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I have lost count of how many times I have told you people to not place copies of the renders in the background. Seriously, it doesn't look good

 

The overly bright light in the middle is unnecessary and is not in the right spot for correct lighting

Just about everything has jagged edges and lines

The c4ds, or whatever stuff you have on the left, are pretty boring and just sit there to kill the flow and not interact with the rest of the sig at all

The transparent effects over the girls don't look good

The far background is a universe of nothing but pink, does not belong with those girls at all

The copies in the background are over contrasted

No depth, flow, or blending

 

There's probably some things I missed, but just looking at it is hurting my head.

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those brushes remind me of the ones catman uses

anyways, I don't think its that bad, not your best, but not bad. The problem is you're going more and more simple. you need to stop separating the render from the background and focus more on making them work together to create depth. The sign of an over plain sig is when it seems too flat.

I think though that the brushes and lighting do help the focal

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