A new hero is born...

[cyber overlord]

hello peeps a new card

first of all i do know that a background is needed i am workin on it but

second of all wajahut is the name of one of my best mates (if your wonderin)

third of all if you think it is bad tell me how i can improve it

 

 

 

 

Card Lore: The Attribute of this card is also treated as LIGHT. When this monster battles a DARK attribute monster, this monster gains 1000 ATK points. When this monster is sent to the graveyard, discard your hand and draw 5 cards. If the card has 'Faithful Hero' in its name, automatically summon it in defense mode (Tribute is not required for a Lvl 5 or a higher monster)

 

 

Image credit:http://www.anime.com/Elemental_Gelade/

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Here's an OCG Fix:

 

This card's Attribute is also treated as LIGHT. When this card battles a DARK monster, this card gains 1000 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, discard your entire hand and draw 5 cards from your Deck. If you draw a Monster Card with "Faithful Hero" in its name, Summon it in Defense Position. (Tribute is not required for a Level 5 or higher monster.)

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The only other problem is the background on the pic, but you said you were working on that. ^_^

 

8/10

[ThisGuy777]

You could also try and fix the picture a little (Its really squished!)

Other then that its good.

[ayy lmao]

7/10

[Black_flame_dragon]

8/10, instead of saying

"If the card has 'Faithful Hero' in its name, automatically summon it in defense mode (Tribute is not required for a Lvl 5 or a higher monster)"

you should say

Once per turn, If a monster card in your hand has 'Faithful Hero' in its name, by discarding a card, you may special summon it in defense mode (Tribute is not required for a Lvl 5 or a higher monster)

Something like that, cause at first i didn't get what you meant by that phrase.

[cyber overlord]

Here's an OCG Fix:

 

This card's Attribute is also treated as LIGHT. When this card battles a DARK monster' date=' this card gains 1000 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, discard your entire hand and draw 5 cards from your Deck. If you draw a Monster Card with "Faithful Hero" in its name, Summon it in Defense Position. (Tribute is not required for a Level 5 or higher monster.)

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The only other problem is the background on the pic, but you said you were working on that. ^_^

 

8/10

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Thank you =)

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You could also try and fix the picture a little (Its really squished!)

Other then that its good.

 

ok

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7/10

 

anything else you would like to say

tips for improvement?

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8/10' date=' instead of saying

"If the card has 'Faithful Hero' in its name, automatically summon it in defense mode (Tribute is not required for a Lvl 5 or a higher monster)"

you should say

Once per turn, If a monster card in your hand has 'Faithful Hero' in its name, by discarding a card, you may special summon it in defense mode (Tribute is not required for a Lvl 5 or a higher monster)

Something like that, cause at first i didn't get what you meant by that phrase.

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i will keep that in mind thanks alot =)

[Agaming]

I like alot 8/10

[cyber overlord]

I like alot 8/10

 

Thank you =)

[B3lly N3rd]

Here's an OCG Fix:

 

This card's Attribute is also treated as LIGHT. When this card battles a DARK monster' date=' this card gains 1000 ATK. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, discard your entire hand and draw 5 cards from your Deck. If you draw a Monster Card with "Faithful Hero" in its name, Summon it in Defense Position. (Tribute is not required for a Level 5 or higher monster.)

______________________________________

 

The only other problem is the background on the pic, but you said you were working on that. ^_^

 

8/10

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yes what he said the card is awsome ^^8/10

[LiAM]

The Attribute of this card is also treated as LIGHT. When this monster battles a DARK Attribute monster, increase this cards ATK by 1000. When this monster is sent to the Graveyard, discard your entire hand and draw 5 cards. If you draw a monster card with "Faithful Hero" in its name, Special Summon it in face-up Defence Position.

 

^My OCG fix is better

[RAEGING D0GKING]

nice card

[cyber overlord]

Thanks every1!!!