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Orochimaru card (Need Comments) ~UPDATED~


~Makaveli~

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Hey everyone it's me LT Havic ^_^. I got a new card so please tell me how I can improve it.

 

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When this card is Special Summoned, remove from play 1 DARK monster on your side of the field. You must discard 1 card from your hand so this card can attack this Battle Phase. Select 1 of your opponent's Monster Cards, as long as this card is in play the selected monster cannot attack. While you have no cards in your hand, while in Attack Position, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)[/align]

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OK LT heres what your effect should be (words in bold are what I fixed):

 

When this card is Special Summoned, remove from play 1 DARK monster on your side of the field. You must discard 1 card from your hand so this card can attack this Battle Phase. Select 1 of your opponent's Monster Cards, as long as this card is in play the selected monster cannot attack. While you have no cards in your hand, while in Attack Position, this card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)


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on your side of the field = you control

 

Select 1 of your opponent's Monster Cards = Select 1 monster your opponent controls

 

as long as this card is in play the selected monster cannot attack = as long as this card is in play, the selected monster cannot attack

 

destroyed as a result of battle = destroyed by battle

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