Kenji™ Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 [align=center]Really need CnC (specially from pros like Haris ><)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 the bg is goodthe render is good but the colours could be different where there's pink and green and bluestill awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 Meh, not your best... No obvious focal reallyToo brightFlow goes in several directionsLens flare (or w/e) on the helmet has to go.The "3" in the bottom-right corner is distracting Overall, 6.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenji™ Posted April 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 [align=center]Meh' date=' not your best... No obvious focal reallyToo brightFlow goes in several directionsLens flare (or w/e) on the helmet has to go.[b']The "3" in the bottom-right corner is distracting[/b] Overall, 6.7/10. Really?Uhm,....I can fix that but...really :([/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God Kaiba™ Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 it's not that distracting but the sig would be a bit better without it.~JG~ is half right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 It not bad. Focal needs cleaning. The rest is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 Like said, focal needs cleaning. Make it stand out more. Rest is good ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D. Gray Man Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 render looks a littlebit fat just to add Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3DN30N Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 A lot better than I could have done! 5/5! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 20, 2009 Report Share Posted April 20, 2009 Lol, only n00bs rate(*/10) sigs.Get rid of the text.Get rid of the squares in the corner.Lighting is quite weird :/Left seems emptier than the right, fix that.That bit of green on the render, the lower left corner, looks weird. Not much depth.Work on flow.Focal is a bit hard to see.Not to bad.Good luck on the next one bud ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kenji™ Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 [align=center]O_oErr...Thx Haris?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 [align=center]O_oErr...Thx Haris?[/align] [align=center];DErr...Ur welcome bud?[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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