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whoobarman5

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Terrible. First, you have bad grammar and spelling (Ultamite? O_o Sound's like a termite). Second, There is no such Type as 'Ultimate'. Third, read up on effects because your effect-writing sucks too. Finally, name and ATK and DEF points. Aside from Obelisk the Tormentor (not sure if there are any other cards), no monster can have Infinite ATK and DEF points. And it's only infinite through Obelisk's effect. And the name sounds more like a Spell/Trap card than a Monster. Oh, and you need to state what You need for the Synchro Summon (Basically, 1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters).

 

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why is every one so harsh it does have a lot of things that need to improve but instead of saying EPIC FAIL tell him how he can inprove it so it gets ratings.

Any way for effort i give 4/10

We're just telling the truth.

 

i know but if it's bad how can he improve it

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why is every one so harsh it does have a lot of things that need to improve but instead of saying EPIC FAIL tell him how he can inprove it so it gets ratings.

Any way for effort i give 4/10

We're just telling the truth.

 

i know but if it's bad how can he improve it

I did mention about him improving the whole Synchro part of it. And improving his effect-writing.

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