Brittle Ice Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 I might give it a go unless it's too late. =)That image is familiar. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Lol yeah, you might as well stick the effect you made on a card. [align=center]Lonely Forest SpiritThis card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing a Plant-Type monster. Once per turn' date=' you can add 1 level 4 or lower Plant-Type monster from your Graveyard and add it to your hand. If your opponent declares an attack and you control no monsters while this card is in your Graveyard, you can remove this card from play to Special Summon 1 Plant-Type monster from your hand regardless of it's summoning requirements. A monster Summoned in this way is not destroyed by battle and is removed from play when it is removed from the field.[/b'][/align] Effect=9/10Image Difficulty= Wahwahwoaw...OCG=9/10Grammar=9.5/10Technical Mark= 1/1 Overview= w00t, you make cards? I don't know why everyone is resorting to Plant support but I won't argue.Anyway, check the order in the 3rd sentence and your missing some commas. Apart from that the card is solid, nice job.Total Score=9.5/10 You're in, nuff said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Bordem Try, It looks Like a Machine so....Uncreative Yes...But..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Order in the third sentence? And yeah I tend to have this problem with commas and the like, xD. My english grammar is terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrometheusMFD Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 I would like to enter, my card will be posted in a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Here it goes. I'm not really proud of it, but I hope it will do the trick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
End Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 [spoiler=Machine Defender of the Dark Forest] [spoiler=Effect/Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 Plant-Type monster. Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each Plant-Type monster you control. If this card battles with a Plant-Type monster, destroy this card after the damage calculation. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can tribute 1 Plant-Type monster to this card to increase its ATK by 800. Negate the effect of "Black Garden" targeting this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Bordem Try' date=' It looks Like a Machine so....Uncreative Yes...But.....[img']http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/1213/149475.jpg[/img] Your img is broken, I know it wasn't when you posted it because I saw it but I didn't rate it then. [spoiler=The Card] Effect=8/10Image Difficulty =…OCG=7/10Grammar=9/10Technical Mark = 0/1Overview = OK' date=' nice card. Effect is interesting and imaginative and I like that. The name is OK but I can’t help but feel like it just doesn’t sound very nice. (It’s not going to take anything away from you but it just sounds weird)Your OCG is OK but at first glance I see two mistakes and something that’s just a bit stupid. The first mistake is “level” needs to be capped and the second is “times” is supposed to be a symbol not a word. The letter x is used in that situation.The other thing that I have a problem with is how you say you can only activate it when there’s 1 monster but later it says “Increase the ATK of [b']all[/b]”. It’s not a big deal, I’m just being picky. Total Score=8/10 You’re in =) [spoiler=The Card] Effect=8/10Image Difficulty =…OCG=10/10Grammar=9.5/10Technical Mark= 1/1 Overview= Oh sh!t' date=' it’s EC!! You already know how good I think you are. Anywho, nice card, effect is random and kind of unusable and situational but it’s the sort of random a$$ed card Konami would make so it’s cool. Total Score=9.5/10 [spoiler=The Card] Effect=8/10Image Difficulty =…OCG=7/10Grammar=8/10Technical Mark= 1/1 Overview= Meh, it’s OK. After the third sentence you make quite a few errors; Number one is “tribute” needs to be capped and number two is a grammatical error. What you’ve done is this, “you can tribute 1 Plant-Type monster to this card to increase its ATK by 800.” I don’t know what it’s supposed to be so I can’t help. The last mistake is just how you’ve worded the last sentence. There’s easier ways to do it so just think of one. Total Score=8/10 You’re in =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Anywho' date=' nice card, effect is random and kind of unusable and situational but it’s the sort of random a$$ed card Konami would make so it’s cool. [/quote'] =OWhat do you mean by the effect is kind of unusable?It's a Tuner that can Summon a monster. It can't do it on the first turn it's Summoned so it isn't OP-ed. It's a Synchro support. Anyway, I'm in. Yay! =)....OK. Ignore the last two sentences. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Well it pretty much all depends on how many monsters your opponenet has. 0, duh, 1 counter is still pretty useless, 2 still lame, 3 getting there, 4 that's about right. However by the time your opponents has 3 or 4 monsters out, you'll already be down to about 3000 or have lost. Plus, by your next Standby Phase it'd be dead anyway; nobody is going to let you keep it if you've got a usefull amount of counters on there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brittle Ice Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 .....................I iz stupid and shall withdraw until I decide to share my stupidity with you people again.*returns to the hole where people like me (rats) live* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 I'll try To Re-Post It. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Actually you could easily have a trap or magic support like that trap card that lets you add up to 3 spell counters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 I will get the card un either soon or after school. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Is this going anywhere? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Is this going anywhere? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 It should do when I get more members. I have a life so I've not been pushing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 It should do when I get more members. I have a life so I've not been pushing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Well okay then, we are waiting for 8 people right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Well okay then, we are waiting for 8 people right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I'm getting very bored of waiting. x.x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I'm getting very bored of waiting. x.x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Olimar's img is fixed but I don't feel like doing the full rate; he's in though. Not many members now, only one more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felix Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Olimar's img is fixed but I don't feel like doing the full rate; he's in though. Not many members now, only one more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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