Still Ill Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Hi! These are my 1st cards I made, so it would be great if you leave some comments and critiques. And please correct grammar and spelling mistakes, because English isn't my native language^^ [spoiler=Lord of the Rings][spoiler=Evil Deck] [spoiler=Good Deck] [spoiler=Metroid Prime] Click the cards for image credits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Read The Rules Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 well, not the best OCG, but they are otherwise very nice. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 For someone that doesn't have english as their native language, you sure do a good job in it. However, there isn't such a thing as "Nazgul" or "Balrog", so you need to convert it into a Yugioh type, unless you don't care what haters say. Also, good try on getting the pictures, but if you want good pictures, I suggest you go to deviantart.com and see what they have there. Your OCG, or Orginal Card Grammar (the text language card games use to say stuff), is pretty good but some of it is off. Here are corrections: Increase ATK by 300 points = Increase ATK by 300 (no longer say "points" in Yugioh!)your opponent can't set monsters = you opponent cannot Set monstersas long as this card remains on the field = as long as this card remains face-up on the field Hopefully, some more experts will come, but good job overall! Keep up the good work and try to fix those mistakes.Score: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SuperheroDecks Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 ocg isnt the bestpics need backgrounds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 They're OK. OCG and pics need improvement. Ridley's not bad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Incognito Italian980 Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I love those cards!!!! 10/10 (i especially like "The One Ring") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Ill Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Thank you guys for the advice, I just fixed the mistakes^^Tonight I'm going to post some more cards with better pictures from devainart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Naturia Master Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 good cards 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 wow not bad 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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