Sragas345 Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 My first monster card :_____CARD_EDITED_!!!_____ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 WOW 12 STARS FOR THAT CARD I DONT THINK SO CAUSE IT HAS NO EFECT AND THAT PIC HAS BEEN USED A MILLION TIMES 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PANDORUM™ Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 ive used the same pic in a way better card if you let me i can show you the card so you can see how to really make a card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 YA I KNOW YOURE CARD KIERAN MORRIS COULD YOU PLEASE SHOW IT TO HIM SO THAT NEXT TIME HE COULD SEND IN EVEN BETTER CARDS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 ^ Hey, don't be so hard on the guy. First post AND First Card. I remember making cards EXACTLY like this when I started.Anyways, although it could use an effect, it seems nice. 12 Stars seems a bit much, so maybe bring it down to around 8. No, not 8.5 XDMaybe even out the ATK / DEF. Maybe something like 3000 ATK, 2000 DEF.Hope I helped. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted April 3, 2009 Report Share Posted April 3, 2009 Dude, you can't give a level 12 monster an ATK like that. Worse, it's a normal monster, and LOTS of people hate Normal Monsters here on YCM. Also, please remember that Yugioh! cards tell the type of monster is is like "Spellcaster" or "Zombie". If your going to make a Normal Monster, give a good descibtion of the card in the text box (wher is says "a lord of darkness")You did a good first try, but next time, please look at Yugioh Cards to get an idea of what they should look like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sragas345 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Helo thank for comenting, now I see a problem.(Sorry about my English I'm not for English or USA ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 overused pic..somewhat..op'd..some ocg errors... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 overpowered and effect is simplenot that good but then again it's your first card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sragas345 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 What is OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 ^ Hey' date=' don't be so hard on the guy. First post AND First Card. I remember making cards EXACTLY like this when I started.Anyways, although it could use an effect, it seems nice. 12 Stars seems a bit much, so maybe bring it down to around 8. No, not 8.5 XDMaybe even out the ATK / DEF. Maybe something like 3000 ATK, 2000 DEF.Hope I helped. ^_^[/quote'] agreed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 on your opponent's side of the field = which your opponent controls.Normal Sumoned = Normal Summoned. You need a more creative effect, and yes, it's a very overused image, 7th time I seen it on this site, could be improved with a more creative effect, less OCG errors and a less overused pic, 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 They mean bad grammer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Alien Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 ^ Hey' date=' don't be so hard on the guy. First post AND First Card. I remember making cards EXACTLY like this when I started.Anyways, although it could use an effect, it seems nice. 12 Stars seems a bit much, so maybe bring it down to around 8. No, not 8.5 XDMaybe even out the ATK / DEF. Maybe something like 3000 ATK, 2000 DEF.Hope I helped. ^_^[/quote'] Ditto Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sragas345 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 My second card : (sorry about my English) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 When this card is Normal Summoned, you can return 1 Machine-type monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Also, try finding a pic that looks more ancient gear-ish Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 wow!2/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
火 Neiller 火 Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 not bad for ur first try but i believe the pic for this card is from a Magic the Gathering card XD im not sure so ill double check and get back to u XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 don't use ancient gear that is from yu-gi-oh gx i don't like when people copy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sragas345 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 My new cards LASER ENERGY : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 NOW THAT'S BETTER Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sragas345 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Thanks.New "Laser Energy" cards is cooming soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koko10101 Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sragas345 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 New "Laser Energy" cards : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 awesome just keep on doing them and you might just halve an awesome deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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