fango pango Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 ok this is my first card and i think its balanced out so here it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Spongebob Aqua (Or Fish)This card is unaffected by Spell and Trap cards. This card may attack your Life Points directlyLower the Level to 3, or increase the ATK and DEF. Also, I can't see the first card.Good try for a newbie. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vinsent Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Lol, it's effect is a little OP, because the only way to destroy him would be to use a monsters effect to destroy him And I can't see the first one either Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fango pango Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 i just decided to make a new type and i thought that the effect might of gave it a bit of level 4 material Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 i just decided to make a new type and i thought that the effect might of gave it a bit of level 4 material Yeah, well don't make new types unless you can make more and Support cards around them. And 500/700 isn't Level 4 Material. Something like 1600/1400 is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fango pango Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 fine=[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 fine=[ Nice improvement' date= but:Spongebob Aqua This card is unaffected by Spell or Trap cards. This card may attack your opponent's Life Points directly. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fango pango Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 i just added them quick ok so yeh but i got the attack right=] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 i just added them quick ok so yeh but i got the attack right=] OK. Just trying to help you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fango pango Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 yes i know and i finally made the definitive version version 2.5=] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 An overpowered barrier that hits for 1400 damage each turn. Image needs background. Also, where's the set number? 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 yes i know and i finally made the definitive version version 2.5=] Don't say it cant be attacked. It's too OP'ed.Here is a rewritten OCG:This card is unaffected by Spell and Trap cards. This card may attack your opponent's Life Points directly. Also, try to put a different picture up. OR put a background on the existing pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fango pango Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 ok and amythest i didnt know you had to Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 ok and amythest i didnt know you had to You don't have to, it just makes it more authentic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fango pango Posted April 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 ok then but i added it anyway=] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Hmmm... Still seems OP to me... and I think Trap and Magic should be capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 It's Spell Card now. Magic cards don't exist anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted April 6, 2009 Report Share Posted April 6, 2009 Uh-oh... I have some editing to do... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 hmmmm....good try 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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