JeffHardyFan09 Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 RATE pls.tell me if i shuld continue makin cardz or can i improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThisGuy777 Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Lots of spelling errors but thats an easy fix. Some OCG errors nothing big... on the first card what is a "tuner" monster? "Special summon 1 level 7 or lower dragon type monster from your hand, deck, or graveyard." for the second oneChange the lvl of crystal dragon to match its effect.On dragon boost u dont have to say it wares off.On dragon soul it should say "you can discard"On Magma dragon match the level with the effect and erase the description.The last one doesn't need the sacrifice part at the end and WHAT IS A TUNER????I hope this helps u :)5/10 if fixed 7/10Keep trying don't give up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Lots of spelling errors but thats an easy fix. Some OCG errors nothing big... on the first card what is a "tuner" monster? "Special summon 1 level 7 or lower dragon type monster from your hand' date=' deck, or graveyard." for the second oneChange the lvl of crystal dragon to match its effect.On dragon boost u dont have to say it wares off.On dragon soul it should say "you can discard"On Magma dragon match the level with the effect and erase the description.The last one doesn't need the sacrifice part at the end and WHAT IS A TUNER????I hope this helps u :)5/10 if fixed 7/10Keep trying don't give up![/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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