Fallout 3 card *Rate and comment please =)*

[Mosherflip]

Yeah i made this card for a contest, it scored me third.

 

i wanna know what other people think, please rate and give CONSTRUCTIVE comments

 

Karma Lost!

 

 

Activate only when there is a field spell in play. Pay 1000 lifepoints to destroy any field spells in play. All monsters on the field and in any Graveyard become Zombie-Type monsters

 

Image cred goes to: http://jack-r-abbit.deviantart.com/

[LiAM]

[align=center]Activate only when there is a field spell in play. Once per turn, by paying 1000 Life Points, destroy 1 field Spell Card. All monsters on the field and in any Graveyard become Zombie-Type monsters.

 

-My fix still has errors, it was a complicated effect, an alternative...

 

Activate only when your opponent activate a Field Spell Card. Pay 1000 Life Points and destroy the card.

 

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Card components seem pretty rough, and slightly unbalanced, Trap jammer or something similar (i know trap jammer you need to use on Battle Phase - but who cares).

 

The image could be better, looks too CGI/3D.

 

Nevertheless, its pretty good, could use a few fix's.

 

Oh and BTW, I'm glad you liked my Avatar/ Sig. :D[/align]

 

Tip for the future: I have a little pet hate - and that's incorrect grammar, not saying you used any, just try not to in future. X3

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I was thinking of maybe splitting this cards effect into two, and making a field spell card that utilises the secondary effect of this card. For example making it so that when you activate "Karma Lost!" you pay 1000 Lifepoints to search your deck for a "Capital Wasteland" field spell and activate said field spell, which would then do the whole turning everything into zombie effect. What do you think of that idea?

 

Ah thats cool, i am about half way through reading the whole buso renkin series, its taking its time because i prefer to actually have a physical copy of the manga rather than reading it online lol.

[BrenTenkage]

eh not bad