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really bad OCG

 

i recomend looking at higher ranked members cards and basing OCG off of that instead of writing stuff completely off grammer.

 

to make it better, i have re-written the cards 4 u:

 

Magic Dragon Balls

Spell Ritual

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Shenron." You must have also Tribute monsters from your field or Hand whose total equal 9 or more.

 

Shenron

9 Star (yes i changed it to 9 start, not even god cards are that high)

ATK: 3800 DEF: 3400 (Yes i changed it, not even ANYTHING is or should be that powerful)

This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Magic Dragon Balls". When this monster is Summoned, draw 3 cards. ( yes i decreased it to 3, 10 can be very VERY abused)

 

even with my changes, i would only give you a 7/10 for the following reasons:

 

- card is completely already made, only you made it worse

- You need good, hand drawn, costum images, not images from the show, nor images with writing on them(unless purposly made to have writing, which u still need a good reason for)

 

you are a noob, and i realise that, but such mistakes makes me wonder if uve actually seen a well written out Yugioh card

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