Vinsent Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 This is my first deck I've created so don't expect much, plus I'm still working on it, so any advice and tips would be great. Please rate it if you would. I'm sorry if I used a picture someone else already has. I got my images from Google Images, Photo bucket and Deviant art. Please tell me if I need to post any of the effects and I will do it as soon as possible.And thanks The Tin Trooper for telling me how to make spoilers, lol, now my first page isn't nearly as big.[spoiler=Main Characters] [spoiler=Sora's Drives] [spoiler=Organization XIII] [spoiler=Secondary Characters] [spoiler=Spells, Traps] [spoiler=Heartless] [spoiler=Nobodies] [spoiler=Difficult to read effects]If there are others anyone can't read please tell me Zexion - Once per turn you can summon one Book Token (DARK Attribute/Fiend type/0 ATK/0 DEF) you may equip a book token to one of your opponents monsters, the equipped monster can not attack, and is switched to offense mode if in defense, and ATK power is decreased by 200, if all monster the opponent controls is equipped with a book token, than all monsters can attack again, but can not switch positions, and Organization XIII - Zexion's ATK power is increased by 500, after this monster is destroyed, or one or more of the book tokens, than all monsters affected by this effect is returned to normal, unless they were destroyed Saix - Once every three turns you may activate this effect: This monster's ATK increases by 1000, but cannot switch to defense mode,this effect lasts until your next turn, then you must wait another three turns to activate it, and if this monster is destroyed in battle while this effect is active, than the monster that destroyed it can use this card as an equip card, that raises the ATK by 1000, and the equipped monster cannot be switched to defense, after 1 turn, this card is un-equipped from the monster, and sent to the graveyard. Axel - If there is a face up Roxas card on your opponents side of the field you may flip a coin three times, and if you call it two times, then Roxas comes to your side of the field, and is under your control until it is destroyed or another effect that changes his control back to the opponent Demyx - Once per turn you may summon 1 Water Token (WATER attribute/Aqua type/1000 ATK/0 DEF/EFFECT: If the opponent does not destroy this card in 3 turns, you may pick a monster on your opponents side of the feild, and destroy it, and inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponents Life Points,)The token is destroyed after it's three turns pass, and it's effect takes place. Larxene - You may summon a Larxene token once per turn (Max 1) (DARK Attribute/Warrior type/2050 ATK/2000 DEF/EFFECT:This can only exist by Organization XIII - Larxene's effect, this token can NOT attack directly. and dies when attacked, even if ATK of the attacking monster is lower than the ATK or DEF of this token, but when this token is destroyed damage calculations is not applied) I'm gonna edit the Wakka and Selphie pics to look better when I have some extra time, but for now this what I'll have to use, I couldn't find anything else. And that's all for now, I hope you liked them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Dang nice cards! 10/10!! But instead of "Magician", it should be "Spellcaster", since there's no type that's called Magician.:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Dang nice cards! 10/10!! But instead of "Magician"' date=' it should be "Spellcaster", since there's no type that's called Magician.:?[/quote'] Thanks! I'll update it now, I've just been waiting all night for someone to reply on it, and looking over it and finding more things to fix lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Well, I can't really see any OCG errors, but it's a good set of cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Thanks again, they should be fixed now, please tell me if you see anything I could fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel100000 Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Not bad. You schould make some little bit weaker monster to tribute. I would say as neutral guy, Nice work dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted April 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 Yeah, like I said, I'm still working on it, probably will be for a while too, haha, but thanks, I'll be working on that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herodemon1992 Posted April 4, 2009 Report Share Posted April 4, 2009 10/10 that is great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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mr.tacos Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 wow......cant bevieve you forgot king mickey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 I don't know what you're talking about, he's up there Lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Wow, didn't think I'd actually get them done tonight, but I finished Heartless and Nobody cards =D I'm posting them now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxTenshixX Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Some cards need background...Love the Sora Drive Forms ^^7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Yeah, I looked for ones with backgrounds everywhere I could think of, but that's all I could really find =/ But thanks for the rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 great cards, aside of some of the pics. i understand its hard to find good pics these days. but i like the concept. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmilyAnnCoons Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 These are pretty good ^^ You had a lot of good pictures, as well as some bad ones, but I understand having bad pictures :P I'd say 7/10 because there are a few OCG errors...but I'm in no position to say anything...cause I'm not even sure that my OCG rewrites would be right (plus I didn't read all the card effects...so I can't really say anything). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Half Vamp Riku Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 10/10 GREAT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Thanks, and yeah, some pictures are pains to find, some of them I had to edit to make them fit, or look better, but some characters just aren't as popular as others, and it's hard to find good pictures of them, some pictures I was very happy with, and others.... it killed me to settle with themHmm... I might make some Key Blade equip cards soon, lol, I probably should... it would make sense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Pics for the drive forms are awesome! 6.5/10Best I've seen from a new member, good job :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemiclehero Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 they are goood ^_^ iwill post you my own sora card that was my 1st pop culture card but pic added late art curtsy of ~ Chidori hmhm check out my Naruto cards please http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-111440.html [spoiler=1st Pop Culture card] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Thanks and Chemiclehero your cards good too, lol, I'll be sure to check out your Naruto thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 sweet cards...10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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