Moppel95´s Cards

[Moppel95]

Here are my self drawed Cards

 

[Starly_64]

Bad.

Poor picture (no background, lack of originality)

Fusion-Material Monster descriptions are like "Dark Dimension Mirror"+"Dark Dimension Mirror"

Do not space out the effects

OCG errors. Here it is fixed:

"When this card is summoned, select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. This card's ATK is treated as the selected monster's ATK. When this card battles your opponent's monster, decrease this card's ATK by 100 points. If this card is destroyed by battle by the selected monster, Special Summon 1 "Dark Mirror Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 100) in Defense Position."

 

Your effect is overpowered. Especially the doubling of the ATK and DEF every Standby Phase.

 

Overall, It's bad. Just follow my advice, and it wold look a lot better, and have a reasonable effect. 5/10

 

"Dark Dimension Mirror"s fixed effect:

'If this card is selected as an attack target by your opponent, your opponent must draw a card, and look at the card. If it is a Monster Card, place this card in Defense Position. If it is a Spell Card, end your opponent's Battle Phase. If it is a Trap Card, return 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your Deck."

 

"Black Circle Dimension"s fixed effect:

"Treat the ATK of 1 Level 3 or lower Fiend-Type monster you control as 1500."

And it needs a better picture.

[Moppel95]

I must real say im German can I use your effekt desciptions

[Starly_64]

Sure. That's why I typed them. You can also note the OCG i'm using for them, so your effects for later cards will be more accurate.

 

You're welcome.

[Moppel95]

thanks