Kendo Fish Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 [align=center]Trekker An Idea I Came Up With PLOT[/align] A mysterious new student arrives in a high school simply known as Field High. He has grey skin, red eyes, and never lets anybody see his real hands. But he isn't really a person, quite obviously - he's a strange robot known only as Trekker, his origins unknown and his abilities seemingly limitless. Only a girl named Josie knows his secret, but everyone else suspects him. A few days later, Trekker discovers that weird people and creatures are after him, attempting to capture him. Why are they trying to get him? Whose side are they on? Will Trekker ever discover his true origins? ----- That's my basic plot for it. For whatever reason, I thought it might make a good video game. Anyways, does anyone think it may be good, or that the plot needs some editing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 So, Trekker arrives on a High School and they suspect him being evil but then another evil comes after him? I would love to see how it unfolds. I think you got the hand idea from D.Gray Man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendo Fish Posted April 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Nah, I just thought it'd be cool. It might also be cool if I made his hand shoot out lasers and stuff, but nah, I'm not gonna do that. Or will I...? It goes kind of slowly at first, though. I'm almost done with the first chapter. By the third chapter it should pick up speed, after the introductions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 1, 2009 Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 Nah' date=' I just thought it'd be cool. [b']It might also be cool if I made his hand shoot out lasers and stuff, but nah, I'm not gonna do that. Or will I...?[/b] It goes kind of slowly at first, though. I'm almost done with the first chapter. By the third chapter it should pick up speed, after the introductions. Do not make it shoot lasers, you make it sound as you where working on the 1st chapter for ages, did you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendo Fish Posted April 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2009 I probably won't make the character shoot lasers. I had other weapons in mind. :P Actually, I've only been working on the first chapter for about one day. The first chapter's already done. O_O Though it should probably be edited, I often don't edit my stories much. MOST turn out fine, I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 2, 2009 Report Share Posted April 2, 2009 as i said, looking forward to it ^_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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