Water Beatdown Deck

[Anacondas1]

Just thought i would see what people thought of one of my 6 rubbish decks! (Stupid brother, always beating me :x)

Anyway:

 

MONSTERS

3x Terrorking Salmon

1x Levia-Dragon - Daedalius

2x Gagagigo

2x Oceans Keeper

1x Thousand-eyes Jellyfish

1x Penguin Soldier

1x Gemini Lancer

1x Golden Flying Fish

1x Warrior of Atlantis

1x Treeborn Frog

1x Aqua Spirit

1x Magical Reflect Slime

1x Sangan

2x Oyster Meister

1x Submarineroid

 

SPELLS

2x A Legendary Ocean

1x Umiruka

1x Terraforming

1x Demise of the Land

2x Shrink

1x Big Wave Small Wave

1x Monster Reborn

1x Enemy Controller

1x Magical Mallet

1x Heavy Storm

1x Symbols of Duty

1x Pot of Avarice

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Soul Release

 

TRAPS

1x Tornado Wall

1x Hidden Book of Spells

1x Dust Tornado

1x Scrap-Iron Scarecrow

 

Thanks to anyone that replies :)

Anacondas1

[dead draw]

I stopped reading at Umiruka

[Tronta]

i stopped at oceans keeper/

theres just a lot of useless junk in here.

[~Emo~]

This, in no way, is a beatdown.

[Anacondas1]

thanks :(

But this is not helping me improve!

Give me reasons!

[Disse]

I think you should play with the Deck and see what parts need improvements. Some good Traps would be good :)

[Anacondas1]

Thank you, Disse

I will try to edit that, and see how it goes :)

 

Anacondas1

[Tronta]

this just...

alright, here:

start over.

imagine the purpose of your deck. what are you trying to accomplish? what is your win condition? how can you achieve it? if i read this right, you want to beat down your opponent with 5 and lower water monsters, some of which, for whatever reason, are vanilla.

next, add cards that form the basic frame, absolute needed cards. a legendary ocean, for example. a couple of the absolute staples, like robert, go in now.

next, look at cards that will help you achieve your purpose. terrorking is a good idea. but a lot of these are useless. you want high attack water monsters. im going to say nothing less than 16 attack, and if it has less than 18, it better have a damn good effect.

next you need to make it faster.

a draw engine perhaps. youre working with water, so you dont have many options. forget this one. but usually when building a draw engine, you make it as fast as you need to go. exodia decks, for example, usually have the fastest draw engines. this is because they absolutely need the speed, and thus take up as much space as necessary to plug in a full destiny engine, possibly with a toon thinner. etc. you shouldnt really need a speedy draw engine, but you do have some key cards you need to hit the field, such as alo. so add terraforming.

at the end, if you find yourself short some, try adding some staples.

 

last, look at your deck, which should have 40 cards.

look at the balance between monsters, spells and traps. with a beatdown deck, you should have around 20 monsters.

try and find ways to improve it. and look for flaws.

pick it apart.

if you find a problem, find a way to fix it.

cut useless cards, fill in better cards.

and always keep numbers in mind.

for an unlimited card, the amount you run is directly proportional it its importance.

alo should be at 3 here, because it lets you normal level 5s, and beefs all your attack. burden does the opposite, which is also very important. run it at 3. etc

 

 

also, you might want to try and run oppression here.

[The Crimson King]

No way this is beatdown. Maybe you should switch to Frogs instead:they have more potential than this, they're still Water, they can OTK(One Turn Kill), they're faster than this, they're more reliable, there's a lot more options. I think I'm done for now.