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[align=justify]I've only ever made one other contest and the people involved really liked it. I always give detailed descriptions of what I like about your cards and also whay I dislike about them. I have decnet OCG knowledge and goood card making skills of my own.

 

For this contest I will stage it as a tournament. I'll be wanting a max of 8 people and no more as my rating methods take along time to complete.

 

To enter just say that you would like to and make a card with the following image. If I think it's good enough you can enter, if not you can't.[/align]

 

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mylittlerobotbybuguanle.jpg

 

Image Credit goes to the deviant buguanle[/align]

 

Feel free to edit and crop any image I give you as it will only increase your mark.

 

I'll organise it so that 2 people will go each week and the final two will be left to duke it out. Each week I'll give the contestants two images that they can use, they can pick one of the two and start from there.

 

[spoiler=Here's my mark scheme]

Effect=?/10

Image Difficulty=?/10 or ?/10 (Each image will be given a rating of difficulty, depending on which one you choose this will be your score in this section)

OCG=?/10

Grammar=?/10

Technical Mark= 1/1 or 0/1 (If you edited the image well you are awarded this mark)

Overview= A brief description of how you did.

Total Score=?/10

 

 

 

[spoiler=Entrants]

1. EnkoMaun

2. .:Mirage:.

3. Hallelujah Haptism

4. Prometheus

5. Eternal Crystal

6. End

7. ~Olimars~

8.

 

 

 

[spoiler=This Weeks Images]

Will be introduced on starting day (yet to be decided)

 

 

 

There's no entry fee and the winner will recieve 3 Reps.

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This can only be activated if a monster you control is destroyed by an effect of a Spell or Trap Card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, discard 1 card from your hand. If you do not, remove this card from play. Once per turn, you can add remove from play any number of cards from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 monster from your Deck who's Level is equal to the numbers of cards removed from play by this effect. The monster Special Summoned by this effect cannot be destroy by an effect of a Spell or Trap.

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[spoiler=The Card]

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Effect=8/10

Image Difficulty= For this exercise' date=' there won't be a score.

OCG=7/10

Grammar=8/10

Technical Mark= 0/1

Overview= Firstly, nice Plant Support. The name isn't particularly imaginative but it's still cool. 1300 ATK sounds about right too.

The part before he comma needs work but the bit after is sound. For example instead of "When this card is on the field," it should be "While this card is face-up on your field,". "When" only applies when an, event occurs not when something remains on the field. The face-up part even though it's obvious, is just mandatory to avoid any confrontation I guess. On the second sentence you got the 1st half wrong, which surprises me because you got it right in the first sentence; It should be "When this card is selected as an attack target". It's kind of OP but not much. It would just be more realistic (I think) if it could only do the second part once per turn.

Total Score=7.7/10

 

aka, you're in.

 

[spoiler=The Card]

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[spoiler=Forest Card]

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Forest

 

 

 

Effect=6/10

Image Difficulty= See above

OCG=6/10

Grammar=6/10

Technical Mark=0/1

Overview= First, "Spirt" is not a word. Second it's kinda lame, if anyone wanted to use Plants it's unlikely they'd pick this and it's very unlikely that they'd add "Forest", maybe if "Forest" had a kind of "A Legendary Ocean" it would be better but it doesn't.

The first sentence needs a few changes. You need to remember that if a card needs another card on the field to work, the mentioned card needs to be written before the effect. So, instead of "This card can attack directly if "????" is on your field", it should be "While "????" remains face-up on your field, this card can attack your opponent directly". Now I must point out that what I've written is probably not exactly right as some cards with similar effect do contradict them selves; stuff about Life Points is in some but not in others.

The Beast-Warrior-type bit should be on two lines. Just but a space after the second one or press Enter. Also the "or" needs to be "and".

Finally "the" and "of" are not capped in card names.

Total Score=6/10

 

Unfortunately 6 is just too low for my liking so I'm afraid you can't compete.

 

[spoiler=The Card]

43681i.jpg

 

 

 

Effect=7/10

Image Difficulty= *shrugs shoulders*

OCG=6/10

Grammar=7/10

Technical Mark= 0/1

Overview= I know you to be very talented Mirage but on this occasion I'm pretty sure you could have done better; there are a few careless errors here and there.

I do have to congratulate you on your originality to make the card a Spell' date=' something I wouldn't normally expect from a pic like that.

The first error is in reference to the type of Spell it is, you'd either need to edit it's effect so that it says, "This can only be activated if a monster you control [b']has[/b] destroyed by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card." The reason of that is you can't chain it because it's Continuos so its effect is just that little bit off. You could on the other hand just make it a Trap Card and that would solve the problem easier.

The first sentence has a grammatical error in the form of an "an" that needs to be a "the".

The second and third sentence are OK but need revising and should be put at the end of the card. Look at "Spiritual Energy Settle Machine" and go from there.

In the next sentence there is a big grammatical blow out; read this carefully to see what I mean; "Once per turn, you can add remove from play any number of cards from your Graveyard", It's very small error but an error is still an error.

Lastly this is what the last sentence should be, "A monster Special Summoned by this effect cannot bedestroyedby the effect of a Spell or Trap Card.

 

Total Score=6.7/10

 

You're in but I expect better next time.

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^Please stop. Just post the card in realistic to get an overview.

 

^I know your as awesome as shiz' date=' so you don't need to protect yourself.

 

@God i: Basically there are too many errors for me to evaluate.

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can i try again or am i only alowed to hav 1 go?

 

1 go; don't do what 1q2w3e did.

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[align=center]LonelyForestSpirit.jpg

Lonely Forest Spirit

This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing a Plant-Type monster. Once per turn, you can add 1 level 4 or lower Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard and add it to your hand. If your opponent declares an attack and you control no monsters while this card is in your Graveyard, you can remove this card from play to Special Summon 1 Plant-Type monster from your hand regardless of it's summoning requirements. A monster Summoned in this way is not destroyed by battle and is removed from play when it is removed from the field.[/align]

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