gettogaara Posted April 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 K fixed the errors and here the last attempt at a new pic 'll switch it back if the old ones better but I need some feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperheroDecks Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 During your StandBy Phase you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Prinplup LV5" from your Handor Deck. There that is how the effect should be with practicaly noOCG errors and no grammer errors ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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J-Man The Shadow Lancer Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 very cool 10/10 =]] make some more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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gettogaara Posted April 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 I would like to keep going with this but I need some feedback on the newest card. Is the effect good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Man The Shadow Lancer Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 i think the effect should be like this...but i am not sure Once per turn select 1 monster on your side of the Field. the selected monster is returned to your hand. Select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the Field, the selected monster is returned to your opponent's hand. During your Standby Phase send this card from your side of the Field to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Empoleon Lv7" from your hand or Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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J-Man The Shadow Lancer Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 cool thanks I'll try this and reupload itThe new effectHeres Empoleon after long last and with a pretty sweet affect too lolJust going to make one more to finish up the Piplup seriesNeed alot of help rewriting the effect. here is the rituals effect This monster card only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell card "Pokemon to Human Transformation". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 or more as a tribute from your side of the Field or hand. You may remove any "Piplup Lv3", "Prinplup Lv5" or "Empoleon Lv7" monsters from your side of the Field, your hand, or your Gravyard from play. Increase the ATK of this card by 400 for each card removed by this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mightydes Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 also remember, faketypes are bad, switch SkyChild to Spellcaster or something. nice cards thouh, you've come a great (but there's alot more to learn) way. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gettogaara Posted April 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 well that's the thing though the character isn't a spell caster,warrior or anything like that hes just a regular human who fell from the sky and turned into a Pokemon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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