Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 have i achieved it??? Lore:T his card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 Fiend-type monsters on your side of the field. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Fiend-type monsters in your Graveyard x 500 points. Negate the effect of a monster destroyed by this card in battle. Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 points every time you negate a monsters effect. Lore: A monster that attacks this face-down Defense Position monster is Immediatly equipped to this card as an Equip Spell Card.(Damage Calculation is not applied) Increase the ATK of this card by an amount equal to the original ATK of any equipped monster(s). if ths monster destroyes another card in battle, it is equipped to this card and its original ATK is added to the ATK of this card. Lore: This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing "Sonneillon, The Loathing" "Beelzebub, The Arrogent" "Belial, The Dark General" "Gressil, The Impure" and "Leviathan, The Heretic" in your Graveyard from play. When this card destroys another monster by battle, equip it to this card as an Equip Spell Card. You can remove 5 monster cards that are equipped to this card to destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field. i personally love them. sonneillons effect could use some tweaking tho. ideas??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 have i achieved it??? Lore:T his card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 Fiend-type monsters on your side of the field. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Fiend-type monsters in your Graveyard x 500 points. Negate the effect of a monster destroyed by this card in battle. Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 points every time you negate a monsters effect. Lore: A monster that attacks this face-down Defense Position monster is Immediatly equipped to this card as an Equip Spell Card.(Damage Calculation is not applied) Increase the ATK of this card by an amount equal to the original ATK of any equipped monster(s). if ths monster destroyes another card in battle, it is equipped to this card and its original ATK is added to the ATK of this card. Lore: This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing "Sonneillon, The Loathing" "Beelzebub, The Arrogent" "Belial, The Dark General" "Gressil, The Impure" and "Leviathan, The Heretic" in your Graveyard from play. When this card destroys another monster by battle, equip it to this card as an Equip Spell Card. You can remove 5 monster cards that are equipped to this card to destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field. i personally love them. sonneillons effect could use some tweaking tho. ideas??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 have i achieved it??? Lore:T his card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 3 Fiend-type monsters on your side of the field. This cards ATK and DEF are equal to the number of Fiend-type monsters in your Graveyard x 500 points. Negate the effect of a monster destroyed by this card in battle. Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 points every time you negate a monsters effect. Lore: A monster that attacks this face-down Defense Position monster is Immediatly equipped to this card as an Equip Spell Card.(Damage Calculation is not applied) Increase the ATK of this card by an amount equal to the original ATK of any equipped monster(s). if ths monster destroyes another card in battle, it is equipped to this card and its original ATK is added to the ATK of this card. Lore: This Card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing "Sonneillon, The Loathing" "Beelzebub, The Arrogent" "Belial, The Dark General" "Gressil, The Impure" and "Leviathan, The Heretic" in your Graveyard from play. When this card destroys another monster by battle, equip it to this card as an Equip Spell Card. You can remove 5 monster cards that are equipped to this card to destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field. i personally love them. sonneillons effect could use some tweaking tho. ideas??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Most of these are somewhat broken, although Leviathan and Sonneilon are fair enough. Personally I love Gressil's effect but he's just too powerful Lower his DEF to 3000, and he should be OK... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Most of these are somewhat broken, although Leviathan and Sonneilon are fair enough. Personally I love Gressil's effect but he's just too powerful Lower his DEF to 3000, and he should be OK... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Most of these are somewhat broken, although Leviathan and Sonneilon are fair enough. Personally I love Gressil's effect but he's just too powerful Lower his DEF to 3000, and he should be OK... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 define broken please... these things confuse me :) ok ill lower it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 define broken please... these things confuse me :) ok ill lower it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 define broken please... these things confuse me :) ok ill lower it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavyTank Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 some OCG and grammar errors and...Leviathan was a sea monster...good cards though 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavyTank Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 some OCG and grammar errors and...Leviathan was a sea monster...good cards though 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavyTank Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 some OCG and grammar errors and...Leviathan was a sea monster...good cards though 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 actually leviathan was a christian demon of hate... i was shocked but its true... thnx :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 actually leviathan was a christian demon of hate... i was shocked but its true... thnx :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 actually leviathan was a christian demon of hate... i was shocked but its true... thnx :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 instead of a cost you put ATK raises and the abilloty to steal your opponents monsters makeing them ovepowerd again but apart from that there not bad just add a cost cus all cards with realy good effects and no cost get banned fast so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 instead of a cost you put ATK raises and the abilloty to steal your opponents monsters makeing them ovepowerd again but apart from that there not bad just add a cost cus all cards with realy good effects and no cost get banned fast so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 instead of a cost you put ATK raises and the abilloty to steal your opponents monsters makeing them ovepowerd again but apart from that there not bad just add a cost cus all cards with realy good effects and no cost get banned fast so 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 ok then. ill work on it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 ok then. ill work on it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 ok then. ill work on it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Not quite near to perfection.Your OCG is ok, despite some errors such as tribute when it's Tribute.And the effects are good but can be extended to a long effect, need a bit more work but your OCG/Grammar has improved a bit, 7.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Not quite near to perfection.Your OCG is ok, despite some errors such as tribute when it's Tribute.And the effects are good but can be extended to a long effect, need a bit more work but your OCG/Grammar has improved a bit, 7.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Not quite near to perfection.Your OCG is ok, despite some errors such as tribute when it's Tribute.And the effects are good but can be extended to a long effect, need a bit more work but your OCG/Grammar has improved a bit, 7.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doom_Shaman Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 thnx im trying Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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