ThisGuy777 Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Plz tell me what you think!All images found on Google image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Nice pics but your caps need a lot of work and in random your OCG but mainly it's just caps you need to get right. There's a few tuts around to help you with that. On Ulquiorra Despair the last sentence can be shortend to "This card cannot be destroyed as a result battle except by a monster with an ATK equal to or more than 3000." There's alot of stuff similiar to that; just change the way you've phrased them to make then OCG applicable. Also the phrase at the beging of the "can't be" ones is "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Spcial Summoned/can only be Special Summoned except by ????". Basically it's always a Special Summon. Also for the pics that aren't manga or anime you need image credit for them. (Google Images doesn't count) 6/10:D Nice cards but need a lot of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThisGuy777 Posted April 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 Nice pics but your caps need a lot of work and in random your OCG but mainly it's just caps you need to get right. There's a few tuts around to help you with that. On Ulquiorra Despair the last sentence can be shortend to "This card cannot be destroyed as a result battle except by a monster with an ATK equal to or more than 3000." There's alot of stuff similiar to that; just change the way you've phrased them to make then OCG applicable. Also the phrase at the beging of the "can't be" ones is "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Spcial Summoned/can only be Special Summoned except by ????". Basically it's always a Special Summon. Also for the pics that aren't manga or anime you need image credit for them. (Google Images doesn't count) 6/10:D Nice cards but need a lot of work. Thanks for the advice! I'll try and find all the credit for the pics right now. As for the shortening of Ulqiuorra's effect I actually thought of that a few minutes ago (LOL) but I'll change it later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami-Anubis Posted April 8, 2009 Report Share Posted April 8, 2009 If you can't find the individual Artists of the pictures, then ust put a disclaimer saying "Images are copyright of the individual artists. I take no credit for the making of any of the pictures shown in these cards" or something like that. That'll get your butt out of any legality crap.Overall, good cards :) just clear up the OCG a little, giving the card names Caps at the start of each word in their names, i.e. instead of "bankai", it's "Bankai". Apart from that, good effort 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThisGuy777 Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Here's the disclaimer:I did not make any of the pictures used in these cards nor do I claim to own them.I don't know the artists so here's some of the sites I got them from.coolchaser.commyanimeterritory.blogspot.comonemanga.comkaproductions.ning.comgaiaonline.commyanimelist.netastrak.gametrailers.comdeviantart.comnihonoyama.forumfree.netforum.sword of the newworld.com WHEW!!! jeeze I won't forget to do that again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chemiclehero Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 - It makes people remember you so you get well knownThey are good but quite a few ocg errors im kinda lazy so I willonly help you out what I could see on by after looking at it for 4 seconds kay ^_^ This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Special Summoned except by the effect of one (if you must put one put -1) "Grimmjow Jeagerjaques. You might want to cut out the last part if that is the tributed cards effect if not leave it in - also it be pretty awesome to give it an effect such as. Once per turn you may discard 1 card from your hand to destroy the top card of your opponents deck. just something good ^_^ all of them are good except ocg most of the cards you have you can also find on google images so google them and look for it because no one likes commen card images you can see on google. 7-8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami-Anubis Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Here's the disclaimer:I did not make any of the pictures used in these cards nor do I claim to own them.I don't know the artists so here's some of the sites I got them from.coolchaser.commyanimeterritory.blogspot.comonemanga.comkaproductions.ning.comgaiaonline.commyanimelist.netastrak.gametrailers.comdeviantart.comnihonoyama.forumfree.netforum.sword of the newworld.com WHEW!!! jeeze I won't forget to do that again! Awesome, that's all you need :) and as for what Chemiclehero said...here's my version of the effect, as he missed a couple of OCG points, most likely due to quick typing XD : Grimmjow UnleashedThis Monster cannot be Normal Summoned. This Monster cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "Grimmjow Jeagerjaques" and by offering 1 "Grimmjow Jeagerjaques" as a tribute from your side of the field. Also, for Bankai...When this card is activated, you can Special Summon 1 Monster that has "Bankai" in it's card name to your side of the field from your hand. A general mistake I'm noticing is that you always put "normal summon(ed)" and/or "special summon(ed)". That should be "Normal Summon(ed)" and "Special Summon(ed)" the (ed)'s are just to show that it's on both Sommon and Summoned. Hope this helps :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThisGuy777 Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Thanks for the feedback I'll work on it. But just to be fair I'm only making these for fun so I did'nt really think about OCG and all that. As I started using this site more I've noticed that it is somewhat of a big deal so I think I'll start trying harder :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami-Anubis Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Yea, I know what you mean. There should really be a thread that's just for fun, where OCG doesn't matter and cards can be as perfect/unbroken as you want them to be XD lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThisGuy777 Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 You should suggest that to whoever is in charge of that sort of thing OR start a thread titled "Post card ideas here OCG doesn't matter" but thats too long :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 pretty good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThisGuy777 Posted April 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 pretty good 7/10 TY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Not too bad. Felix has the gist of the OCG problems down. The pics are good, though a couple I've seen before (they aren't overused, though). 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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