Amethyst Phoenix Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 [align=center] I redid my Organization XIII cards (synchro idea...didn't turn out so well). These turned out much better though, and I based most of the effects on their actual abilities (demyx's time based water form battle and zexion's card stealing, for example). I hope you guys like it. [Spoiler=Image Credit] Saix - http://www.elfwood.com/~crimsonsky2/KH_II_VII_Saix-Berserker.3450820.html Xemnas - http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-739418.html Xigbar - http://psycrowe.deviantart.com/art/Oekaki-Xigbar-30386561 Axel - http://rosethorn.deviantart.com/art/Axel-Kindom-Hearts-2-31413652?offset=20 Luxord - http://arkoniel.deviantart.com/art/Ace-of-Spades-Luxord-61973302?offset=30 Larxene - http://www.elfwood.com/~crimsonsky2/KH_CoM_XII_Larxene.3450812.html Demyx - http://www.elfwood.com/~crimsonsky2/KH_II_IX_Demyx-Dancer.3450808.html Lexaeus - http://www.elfwood.com/~crimsonsky2/KH_CoM_V_Lexaeus.3450813.html Marluxia - http://www.elfwood.com/~crimsonsky2/KH_CoM_XI_Marluxia.3450817.html Vexen - http://arkoniel.deviantart.com/art/Vexen-80898930 Zexion - http://www.fanpop.com/spots/zexion/images/3027898 Xaldin - http://media.photobucket.com/image/xaldin/khurtrogz/kingdom%20hearts/xaldin.jpg Roxas - http://www.elfwood.com/~crimsonsky2/KH2_Roxas-Samurai_Training.3450819.html [/spoiler] [spoiler= Demyx - The Melodious Nocturne] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/3703/98257y.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is successfully Summoned, Special Summon as many "Water Form Tokens" as you can to your side of the field (Aqua-Type/WATER/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense position. During your Standby Phase, put 1 "Dance Water Dance" counter on each "Water Form Token". Each time a "Water Form Token" is destroyed, inflict 100 damage to your opponent for each "Dance Water Dance" counter on the "Water Form Token" destroyed. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Zexion - The Cloaked Schemer] [img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/8360/98257nlw.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you may select one Effect Monster on the field. This card gains the selected monster's effect. In addition, the selected monster is treated as a Normal Monster, and has its effect negated. If this card would be destroyed as a result of battle, you may remove all accumulated effects from it in order to negate the attack and end your opponent's Battle Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Xigbar - The Freeshooter] [img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/3516/98257j.jpg[/img] Lore: During your opponent's Standby Phase, remove this card from play. While this card is removed from play, inflict 200 damage to your opponent for every card effect activated during their turn (excluding this card's effect). Send this card to your Graveyard during your opponent's End Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Vexen - The Chilly Academic] [img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/1871/98257u.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you may select 1 of your opponent's monsters. Special Summon a "Replica Token" with the same Effect, Attribute, Level, Type, ATK, and DEF as the selected monster. The "Replica Token" may not attack directly. Destroy the "Replica Token" during your End Phase. [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Larxene - The Savage Nypmh] [img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/3461/98257h.jpg[/img] Lore: Only once, when this card decalres an attack, send 5 cards from the bottom of you and your opponent's Deck to the opposite player's Hand. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Lexaeus - The Silent Hero] [img]http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6738/98257t.jpg[/img] Lore: When this card is removed from the field, add 1 "Zexion - The Cloaked Schemer" from your Deck to your hand. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Marluxia - The Graceful Assassin] [img]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/2879/98257.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 7 Nobody-Type Monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, Check all cards on your opponent's side of the field and in your opponent's hand, and destroy all Spell Cards there. This card cannot attack until your second Standby Phase after being summoned. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, increase your Life Points, and decrease your opponent's Life Points, by half the monster's combined Original ATK and DEF. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Roxas - The Key of Destiny] [img]http://img4.imageshack.us/img4/2639/98257z.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, you can activate one of the following effects: •Gain Life Points equal to the number of LIGHT monsters on the field x1000. •Remove from play one DARK monster on the field. End your turn after this effect has resolved. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Luxord - The Gambler of Fate] [img]http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/2879/98257.jpg[/img] Lore: Once per turn, your opponent rolls a six-sided die. If the result is even, your opponent draws 1 card. If the result is odd, destroy all monsters your opponent controls and Special Summon "Card Token"(s) (Nobody-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 1000/DEF 1000) to your opponent's side of the field in Attack Position equal to the number of monsters destroyed by this card's effect. If your opponent uses a "Card Token" to Tribute Summon or Special Summon a monster, they take 1000 points of damage. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Axel - The Flurry of Dancing Flames] [img]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2879/98257.jpg[/img] Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner Nobody-Type monsters Tribute this card to destroy every Nobody-Type monster on the field and inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card sent to the Graveyard by this card's effect. During the End Phase of the turn this card's effect was used, Special Summon this monster in face-up Defense Position and treat it as a Normal Monster. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Xemnas - The Superior] [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6884/98257f.jpg[/img] Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by having exactly 4 Nobody-Type monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can send 1 Nobody-Type monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains the sent monster's effect until your End Phase. When this card is removed from the field, Special Summon 1 Nobody-Type monster from your Graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Saix - The Luna Diviner] [img]http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/2879/98257.jpg[/img] Lore: During each of your Standby Phases, increase this card's original ATK by 100. If this card is destroyed by your opponent's card effect, Special Summon it at the start of the next phase of the turn. Decrease this card's original ATK by 300 each time it is Special Summoned. Each time this card is Summoned by its own effect, add 1 Nobody-Type monster from your Deck to your hand. This card cannot attack directly if its ATK is 2000 or higher. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Xaldin - The Whirlwind Lancer] [img]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/5383/98257b.jpg[/img] Lore: During the End Phase of a turn this card declared an attack, you can return 1 Nobody-Type monster from the Graveyard to your Deck to place 1 "Learn Counter" on a monster you control (except for "Xaldin - The Whirlwind Lancer"). When a monster with a "Learn Counter" on it declares an a attack, you may remove 1 "Learn Counter" from it to negate the attack and have "Xaldin - The Whirlwind Lancer" declare an attack on the same target. When this card is removed from the field, your opponent must discard cards from their hand equal to the number of "Learn Counters" on the field. [/spoiler] [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Do you honestly need the fake types? ;) Anyways LOVE your set! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Do you honestly need the fake types? ;) ^This. Anyway, the set looks alright. The OCG is good, for the most part. Pics are cool. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amethyst Phoenix Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 I'm glad you guys like the set =D I tried using real types, but when I looked at the whole set, it just didn't feel right. The only types that would really make sense for any of them would be spellcaster and warrior, but alot of them just don't seem to fit. Zexion's the only one who really looks like a spellcaster, and xaldin and lexaeus look like they could be warriors, but what would you call demyx or luxord? Another reason I went with nobody was that I wanted them to have some synergy with eachother, but I didn't want to name them "Organization XIII - Zexion" for example. They just sound so much better with their name and then the title. So, this, combined with the other dilemna, made nobody a good solution. It allowed me to give some of them effects that only work with eachother, and still keep their names sounding and looking their best. It also describes them all perfectly, while I wasn't satisfied that "warrior" or "spellcaster" did them justice. So I did take a risk with the fake types, but I'm willing to take a small rating drop if it means my vision for the cards is fully realized. Also, nobodies don't fully exist; they're essentially fakes, and the fact that their type is fake also nicely fits with the game's lore. I don't mean to get overly defensive of them (I realize this might be perceived that way), but I just wanted to clarify what was going through my head when I gave them the type nobody. Thank you for taking the time to review my cards. I'm also working on the regular nobodies, which I might add later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Pumpkinz 4 Mayor Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 Nice, but I think there are a few OCG errors, but I could really care less about fake types. 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkey2005uk Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Great cards love them all. I think it was a good move loseing the bit of rating for the fake types, it makes them flow as you said. BUt you lost no rating for the fake types ere 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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