent very unified.. :| [4/5]

• Presentation. pretty good, not many OCG errors.. [4/5]

 

[2] A Compiled Deck

• A balanced deck. very good. ;) [7/7]

• A theme. 'tis a theme. [3/3]

 

[3] A well thought out character.

• Name. barely makes the cut.. [1/1]

• Appearance. nice desctiptors. ;) [1/1]

• Description. a little lacking.. [1/2]

• Backstory. eh... slightly too fairy-tail like. :| [4/6]

 

Total

[25/30]

 

 

 

 

 

{Standings}

1st Place: Aelsthla-Mental, Nitton, Cyber_Ice

2nd Place: X-L YEAHHHH!!!, sonicfan31

3rd Place: Ƨőųł~ɸ~Ƒĭɍҿ, wildfire5

4th Place: Xander Royce

5th Place: Καsτοr

 

There are Ties in place! This means that i will add a new 5/5 likeness scale to separate the ties, starting with 1st. Note: Bonus points will not bump you up, they will only determine who moves down the list.

 

{Bonus Round}

 

Aelsthla-Mental, Your idea is interesting, and i would like to see it in the fic. 4/5 Bonus.

Nitton, Even though there wasnt much creativity in the way of new cards, your backstory gave me chills. 3/5 Bonus.

Cyber_Ice, im sorry, but yours didnt catch my eye over the other two. But with the 1/5 Bonus you receive you are still in 3rd, and place. ;)

X-L YEAHHHH!!!, This idea intrigues me. Be watching for this character, for i am considering adding it. 4/5 Bonus.

sonicfan31, even though this idea didnt catch my eye, i could use a character like this. 2/5 bonus.

Ƨőųł~ɸ~Ƒĭɍҿ, It is an interesting concept, but one that im not too fond of. 2/5 Bonus.

wildfire5, Certainly Insteresting, 3/5 Bonus.

 

 

 

{Final Standings}

First: Aelsthla-Mental

Second: Nitton

Third: Cyber_Ice

Fourth: X-L YEAHHHH!!!

Fifth: sonicfan31

Sixth: wildfire5

Seventh: Ƨőųł~ɸ~Ƒĭɍҿ

Eigth: Xander Royce

Ninth: Καsτοr

 

 

Dont feel bad if you didnt place, everyone was very close to one another in the trials. Good luck next time, when my Fan fic reaches Vol. 2.

 

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