gettogaara Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Deleted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 >_> failnice try though I'll give you that5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pumpkinz 4 Mayor Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Interesting, and original. But don't make too many vanillas, alright? 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mightydes Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Don't you think that's a but powerful for a Lvl 3 monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Don't you think that's balanced a Lvl 3 monster? Fixed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gettogaara Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 thanks for all the feedback everyone. Pumpkinz 4 Mayor what do u mean by vanillas??? mightydes it might be I'm going to compare it too some cards that I have that are 3 stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mightydes Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 vanilla means normal monster..try not to have too many of them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pumpkinz 4 Mayor Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Right, what mightydes said. Its a normal monster, without an effect. They are not taken to kindly around here, so keep the Normal Cards to around 1 or 2 per set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gettogaara Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 oh. well then I should remake most of the ones I have lol cause I have mostly this kind and some spell and trap cards. I put them like that so that they tell a story but now that I think about it I need some more effect cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Man The Shadow Lancer Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 kinda cool 4/10 now only because it doesn't have an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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J-Man The Shadow Lancer Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 well the grammer isn't right but it's a good idea. the effect should be something like this (i'm not sure if this is exact)Â This card can only be equipped to a WATER monster. Increase the ATK of a monster equipped with this card by 1000 until the End Phase of the turn it is activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gettogaara Posted April 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 good point I will fix it but I was also thinking of this since its an attack to have it do damage to life points such as "This card does 1000 points of damage to your opponents life points directly" not exactly sure how to put that though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gettogaara Posted April 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 so should I change it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Man The Shadow Lancer Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 i think changing it would make it over powered =/ so if you want my opinion, i think you should change the OCG to the way i changed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pumpkinz 4 Mayor Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Instead of posting more cards in new posts, just edit the first one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gettogaara Posted April 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Pumpkinz I kno I could do that but I want to push it up and I'm not sure editing bumps it up and I will change it to how u put it jman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Man The Shadow Lancer Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 just go edit you card, and change the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Xm0nkeyxbutt Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 fake types are looked down upon as well[impish]. you should just make it aqua. other than that, please continue with your collection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sonicsora123 Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Cool but the fake type made it 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gettogaara Posted April 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 wait what do u guys mean by fake types? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperheroDecks Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 fail but nice efforttry to make origonal types like Beast notdevilish and not to many vanillas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Xm0nkeyxbutt Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 nah, your last pic was better."grave yard" is 1 word"standby phase" is capitalized"you may" = you can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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