Ugallian Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 the "GLORY OF THE DWARVES" thread was bad, so, heres some different cards. Azure front RiflemanLvl 3ATK 700/ DEF 500Effect: Once per turn, you can tribute one card from your hand to destroy 1 card on your opponents side of the field. Link to comment
EnkoMaun Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 let me tell you this, I cannot rate your cards yet because you only wrote one, but your cards a little under-explained. 1 written card should explain the cards name, level, attribute, type, category (union, effect, tuner, ritual etc.) atk and def and the effect.You're missing the attribute, type and the category. There is the OCG too, but that will get into shape after a while. Here, I'll give you a sample written card, this is how I write them: Sample Card (* * * * *[number of stars] DARKReptile/Tuner/Effect --- ATK 0 DEF 0Effect: bla bla bla I sure hope I helped. Link to comment
Ugallian Posted March 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 yep, ty.let me try again- Azure Front Rifleman (* * *) EarthWarrior/EffectATK 700DEF 500Effect: Once per turn, you can tribute 1 card in your hand to destroy 1 card on your opponents side of the field. Azure Front Battleram (* *) EarthBeast/EffectATK 500DEF 950Effect: While this card is on your side of the field, all your "Azure Front" monsters gain 500 ATK. Azure Front Footsoldier (* * *) EarthWarrior/EffectATK 600DEF 650Effect: This card gains 200 ATK for every "Azure Front Footsoldier" on your side of the field. When this card battles a monster, Special Summon a "Azure Front" monster on to your side of the field for every 2 cards in your opponents hand. btw, the Azure Front Deck is full of monsters that are meant to be generally weak but are meant to have good effects. Azure Front Knight (* * * * *) EarthWarrior/Fusion/Effect"Azure Front Footsoldier" + "Azure Front Battleram"ATK 950DEF 900Effect: This card can only be summoned by Fusion Summon. This card gains 200 ATK for every "Azure Front" card in the graveyard. Azure Front Corrupter (* *) DarkSpellcaster/EffectATK 300DEF 800Effect: When this card is summoned, pick 1 of your opponents monsters. You take control of it while this effect is active. This effect lasts 2 turns. While this effect is active, the original ATK and DEF of this card and the controlled monster are halfed. Link to comment
EnkoMaun Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 now, here's another thing, right under the end of your posts, lies a small edit button. Click that, and add your new cards there, and people won't have to search through the whole thread to read all your cards. Also, here's an OCG tip, you should just say "battles a monster" instead of "engages in battle". It isn't even in the OCG. You should go and read the effects of some cards, if you own them, or just check them through the internet to get some ideas about OCG. You may also check my threads, and please do comment :D Link to comment
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