my second sig.

[____pi____]

i know it sucks but it is my secod and i did it in about a min and it is a mock up final design coming.

[Lemniscate]

Why is it so big?

You need to crop this down to the right size.

Also, colors don't work, and there's no real flow.

Okay for a 2nd, but you can do better.

[Kenji™]

I don't think this iz a SIG lol

[____pi____]

i will edit later,erase the line at the top, crop it, make it sig sized.

[Huntar!]

wtf is that in the top right?

Its a bit on the big side, eh?

it looks a bit blurry.

No pop outs for you.

 

Good for a second sig tho.

[____pi____]

i said i will fix it later.

[~Shore]

too big

overblurred

possibilities for lighting which you didn't take

needs blending

moar depth

[____pi____]

can you read? it is a mock up i will take suggestions though!!!!!

[~Shore]

then I suggest lighting, no blurring, no glow on the render, making it smaller, fitting the render into the tag, adding some depth and flow (perhaps with c4ds if you can use them well)

 

also, what's up with the huge gap?

it makes one think there's nothing under it