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OMG so many cards.MUST RATE!!!


JeffHardyFan09

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Try to slow down when making cards, it looks as if you did them just to get them done. Take pride in them and think about their effects for example think about:

-Does the effect make sence?

-Does it look similar to an original card that has the same base effect?

-Is the OCG as good as other cards I've seen that got a good rating?

Also think about how you could make the effect more interesting or make the ard more interesting in game play. I don't mind Normal Monsters, but a Spell Card that just says to give a random Water Attribute 500 attack and defence points is rubbish to me and many.Don't forget that the effects are what make the card.

 

About the pictures, they are excellent. They fit perfectly with the cards name and effect and make sence. Some pictures don't have backround, but that's not a problem. Whee your going with the pics is an excellent pace, andI really enjoyed looking at them.

 

Some major things that I caught was that you used a description and an effect in the same card, and I haven't been on these forums for a long time, but last I've been here, we didn't do that. Also you seem to capitalize card names, and they don't need to be capitalized. Again, I don't know if things have changed, but that was wrong when I was last here. There are more, probably, but I cannot list all for you.

 

If these are your first cards, ignore the rating. I'm glad you put these cards in the Any Other Cards section. I, too, have lost my OCG while I was RPing, so I'm not perfect either, but I'm trying! :)

 

OCG: 6.5/10

Pic: 9/10

Any Other: 7.5/10

Total/Overall: 8/10

 

Hope you have a good day! And work on those cards!

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