Fear Posted October 7, 2007 Report Share Posted October 7, 2007 [/size]Here is my new cards, Zombies. [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] [/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted October 7, 2007 Report Share Posted October 7, 2007 The first 2 images have been used alot in many cards, but I don't accuse you of 'stealing' them. :) Now to the notes and how can you improve your cards:- 1- Normal monsters aren't going to make you win a supreme contest or make you get more than 6/10. 2- Repeated description in normal monsters, kinda getting boring.3- Bad OCG (Official Card Grammar, not to be mistaken with Japanese Original Card Game)4- Shadow Bolt would be probably banned, and bad OCG.5- Battlemonger is a little overpowered, with TOO MANY stars.6- Chain Lightning (or Chain Lightening in your new way of spelling names) has bad OCG, and Really Eternal Rest's effect = its effect.7- Dark Lord is overpowered with a few OCG mistakes.8- Dark Ruins - Tower has bad OCG and some spelling mistakes.9- Demolish is simply a card with spelling mistakes. 10- Hades has bad OCG, but it's the best OCG in your monsters. Congratulations.......in your dreams on that.11- Zombie Army is simply "bad OCG" and a grammar mistake: "this card change to defense position" Tips To Improve Your Cards:-1- PLEASE try and OCG-Practice. Look at at least 5 cards per day, and learn how Kazuki Takahashi wrote the card. It's the Official Card Grammar, if you're good with it, your card rating would go up by 50%. 2- DO NOT make Overpowered cards. It's not really that cool. "HAHAHAHAHA I PWNZ0RS THE GOD OF RA!!", etc etc. you know you hate this stuff. 3- GRAMMAR! I know now the Anti-GrammarNazi movement is gonna annoy me with their famous quote "if everything needs 2 b spelled right then go find a book". Well, I tell ya, ya gotta find a book when doing cards. Even this movement will hate cards without grammar. And a hint, smart boy, Grammar is part of the OCG. =P 4- Normal Monsters, well, if it's like a 24-card set, make at most 3 or 2. Do not make too many, and I especially hate it when you make them useless. 2000 ATK Normal Monsters... *looks at King of Yamimakai with dust on him* Poor him, because Kazuki Takahashi made him a normal 2000 ATK monster, nobody plays him. *looks at your cards* If they were real, I'd bet more dust than Yamimakai's would store on such cards. 5- Other than that, instead of insulting me right now because of the bad rating, and the 11 notes of proving that these cards are hopeless, you can improve and TA-DA! I'll give you a rep, and 20 pts, if you release an improved set that I'd really like. Here, that's a promise. Rating: OCG: 4/10 English Grammar (don't worry Anti-GNazis, I have found over 300 books and didn't read except 5): 3/5Pics: 9/10Idea: 3.5/5 If you're a newbie, this is not a bad start, but you can improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Umbra Posted October 7, 2007 Report Share Posted October 7, 2007 Just one thing: I think you forgot something with Blood Speaker's Effect. Right now, it's ATK can be maximum 12. Which will even make it beatable by Kuriboh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yusei Fudou Posted October 7, 2007 Report Share Posted October 7, 2007 Just one thing: I think you forgot something with Blood Speaker's Effect. Right now' date=' it's ATK can be maximum 12. Which will even make it beatable by Kuriboh.[/quote'] Yep, and can be also beaten by Big Shield Gardna. xD Also, you noticed that there are 2 LV4 monsters with 2000 ATK? That is bad. I know there's Gene-Warped Warwolf, but after all, but I think that that whole warwolf card is wrong. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otavio Posted October 10, 2007 Report Share Posted October 10, 2007 Oh yes xD thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otavio Posted October 10, 2007 Report Share Posted October 10, 2007 PS this is my brother account Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atalas Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 I like these cards' pics they are just cheap as hell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 They are okay. But I really like Hades. Its effect could be really useful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zellda Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 nice cards but overpowered.Nice pics by the way there awsome.Well ill giv u 8/10 for begginer ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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