jack781217 Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 The pictures I use are CG of the game Fate/stay night. I do not claim any credit to them. This is a remake of my unsuccessful first attempt.The idea is to treat the DEF of Spellcaster-Type monster as some sort of "SP" that would recover every turn.And Heroic Spirit Monsters' various effects would require consumption of these SP. Please help me to improve my cards and ideas! I am open to any suggestions and comments. I would greatly appreciate if you can help me with the wording and OCG. I realize that I have some lengthy sentences... [spoiler=Arthuria' date= Servant Saber]You can Special Summon this card if you control a LIGHT Spellcaster-Type monster. Once per turn, you can decreaes the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 500 until your next Standby Phase to increase this card's ATK by 500 until your next Standby Phase. During each of your End Phases, decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 1000 until your next Standby Phase. If you do not, destroy this card. When a monster battles with an "Arthuria, Servant Saber", it looses 500 ATK and DEF. You can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to activate 1 "Excalibur" from your Deck. If this card is in the Graveyard by this effect, you can return to your hand 1 "Excaliber" on your side of the field to activate this card from the Graveyard during your End Phases. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK. If the equipped monster is "Arthuria, Servant Saber", this card gains the following effect:- Once per turn, you can decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 2500 until your next Standby Phase to destroy all monsters your opponent controls. The equipped monster cannot attack during this turn. Decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 1000 until your next Standby Phase to activate this card. Negate damages to your Life Points by a card your opponent controls. If you control a face-up "Arthuria, Servant Saber", until your next Standby Phase, all cards on your side of the field cannot be destroyed, and you receive no Life Point damages. [spoiler=Cuchulainn, Servant Lancer]You can Special Summon this card if you control an EARTH Spellcaster-Type monster. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 500 until your next Standby Phase to return this card to your hand. During each of your End Phases, decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 1000 until your next Standby Phase. If you do not, destroy this card. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK. If the equipped monster is "Cuchulainn, Servant Lancer", this cards gains the following effect:- Once per turn, you can decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 500 until your next Standby Phase to destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent control whose ATK and DEF are both lower than the original ATK of the equipped monster. Decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 1000 until your next Standby Phase to activate this card. Select 1 face-up "Cuchulainn, Servant Lancer" you control. Destroy all monsters on the field whose ATK and DEF are both lower than the ATK of the selected monster. [spoiler=Emiya, Servant Archer] You can Special Summon this card if you control a FIRE Spellcaster-Type monster. You can decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 500 until your next Standby Phase to randomly look at a card in your opponent's hand. During each of your End Phases, decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 1000 until your next Standby Phase. If you do not, destroy this card. This card can only be activated from your Deck or hand when you control a face-up "Emiya, Servant Archer" 6 of your turns after it has been Summoned. Once per turn, you can select 1 Equip Spell Card from either Graveyards and equip it to a monster you control. If an "Emiya, Servant Archer" you control would be destroyed, you can destroy 1 Equip Card you control instead. This card can only be destroyed by an effect that targets only Field Spell Card. This card is destroyed 6 of your turns after it has been activated. [spoiler=Medea, Servant Caster]You can Special Summon this card if you control a DARK Spellcaster-Type monster. During each Battle Phase, You can decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control (other than this card) by 500 until your next Standby Phase to activate 1 Spell Card from your hand. During each of your End Phases, decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 1000 until your next Standby Phase. If you do not, destroy this card. If the equipped monster is "Medea, Servant Caster", this cards gains the following effect:- You can decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control (except the equipped monster) by 1000 until yout next Standby Phase to negate the Special Summon of a monster and destroy it. [spoiler=Medusa, Servant Rider]You can Special Summon this card if you control a WIND Spellcaster-Type monster. When your opponent attacks with a Level 5 or lower monster, you can decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 500 until your next Standby Phase to switch the attacking monster to Defense Position. During each of your End Phases, decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 1000 until your next Standby Phase. If you do not, destroy this card. Activate only when you control a face-up "Medusa, Servant Rider". During your Main Phases, you can decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 500 until your next Standby Phase to switch a Level 5 or lower monster on the field to Defense Position. When you control no "Medusa, Servant Rider", destroy this card. Activate only when you control a face-up "Medusa, Servant Rider". When you decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control, you can decrease the DEF of another monster you control instead. Destroy that monster during during the End Phase. When you control no "Medusa, Servant Rider", destroy this card. Decrease the DEF of a Spellcaster-Type monster you control by 1500 until your next Standby Phase to activate this card. Select 1 face-up "Medusa, Servant Rider" you control and equip to it 1 Beast-Type monster from your hand or Deck. The selected monster gains ATK equal to the ATK of the monster equipped to it. If it would be destroyed, remove from play the monster equipped to it instead. During the End Phase, remove from play the monster equipped to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pumpkinz 4 Mayor Posted April 15, 2009 Report Share Posted April 15, 2009 Some OCG errors. 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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mr.tacos Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Some OCG errors. 7/10.agreed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack781217 Posted April 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I appreciate that you point out there are OCG errors...but I just can't figure out where they are. My OCG is not going to improve if I can't identify the errors, so please tell me where they are. (just pointing out 1 or 2 of them would be fine) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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