Guest Star Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 I was bored, so I decided to make a sig. I know it's not good, but that's probably because I'm not good at GFX in any way whatsoever. Credit for the render goes to Blood Rose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 1.) Border is bad 2.) Text = GTFO (unless gifty) 3.) Does not blend 4,) No depth 5,) No flow. 6.) Since the render is not on 100% ocpancy... there is no focal... 7.) BG phails 8.) Random stars kill already dead flow. 9.) Random Brushing is random. 10.) Odd smudging seen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jericho Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Terrible focal (if one at all), don't use text, why the gradient flares? They're terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 1.) Border is bad 2.) Text = GTFO (unless gifty) 3.) Does not blend 4' date=') No depth 5,) No flow. 6.) Since the render is not on 100% ocpancy... there is no focal... 7.) BG phails 8.) Random stars kill already dead flow. 9.) Random Brushing is random. 10.) Odd smudging seen[/quote'] Yeah man I don't know much about GFX at all. I don't know what you mean by random brushing, though. The only brushing I used was for the background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 9, 2009 Report Share Posted April 9, 2009 Like I said over IM, I think it's too bright, the focal isn't really a focal since you can hardly see it, and the text is meh-ish at best. I won't say more as I'm probably worse at GFX than you :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Like I said over IM' date=' I think it's too bright, the focal isn't really a focal since you can hardly see it, and the text is meh-ish at best. I won't say more as I'm probably worse at GFX than you :P[/quote'] Damn Darth D:You can cnc nicely ;DI'm gonna go with Darth on this one.Also don't use that lens flare =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 There is a render? Border, text and effects are bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 the lighting is to bright but im crap at GFX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Like I said over IM' date=' I think it's too bright, the focal isn't really a focal since you can hardly see it, and the text is meh-ish at best. I won't say more as I'm probably worse at GFX than you :P[/quote'] Damn Darth D:You can cnc nicely ;DI'm gonna go with Darth on this one.Also don't use that lens flare =P The only reason I used the Supernova was so that it looked like the rings (one on either side) were being "charged". I thought it would look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 -Text is RAEG!!!!!!-Border is RAEG!!!!!!-That light in the middle is beyond raeg. Dun do it again. -It needs a clear focal. -Way to much white and purple crap going in every direction.-You need to get the focal above the background and work on blending.-Get blending down, then work on depth and composition.-Flow needs to be worked on as well.-Lighting too, if needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 umm bad border i cant see render :( and mostly of alll why white!!and bright too much but good try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Don't hide the focal. It is very hard to notice. Don't use the lens flare, or this case, super nova. No blending or flow. Horrible BG. Txt is pretty bad. Tone down the brightness as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 The only reason I used the Supernova was so that it looked like the rings (one on either side) were being "charged". I thought it would look good.It would help the effect if the rings were actually visible so the viewer knew that's what the supernovas were for ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 The only reason I used the Supernova was so that it looked like the rings (one on either side) were being "charged". I thought it would look good.It would help the effect if the rings were actually visible so the viewer knew that's what the supernovas were for ;) I had actually brightened it because the render was cut-off, and I couldn't figure out how to remove the cut-off line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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