Madsen Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 I love the detail at the right of the focal, that kinda looks like broken glass. And the colors look real nice. Great job with lighting and depth. But even though it does look great, the render just doesn't look like it fits in that area. The BG you used, it just doesn't fit the render. Maybe battle stricken land.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Really?How does everything below the render look good to you?The random bubble c4ds placed everywhere look messy.Render doesn't look like it belongs.It's also centered =PLighting is crazy.I guess it has depth.No flow.Effects are really mehish. Other than some c4d's there really isn't much here.Render has some white soft brushing on the right of it.Not to bad but try again bud ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Good basic elements and effects, but put together terribly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Good basic elements and effects' date=' but put together terribly.[/quote'] ^This. Although the composition is also looking bad. How about blurring the fountain & keeping the focus on the focal a bit? Remove the glow on the focal, doesn't make it look that good. Other than that, you need some more work on the tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I love the detail at the right of the focal' date=' that kinda looks like broken glass. And the colors look real nice. Great job with lighting and depth. But even though it does look great, the render just doesn't look like it fits in that area. The BG you used, it just doesn't fit the render. Maybe battle stricken land..[/quote'] lol Really?How does everything below the render look good to you?The random bubble c4ds placed everywhere look messy.Render doesn't look like it belongs.It's also centered =PLighting is crazy.I guess it has depth.No flow.Effects are really mehish. Other than some c4d's there really isn't much here.Render has some white soft brushing on the right of it.Not to bad but try again bud ;D Daemn D= Good basic elements and effects' date=' but put together terribly.[/quote'] OMFG IT'S KIZZY! Good basic elements and effects' date=' but put together terribly.[/quote'] ^This. Although the composition is also looking bad. How about blurring the fountain & keeping the focus on the focal a bit? Remove the glow on the focal, doesn't make it look that good. Other than that, you need some more work on the tag. Daemn D= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 The effects are meh, and you could blur the bushes on the BG a bit ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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