Averex8 Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 This is my first original creation seeing as all my other cards were based on the Metroid series. I think I did pretty good. I posted the effect below for those who might have trouble reading the card. Update: Its been a while since I posted here and I decided to make some changes/udates to the cards. *Made a slight errata change to Ultima *Made some slight changes to the effects of the following cards: Sacred Protectororiginal effect:Once per turn if a FIRE monster on your side of the field is attacked, you can remove from play one FIRE monster in your Graveyard to negate that attack. updated effect:Once per turn if a FIRE monster on your side of the field is the target of an attack, you can remove from play this face-up card on your side of the field to negate that attack. Phoenix Risingoriginal effect:Remove 1 "Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys" in your Deck from play and Special Summon 1 "Ultima-The Phoenix God" from your Deck to your side of the field ignoring the Summoning requirements. Until your next turn the selected monster cannot attack and its effect is negated. You can only activate 1 "Phoenix Rising" per turn. updated effect:Remove 1 "Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys" in your Deck from play and Special Summon 1 "Ultima-The Phoenix God" from your Deck to your side of the field ignoring the Summoning requirements. Until your next turn the selected monster cannot attack and its effect is negated. You can only activate 1 "Phoenix Rising" per turn. *I removed Final Judgment because I thought it was too powerful and unbalanced and I felt it wasn't necessary.Final JudgementEffect:Remove 1 "Ultima-The Phoenix God" on your side of the field from play. Remove all cards on the field and in both players hands from play. Ultima-The Phoenix GodEffect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by it's own effect or by Releasing 1 "Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys" on your side of the field. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon this card from the Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If you Special Summon this card in this way, destroy all cards on the field except this card. Healing TearsEffect:Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can gain 1000 Life Points for each face-up "Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys" and "Ultima-The Phoenix God" on your side of the field. Sacred ProtectorEffect:Once per turn if a FIRE monster on your side of the field is the target of an attack, you can remove from play this face-up card on your side of the field to negate that attack. Phoenix RisingEffect:Remove 1 "Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys" from your side of the field or in your Graveyard from play and Special Summon 1 "Ultima-The Phoenix God" from your Deck to your side of the field ignoring the Summoning requirements. Until your next turn the selected monster cannot attack and its effect is negated. You can only activate 1 "Phoenix Rising" per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Name-GoodLVL-Decrease it by 3 stars. The ATK and DEF is too low for the LVVLL it's at.Pic-Nice. Where did you get it?Effect:Doesn't really make sense to me...Effect should be:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing 1 "Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys" on your field. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon this card from the Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If you Special Summon this card in this way, destroy all cards on the field. ATK/DEF-Balanced Overall Rate:6/10Could use some work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Everything hesaid. The OCG is amazing. I loves it. Pic is good too.9/ frikkin' 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averex8 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 LVL-Decrease it by 3 stars. The ATK and DEF is too low for the LVVLL it's at. This card is based on the sacred phoenix of nephthys which is also a level 8 monster but has low atk and def for its level. My monster actually has 100 more atk points than the real nephthys but I guess I'll think about making its atk points higher. Effect:Doesn't really make sense to me...Effect should be:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing 1 "Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys" on your field. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon this card from the Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If you Special Summon this card in this way, destroy all cards on the field. If I made its effect this way then the only way it could be special summoned is from the hand and it wouldn't be able to be special summoned from the graveyard by its effect. And thanks for the feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 LVL-Decrease it by 3 stars. The ATK and DEF is too low for the LVVLL it's at. This card is based on the sacred phoenix of nephthys which is also a level 8 monster but has low atk and def for its level. My monster actually has 100 more atk points than the real nephthys but I guess I'll think about making its atk points higher. Effect:Doesn't really make sense to me...Effect should be:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing 1 "Sacred Phoenix of Nephthys" on your field. If this card is destroyed by a card effect' date=' Special Summon this card from the Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If you Special Summon this card in this way, destroy all cards on the field.[/quote'] If I made its effect this way then the only way it could be special summoned is from the hand and it wouldn't be able to be special summoned from the graveyard by its effect. And thanks for the feedback. No problem.Hope i've helped. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averex8 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 added a new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zorc: The Dark One Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 8/10 for Healing Tears. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averex8 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 I actually combined two different pics in photoshop to make the art for healing tears. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexbas Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 If this card is destroyed by a card effect' date=' Special Summon this card from the Graveyard during your next Standby Phase. If you Special Summon this card in this way, destroy all cards on the field.[/quote'] With this wording, it seems like a good way to get yourself stuck in a loop: 1. Card is destroyed by effect.2. Card is summoned by its own effect.3. Card is destroyed by own effect, along with all other cards on field. It seems like it should be... If this card is destroyed by the effect of a card controled by your enemy, special summon it from your graveyard during your next Standby Phase. When this card is special summoned in this way, destroy all other cards on the field. But, then again, its not my card, so feel free to ignore me. :P P.S. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averex8 Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 You're right I completely missed that. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averex8 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 More support cards added. I Combined two pics again to make the art for final judgement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 They're good, however I can see OCG errors, i dont like OCG errors, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averex8 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 which ones? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averex8 Posted January 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 *Bump* I just thought I'd revive my old thread; I made some updates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sios87 Posted January 11, 2010 Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Great cards and nice artwork, I really like them and OCG is good too. 9/10 And you say you made the image for healing tears in photoshop? Awesome job man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averex8 Posted January 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 I didn't think anyone would reply but yeah I created the image for healing tears by combining two different images in photoshop; it wasn't hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast for the type OCG looks ok, not TOO many errors, so I'll rate this 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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