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[spoiler=Preview of My Own series of Death Note]

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[spoiler=L Lawliet]

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[spoiler=Lore]

As long as this card is face-up, decrease the ATK and DEF of all "Yagami" cards. When this card is sent to the Graveyard Special Summon 1 "N Near" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=Light Yagami]

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[spoiler=Lore]

During your Standby Phase, increase your Life Points by 400 for each Spellcaster-Type monster on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Mikami Teru".

 

[spoiler=N Near]

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[spoiler=Lore]

As long as you control another monster except "N Near", this card cannot be selected as an attack target. As long as you control another Spellcaster-Type monster, all Spellcaster-Type monsters gain 400 DEF.

 

[spoiler= Misa Amane]

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[spoiler=Lore]

Discard 1 card from your hand to destroy 1 monster on the field. If this card is destroyed as a result of battle Special Summon 1 "Rem" from your hand or deck.

 

[spoiler=Jealous's Legacy]

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[spoiler=Lore]

Pay 800 Life Points, Special Summon 1 Misa Amane from your deck or Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=Ryuuk]

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[spoiler=Lore]

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. Each time a Spell or Trap card is activated put 1 Spell counter on this card (max 3) remove 3 Spell counters from this card to Special Summon 1 "Light Yagami" from your deck or Graveyard.

 

[spoiler=Ryuuk, Death Note]

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The Original Idea for it was Chidori its kind of annoying XP after reading his version of the death note i tryed and i tryed to think of a better version so i just made my card based around his idea XD damn you chidori =P / =D.

 

 

[spoiler=Lore] When this card is activated pay 800 Life Points. Once Per turn by paying 200 Life Points you may destroy 1 face-up monster with equal or less ATK then the equiped monster. If this card is equiped to "Light Yagami" decrease your Life Points by 1600 to destroy monsters with higher ATK if this card is sent to the Graveyard tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to bring it to the top of your deck.

 

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You fixed the OCG but lots of grammar issues

 

L

 

As long as this card is face-up, decrease the ATK and DEF of all "Yagami" cards. When this card is sent to the Graveyard Special Summon 1 "N Near" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.

 

 

Light

 

During your Standby Phase, increase your Life Points by 400 for each Spellcaster-Type monster on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Mikami Teru".

 

 

Near

 

As long as you control another monster except "N Near", this card cannot be selected as an attack target. As long as you control another Spellcaster-Type monster, all Spellcaster-Type monsters gain 400 DEF.

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I'd suggest increasing L's level to 6 and Misa's to 4. It won't make a difference in summoning, it's just more realistic given their attack and defense. As for Ryuk pictures, try

 

http://th09.deviantart.com/fs23/300W/f/2007/346/5/8/Shinigami___Ryuk_by_nomand.jpg

http://media.photobucket.com/image/ryuk/Majesty_34/ryuk.jpg?o=150

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I forgot that Shinigami's name, which is pretty bad considering I have all the manga. And The_Prince_of_Death, I disagree. In the anime, I couldn't tolerate Light; he simply came across as great chess master, using everyone (even those who loved him) as pawns, and eventually as a crazed megalomaniac. In the manga I liked him, or at least like him enough that I was unsure as to whom I wanted to win. Truth be told, I think I might have liked Ryuk the best. A completely neutral character who's only around for some laughs and to kill some time.

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I'd suggest increasing L's level to 6 and Misa's to 4. It won't make a difference in summoning' date=' it's just more realistic given their attack and defense. As for Ryuk pictures, try

 

http://th09.deviantart.com/fs23/300W/f/2007/346/5/8/Shinigami___Ryuk_by_nomand.jpg

http://media.photobucket.com/image/ryuk/Majesty_34/ryuk.jpg?o=150

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thanks ^_^


I considered your opinion and changed L's stars to 6

and Misa's to 4 it didnt look right - and L is that strongs in term of

knowledge he hasnt got superhuman strength ;p

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