Brushfire Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Used Haris' tutorial to make it. =/Rate, hate, disgrace. Owait... ;D --- Decided not to use C4D's this time and I added a few techniques of my own. Much better imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 The focal is kinda hard to find since the effects are covering it up. The C4D's look pretty unfinished... Meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 To be honest, it's rather fail. The focal is covereed up by the effects, and it seems like it's got displace or w/e all over it, which is never good. Tbh, I can't seem it find any lighting, but that may just be me. The C4D's on the left kinda ruin it, but also provoide a finishing touch. Meh, I dunno what to think... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 ActuallyThe focal is dead into hell=/Good flow, love the outcome for the tut.I liek it moar then the real tut outcome =/Compo is nice.It's called erasing over sawkie stocks and c4d's that don't look good.Clear up the focal to revive depth.Meh. EDIT::I agree with JG.The lightning is also dead.ALSOIs that the render in full size with lowered opacity behind the focal that I see there?D:Continue stuff your not a hasbin at D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I just realized it's Kai from Beyblade =D I should've realizided that a while ago, since he was supposed to be the focal =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 The focal is kinda hard to find since the effects are covering it up. The C4D's look pretty unfinished... Meh. Yeah' date=' I'm aware but I guess it's my outcome of the tutorial. They aren't "unfinished", they're cut out for purposes of the tag.... Lol. Thanks? =P To be honest, it's rather fail. The focal is covereed up by the effects, and it seems like it's got displace or w/e all over it, which is never good. Tbh, I can't seem it find any lighting, but that may just be me. The C4D's on the left kinda ruin it, but also provoide a finishing touch. Meh, I dunno what to think... Eh. =/I guess my outcome just sucks compared to Haris, though I followed the tutorial perfectly. ActuallyThe focal is dead into hell=/Good flow' date=' love the outcome for the tut.I liek it moar then the real tut outcome =/Compo is nice.It's called erasing over sawkie stocks and c4d's that don't look good.[b']Sawkie stocks?[/b]Clear up the focal to revive depth.Eh, I'll give it a go.Meh. EDIT::I agree with JG.The lightning is also dead.The tut didn't provide me for anything to do with lightning so I just didn't bother. I'm not bothered about lighting anyway.ALSOIs that the render in full size with lowered opacity behind the focal that I see there?D:Continue stuff your not a hasbin at D:No, it's the fill that's lowered and there's no lowered opacity behind him. D: And I'm trying to get back into it, god damn. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 =/Erase some of the displace, the lower the opacity.Change the stock layer mode, and lower opacity if needed.Really needs work on blending and depth.The c4ds on the left are out of place, especially the bubble.The c4d in the top right just above the render looks fugly.Flow needs a bit of work, IMO. =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 =/Erase some of the displace' date=' the lower the opacity.[b']Gotcha.[/b]Change the stock layer mode, and lower opacity if needed.Hmm, I'll look into it.Really needs work on blending and depth.I thought they were there. The depth anyway. o.O[/]bThe c4ds on the left are out of place, especially the bubble.The c4d in the top right just above the render looks fugly.ITT: My C4D use it ugly and always has been.Flow needs a bit of work, IMO.Right. I may or may not try these changes and post a v2, depends if I can be bothered. =P =] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I think they are both Rockin Sam ;DCept for a few of the things they said above...=\Refer to first line of this post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 The second is better. You got the depth and blending better.Flow is still in need of a bit of work. The left side is a bit overcontrasted, try using the burn tool a bit. Nice work. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted April 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 I think they are both Rockin Sam ;DCept for a few of the things they said above...=\Refer to first line of this post. Thanks Slash. :) The second is better. You got the depth and blending better.Flow is still in need of a bit of work. The left side is a bit overcontrasted' date=' try using the burn tool a bit. Nice work. ;D[/quote'] I know; I like the second A LOT more. :P Thanks. :)I'll work on it. ;)I did the Burn & Dodge, along with blur... just didn't do a lot of blurring on the left. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 You could also try using a darker soft brush, then brushing over the overcontrasted/bright spots and then lower the opacity, then blurring moar. =/ Now that I look at it, render seems a tad oversharpened. Could be me, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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