banditbob Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Spelling, OCG and Grammar errors... basically, im saying it sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpartanGio Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 uh.. do you think it is bad, because if you do I kinda agree.. sorry but bad, really bad actually 1/10 for effort (sorta). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Use capitalization in the name, e.g. "Ashley's Amulet"The picture is a bit too blurry. Try uploading a bigger-sized picture for better qualityOCG errors. Here's a fixed effect:"This card can only be equipped to "Ashley". Increase the ATK of the equipped monsters by 600 points. When this card is activated, if "Red Wolf" is on the field, you can Special Summon 1 "The Clown Commander" from your hand to the field."Â But aside from that, it's ok. I could've understood it more if the actual monsters mentioned in the card were uploaded, but from what I can see from this card, it's not bad. 3.8/10Â P.S. These cards should really be posted in the Any Other Cards Section, unless i'm wrong, and they are mentioned in the media. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QueenIsAGreatBand Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 The pic is kinda blurry... just fix the spelling and find a better pic and it will be great! (^w^)4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
banditbob Posted March 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Use capitalization in the name' date=' e.g. "Ashley's Amulet"The picture is a bit too blurry. Try uploading a bigger-sized picture for better qualityOCG errors. Here's a fixed effect:"This card can only be equipped to "Ashley". Increase the ATK of the equipped monsters by 600 points. When this card is activated, if "Red Wolf" is on the field, you can Special Summon 1 "The Clown Commander" from your hand to the field."Â But aside from that, it's ok. I could've understood it more if the actual monsters mentioned in the card were uploaded, but from what I can see from this card, it's not bad. 3.8/10Â P.S. These cards should really be posted in the Any Other Cards Section, unless i'm wrong, and they are mentioned in the media.[/quote']thanks im not done with that commander card yet havnt even put the effect yet im thinking of what i want it to be or what would make it a good card but not a broken one its gona be my most used card that i would use if i could play with the deck im creating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danman Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Who's Ashley o_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bribri123123 Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Sorry. but Im going to have to give this a 1/10. The 1 is for effort...WAY too many OCG errors, bad pic, spelling, grammer... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
banditbob Posted March 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Who's Ashley o_O another card i made its two of the four key card im making to make it run smothly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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