1991gamer Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Ok theses are the first cards i have ever made and i need all u people to help me balance them out and find any punctuation errors that i might have missed. This is just a sample of what i have made, i will make another thread cause this will be big enough as it is If someone could find a better picture that would be great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Read The Rules Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I'll just fix the first one: FLIP: Select 1 of your opponent's monsters and return it to the bottom of your opponent's Deck. (That's the best I can do) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agaming Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 nice cards for a first post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black_flame_dragon Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 nice cards for a first post You mispelled oringinal in dragons lair. The sun burst dragon's effect saying it can only be ritual summoned with such-and-such card was in the wrong place, but you got that part right with devil dragon. Try sticking with that format. But theese are awsomee cards. Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1991gamer Posted April 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 nice cards for a first post You mispelled oringinal in dragons lair. The sun burst dragon's effect saying it can only be ritual summoned with such-and-such card was in the wrong place' date=' but you got that part right with devil dragon. Try sticking with that format. But theese are awsomee cards. Keep up the good work![/quote'] Thanks, this took me like a whole day to make. I dont know how but i did Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.tacos Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 meh 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oscar. Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 try to come up with simple cards with detailed effects try to come up with pop culture ones releastic cards is realy advanced card makeing and most new people that post there get negged at for bad cards and bad ocg and so on post on pop culture >_> friendlyer then releastic i think and people sometimes help you with ocg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ayy lmao Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Writing on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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