Halo 3 Cards!

[Xxxyzyz5698]

check out these cards i made (im new so if these cards suck thats why and i know some cards are overpowered)Note--vehicle-type cards-- Can only attack with a driver, when someone is driving it, their attack and defense goes up by the vehicle's attack and defense points.ex. master chief + ghost= chief's attack goes up by 2000 defense goes up by 2500. the number in () next to the word vehicle is how many cards can ride the vehicle.

 

[Amethyst Phoenix]

They're all very overpowered. The ATK and DEF ratings are ridiculous.

Don't make normal monsters, effect monsters are the ones people care about.

The vehicles should be union monsters with an effect that they cannot attack unless equipped, or give them an effect that lets them equip a monster and that restricts them from attacking without an equipped monster.

Don't put 2 types on 1 card (in the effect say "This card is also treated as a *insert type*-Type monster".

OCG is going to be important too (Official card grammar) and yours is terrible.

Some OCG errors:

+1000 attack points = gains 1000 ATK

 

attack 2 monsters at once = Can attack twice in the same turn.

 

Gives the holder = The equipped monster gains (or the equipped monster can, if it isn't a stat

boost, or the equipped monster is unaffected by, if it grants immunity, and etc.)

 

every monster on your side of the field = every monster you control

 

Sacrifice = Tribute (or Release)

 

boost = increase

 

play = activate (spell/trap) or summon (monster)

 

Special Summon, Set, Summon, Deck, Graveyard, Battle Phase, etc are all capitalized.

 

Gravemind needs a ritual card, or make him a regular effect monster.

 

2/10

[Holy Babylon]

The pictures are poor, they are all OPed, all the attributes are wrong, the vanilla card descriptions are bad, the ritual card isn't a ritual. 1/10, not to mention the fact that there are hundreds of Halo Cards already.

[Dark Ninja]

Pictures are poor, overpowered, vanillas are lazy work that nobody likes these days, and a problem with your flood carrier bothers me. You can only have up to 3 of a card in your deck, so you cant summon 4 flood parasites. Plus if flood parasite was already used as a material, you only have two more in your deck. To make it simple, as long as it says "4" parasites you can't use the effect. It would have to say "up to 3 flood parasites" or "as many flood parasites as possible" 1/10

[wejkoo]

becaus you are a new menber i will give you 4/10 they nead wordk

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i mean,but they nead work

[SpartanGio]

You are new, so I'll go easy. All that is bad are just the normal monsters. People in YCMaker hate em', so give them effects, for now a 5/10

[QueenIsAGreatBand]

Well most of them are vanillas, give them effects and they'll be more interesting. Those that have effects are nearly identical so try some variation. Also, they're too overpowered so decrease the ATK & DEF and also stars. In conclusion, give 'em more work.

 

3.9/10

[Xxxyzyz5698]

last time i checked, this was in pop culture, not realalistic.

[leakybucket]

Gotta appreciate your effort, though. I don't think I've ever made that many cards at once.

 

I think the excuse can be made that if you convey a strong sense of theme, its ok to bend the rules in pop culture. True, you have many things to fix but you're new. And I think vanillas can be cool cards if you have awesome support backed up behind them (~1/6 of the Elemental Heroes are Normal Monsters).

[Incognito Italian980]

some of the pics are way too dark. but some are pretty kool aside from OCG errors so 7/10

[Naturia Master]

nice tooo much attack and deffence 6/10

[metallica 67]

awesome !

[LiAM]

Arrange your cards in format of twos. Singular arrangement is wasting space.

[Symbiote]

So overpowered. Chief+Cortana=Instant Win. 2/10