Yankee Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Hello all,I finally decided to make a Syncrho monster. After some help from Icyblue and Browarod, it's finally here: [align=center][spoiler=Hurricane Dragon] [spoiler=Effect]1 Dragon-Type Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned, place Storm Counters on this card equal to the number of monsters used to Synchro Summon this card. Then you lose 500 Life Points for each Storm Counter.Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 for each Storm Counter on this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 Storm Counter to remove from play 1 card on the field. If there are no Storm Counters on this card, it is destroyed. When this card is desroyed except by it's own effect, you can decrease your Life Points by the amount of Storm Counters that where on this card when it was desroyed x200 to put this card back in your Extra Deck.[/align] [spoiler=Artist Credit]Art by Kilara of Deviant Art. Thanks to Icy for helping me with the effect idea, and Brow for helping with OCG ^_^ Cheers,Yankeefan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chainsaw20x6 Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 the decrease your life points by the number of storm counters makes no sense, do you mean like x100? and its rather OP being it will have atleast 3800 ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 "1 Dragon-Type Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned, put Storm Counters on this card equal to the number of Synchro Material used to Synchro Summon this card. When this effect resolves, take 500 damage for each Storm Counter on this card. (1) Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 for each Storm Counter on this card. (2) Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 Storm Counter on this card to remove from play 1 card on the field. If there are no Storm Counters on this card, destroy it. When this card is destroyed except by it's own effect, you can decrease your Life Points by the amount of Storm Counters on this card when it was destroyed x--- (3) to return this card to the Extra Deck." 1. NEVER LINE BREAK ON A CARD.2. Try 800 base attack.3. Times how many life points? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 "1 Dragon-Type Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned' date=' put Storm Counters on this card equal to the number of Synchro Material used to Synchro Summon this card. When this effect resolves, take 500 damage for each Storm Counter on this card. (1) Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 for each Storm Counter on this card. (2) Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 Storm Counter on this card to remove from play 1 card on the field. If there are no Storm Counters on this card, destroy it. When this card is destroyed except by it's own effect, you can decrease your Life Points by the amount of Storm Counters on this card when it was destroyed x--- (3) to return this card to the Extra Deck." 1. NEVER LINE BREAK ON A CARD. [b']I didn't...[/b]2. Try 800 base attack. Uhm...No?3. Times how many life points? Forgot to save that part into the card before i posted it, thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 "1 Dragon-Type Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned' date=' put Storm Counters on this card equal to the number of Synchro Material used to Synchro Summon this card. When this effect resolves, take 500 damage for each Storm Counter on this card. (1) Increase the ATK of this card by 1000 for each Storm Counter on this card. (2) Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 Storm Counter on this card to remove from play 1 card on the field. If there are no Storm Counters on this card, destroy it. When this card is destroyed except by it's own effect, you can decrease your Life Points by the amount of Storm Counters on this card when it was destroyed x--- (3) to return this card to the Extra Deck." 1. NEVER LINE BREAK ON A CARD. [b']I didn't...[/b] You did. Between where I put (1)2. Try 800 base attack. Uhm...No? A level 5 Synchro with 3800 ATK? You're kidding me then.3. Times how many life points? Forgot to save that part into the card before i posted it, thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Prince_of_Death Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Nice card yankeefan. I like the part in the effect where you can psy life points to bring it back to your extra deck. help you regain its effect of the synchro summoning. As far as I see, its balanced. 10/10. next thing you know is that it becomes a real card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 1 Dragon-Type Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned, place Storm Counters on this card equal to the number of monsters used to Synchro Summon it. You then lose 500 Life Points for every Storm Counter. This card gains 1000 ATK for every Storm Counter on this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 Storm Counter from this card to remove from play 1 card on the field. Destroy this card if there are no Storm Counters on it. When this card is destroyed except by its own effect, you can decrease your Life Points by the amount of Storm Counters that were on this card when it was destroyed x200 to return this card to your Extra Deck. The grammar devil and God are raging within me. (Name the band reference for +1 rep.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted April 23, 2009 Report Share Posted April 23, 2009 Yankee: LostLetter is totally right. That's pretty freaking ridiculous. This thing makes Instant Fusion ridiculously broken - you could easily summon Charubin the Fire Knight (Level 3) + some random Level 2 Tuner, or if you're feeling festive, Special Summon a Level 4 Fusion monster. This card can easily break Instant Fusion when combined with a Level 2 and below Tuner. Drop its ATK. Also, the lore has several errors and the effect is rather confusing... Not to mention that if you're not totally incompetent, you can return this baby to the Extra Deck for 0 Life Points. Yeah, that's right. If this thing drops the final counter to RFG a card and is at 0, it hits the Grave. Then, all you do is multiply 200 by 0 (which is 0, incidentally), and add it back for more abusive fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 This; is not a good example of your work. Though it is quite good, I wouldve expected more. 8/10. Thats good but your card is partially OP'ed (can be 6800 ATK if used correctly) and it doesn't say WHEN you take damage from the Storm Counters. When is it? When the Counters are placed? WHEN? There is moreto correct I believe, but I'm doing this fast... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Sorry Yankee... This card doesn't work as a Synch-Tuner like this.Bad meh card v_v"... (Was linked my Gphaku). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Alright, let me see what I can do for this baby. 1 Dragon-Type Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Summoned, place Storm Counters on this card equal to the number of monsters used to Synchro Summon this card. Then you lose 500 Life Points for each Storm Counter.Increase the ATK of this card by 500 for each Storm Counter on this card. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can remove 1 Storm Counter to send 1 card on the Field to the Graveyard. (The Remove from play seems a little extreme) If there are no Storm Counters on this card, it is destroyed. When this card is desroyed except by it's own effect, you can decrease your Life Points by the amount of Storm Counters that where on this card when it was desroyed x200 to put this card back in your Extra Deck. Atk 1200 Def 1000 Everything else seems about normal. I'm unsure of OCG but then again I haven't been on in months. lol. I'm just trying to help but based on everyones reactions this effect, ATK, and DEF seem more sane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit Crow Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 this card has a few ocg errors but im giving you 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keji masters Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 8/10 not bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted April 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Lol, thanks for the posts people.Sorry about the quality. Been sick, and I forgot to fix the ATK/DEF. It was supposed to be WAY lower, but I really forgot to do that before I posted it. Oh well, best I can do is to try again next time.Thanks again ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Just for lulz, I got my JUMP manga today, and chazz used a manga card called "Hurricane Dragon". Oh, the Irony! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rise of the Eldrazi Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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