kimmy1235 Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Hi everyone. I have been working really hard on my first set of cards and want to show all the ones I have so far to everyone. This set will consist of my cute Gothic Loli monsters and a few cards that have creepy picture art. I will also put new cards on this page from now on so keep an eye out. Well this is what I have so far. Make sure to give me your feedback and if you want rate the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Man The Shadow Lancer Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 the're kinda cool, i like the idea, but i think they could be better 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicky-whyte Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Hmmm ... i love the effort you put into them but they have the basic effects like increase ATK and negate attacks ... try sumfing like return this card to return one of your opponents monsters back to there hand and deal 200 points for the combined level. by the way that was a suggestion but its always gud to think of sumfing new ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luis2 Posted April 13, 2009 Report Share Posted April 13, 2009 Chains of horror is like Nightmare Wheel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pumpkinz 4 Mayor Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Cool idea, OCG errors, the doll room is the scariest XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Hmmm ... i love the effort you put into them but they have the basic effects like increase ATK and negate attacks ... try sumfing like return this card to return one of your opponents monsters back to there hand and deal 200 points for the combined level. by the way that was a suggestion but its always gud to think of sumfing new ^_^ This, carry on the set, i want to see more :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted April 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Thanks you all for your replies. I have added 4 new cards. If you cannot see the effect of "Gothic Loli - Anastasia" here it is:"Gothic Loli - Anne" + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersAs long as this monster is on the field you may tribute a monster on your side of the field with "Gothic Loli" in it's name to negate the activation of a spell or trap. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a monster while the card "The Doll Room" is on the field you may show a "the Doll Room" from your hand to Special Summon this monster from the graveyard to your side of the field. Do you guys think she is overpowered, if so what should I change on her? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted April 14, 2009 Report Share Posted April 14, 2009 Hmmm ... i love the effort you put into them but they have the basic effects like increase ATK and negate attacks ... try sumfing like return this card to return one of your opponents monsters back to there hand and deal 200 points for the combined level. by the way that was a suggestion but its always gud to think of sumfing new ^_^ agreed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted April 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 Hmmm ... i love the effort you put into them but they have the basic effects like increase ATK and negate attacks ... try sumfing like return this card to return one of your opponents monsters back to there hand and deal 200 points for the combined level. by the way that was a suggestion but its always gud to think of sumfing new ^_^ agreedVery well, taking your guys' advice I thought up this new card. I hope that it is a good idea, a trap you can activate from your hand withou the use of Makyura The Destructor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zulax345 Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 gotjic loli-hope is to overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted April 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 gotjic loli-hope is to overpowered Wow' date=' you were right. I forgot to put levels on it so it was level 1 Opps, my bad. I changed it now, so what do you think?[hr']I added a new card. Colorful Vision is the Gothic Loli's draw card. It can get you up to 3 cards, but you lose a 1000 LP for each card you have to discard from it's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted April 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Another new card added. This time it is my awesome spell card Lost and Forgotten. I like this one alot. Now before anyone gets on me about how I wrote the effect let me explain. I wrote the effect so that the monster you send to the graveyard is the cost and not the effect. That way you can send even monsters that have spell immunity to the graveyard becuase it only stops spell effects, but not cost. This card would do well as a anti Silence/Horus card. I'm not sure if you can use the effect on their highest forms, but if you get this before they can play them it wouldn't matter. Also, making the discard the effect means you could use it well in a Drak World deck. Please Rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Please find my 1. Lost and Forgotten: Send 1 monster where?2. Gothic Loli - Anne: Seems powerful for me cause it summons a monster who has a higher level than her for free. My thoughts only. Other than that. all are ok. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted April 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Please find my 1. Lost and Forgotten: Send 1 monster where?2. Gothic Loli - Anne: Seems powerful for me cause it summons a monster who has a higher level than her for free. My thoughts only. Other than that. all are ok. Keep it up! Thanks for catching Lost and Forgotten. I fixed it. I must be tired. I'm going to go sleep now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Please find my 1. Lost and Forgotten: Send 1 monster where?2. Gothic Loli - Anne: Seems powerful for me cause it summons a monster who has a higher level than her for free. My thoughts only. Other than that. all are ok. Keep it up! Thanks for catching Lost and Forgotten. I fixed it. I must be tired. I'm going to go sleep now. Cool! Take some rest! Thanks for updating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted April 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 New card: Relentless Fear. BTW, I'm going to try and make at least one new card a day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Cool effect on the last card. 8.7/10 for the last card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Incognito Italian980 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 pretty good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dorian1010 Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Gothic Loli-Megan's power seems too powerful... there's no cost and she's easy to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 OCG errors and Op'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted May 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2009 Figures that right after I say i will make a new card everyday I disappear. Hehe, well I'm back. I changed Gothic Loli - Anne so she now has a cost for her effect. Also I added one new card, Gothic Loli - Curran. Special Thanks goes to Sleepy for drawing the picture for me. She said she would color it as well and I will update it when I get the final copy. Lastly, if I make OCG errors or over powered cards please tell me what I can do to fix them. I am willing to listen to advice when given. Thank you in advance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted May 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 13, 2009 New cards! Gothic Loli - Angela and Instant Loli, please rate and tell me what you think about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted May 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Aw.... no one every posts here anymore :( . Anyways I have an update. The "Gothic Loli - Curran" Card now has color in it's picture now. Like I said before the pic was dawn and colored by Sleepy. If you like it give her a few rep points. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kimmy1235 Posted May 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2009 Hi again everyone who still comes to this forum page. New card added: Nightmare Shadow. My first posted card not related to my Gothic Loli monsters. I had planned from the beginnig to make my set of both my Gothic Lolis and Nightmare monsters, but then someone else snatched up the nightmare Archtype. That discouraged me for a while, but I'm saying Screw it and doing it anyways. Hope you like the new card guys and girls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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