xXChoiceXx Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 i can make better this one im not sure of do anyone thinkits ok anything i need to change????:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 I love the pics. Although i am quite confused on the second card's effect. put some coma or rephrase. Also, some spelling check :D Otherwise, these are cool cards! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXChoiceXx Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 I love the pics. Although i am quite confused on the second card's effect. put some coma or rephrase. Also' date=' some spelling check :D Otherwise, these are cool cards![/quote'] ok thanx for the helpXD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fish-eye Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 deff a cool pic for your ritual monster. a little grammer and "OCG". i don't really care about OCG but some other members can harp about it. i like the idea. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkMagician332 Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 nc cards well im new here so i like surfing all the personalized cards i like to know how to makeown pictures instead of cpying to other pictures Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark[morph] Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 [Fish-eye wrote]deff a cool pic for your ritual monster. a little grammer and "OCG". i don't really care about OCG but some other members can harp about it. i like the idea. 10/10 Same here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 Lol, I'll help you on the OCG. Capitilization errors (Use of capital letters in sentence). ritual summon = Ritual Summonbattle step = Damage Steptribute = Tributelevels = Levelsopponets = opponentsritual spell card = Ritual Spell Card Commas needs to be included in the effects. Sopremas call's effect: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Sopremas Ruler", you must also Tribute whose total Levels equal to 8 or more which you control or from your hand. Sopremas Ruler's effect: This card can only be Ritual Summoned by Tributing the Ritual Spell Card named "Sopremas Call". When you declare a attack to 1 of your opponent's monsters, remove the attacked monster from play during the Damage Step. DIVINE Monsters aren't realistic cards as they cannot be used in a duel, so might need to change "Sopremas Ruler"'s Attribute. OCG is grammar, they can make your effect of your card more realistic, if you don't have good OCG, people might think that your card is crappy (in some cases). But you have no spelling errors, only capatilization errors, I think's its ok, 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted April 7, 2009 Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 4.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXChoiceXx Posted April 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 7, 2009 what about this card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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