Anarchy805 Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Here goes hopefully the OCG is perfect but any improvement is welcome. EffectIf this is the only card you control when it is Summoned, you can attack twice during this Battle Phase. When you control more than 2 monster cards, You can Release 1 card you control to Inflict 900 damage to your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Good card for a first try but I think the OCG gose like this (If this is the only card You Control when it is Summoned, you can attack twice during this Battle Phase) but don't take my word for it. Overall good balenced effect, good pic just a bit blurry and only one OCG error I think 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 thank you. I missed out the Battle Phase bit nice one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 OCG errors.You=youControl=controlrepared it. good idea. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 OCG errors.You=youControl=controlrepared it. good idea. 6/10 i c i coppied that part off the ocg thread. i thought it looked a bit mad but thanks for that. will update it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 When this card is Summoned, if you control no cards except this, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase until the End Phase this card is Summoned. If you control 2 or more monsters, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to inflict 900 Damage to your opponent. This is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 When this card is Summoned' date=' if you control no cards except this, this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase until the End Phase this card is Summoned. If you control 2 or more monsters, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to inflict 900 Damage to your opponent. This is better.[/quote'] I agree to some extent but isn't it Release now not Tribute?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 Same thing >_> I just don't like release. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 You can use any of them...personally, I hate Release... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 have they changed to ocg to Damage from damage or is it a typo on the ocg thread?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 lol >_> no I had the typo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 I hate releas to sounds more like pokemon than yugioh the OCG is fine now so you uped it to 9/10 but pic is still blurry but cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted April 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 I hate releas to sounds more like pokemon than yugioh the OCG is fine now so you uped it to 9/10 but pic is still blurry but coolthanks for the help. i am gonna have a mess in photoshop try to see if the pic comes any better but it seems to lose quality when it reaches card maker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted April 5, 2009 Report Share Posted April 5, 2009 When this card is Summoned' date=' if this is the only card you control, it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase this turn. If you control 2 or more monsters, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to inflict 900 damage to your opponent. This is better.[/quote'] Fixed. Release is only used in Japan, btw.____________________________ Pic is blurred, as stated above. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 When this card is Summoned' date=' if this is the only card you control, it can attack twice during the same Battle Phase this turn. If you control 2 or more monsters, you can Tribute 1 monster you control to inflict 900 damage to your opponent. This is better.[/quote'] Fixed. Release is only used in Japan, btw.____________________________ Pic is blurred, as stated above. 7.5/10 thank you for the OCG. - Effect will be edited in a bit. -Pictrure has been edited a few times and it is great from photoshop but as soon as it gets to card maker it goes all jpegy, so I am gonna have a fiddle and lower the res on it cos nothing else wants to work.-Thanks for letting me know about the release thing i hate it but according to the OCG thread it was the latest OCG so I used it to make sure ppl didnt give me ocg errors for using something elese instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smear Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 If this is the only card you control when it is Summoned' date=' you can attack twice during this Battle Phase. When you control more than 2 monster cards, You can Release 1 card you control to Inflict 900 damage to your opponent.[/quote'] OCG:If this is the only card you control when it is Summoned, you can attack twice during this Battle Phase. When you control more than 2 monster cards, You can Tribute 1 card you control to Inflict 900 damage to your opponent's Life Points. Also, that is a picture of the pokemon, Moltres. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blood dragon Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Im new elswell..............i made mistakes on my first card too..................you did really good.....better than me....9.5/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Im new elswell..............i made mistakes on my first card too..................you did really good.....better than me....9.5/10 :) Thank You for the supportive comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest xbon Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 I'm not really sure what Release means, so I can't be sure if its an ocg error or not, so other than thatControl should not be capitalizedYou should not be capitalized8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysmith124 Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 I'm not really sure what Release means' date=' so I can't be sure if its an ocg error or not, so other than thatControl should not be capitalizedYou should not be capitalized8/10[/quote'] Release = new word for Tribute (so new only in use on jap cards at the moment) good card effect is good but need to sort out the caps.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
raysmith124 Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 the cards are bring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted October 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 hmmm bmp i think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 No it's WAGA WAAAA BLBLBLM!!!! defiantly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Excallibur Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 Moltres! Anyways release???? Good card and ok effect but there are some OCG errors. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted October 13, 2009 Report Share Posted October 13, 2009 its effect is a bit plain along with some OCG errors, but it's still a sound idea 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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