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[texaschickenlittle]

Okay guys, I need help getting some intrest in getting this fanfic up, so I need your help.

 

What I need is some good plot holes, stories, possible character relations and other things

 

[spoiler=Story Stuff]

[spoiler=Story Summery (kind of)]

This story is going to take one part Harry Potter and mix it with Fire Emblem style. The story is told on a continent that I have no idea what to call it. It chronicles the story of Harry who was taken in by Sirius into a mercenary group after he was orphaned (<-kinda ripping off FE9). After a few missions, Harry discovers a young girl who happens to be the princess of the nation he lives in and that the capital is under attack by a rival nation after the rival nation's heir to the throne, Voldemort, returns. Harry must help the princess out and take her to neighboring countries in order to get an army to help her country.

 

 

[spoiler=Character classes]

These classes are set and will not change. I am trying to fit every Harry Potter character in here; so, if you have an idea for a class for a character then let me know.

 

Harry - Ranger

Ron - Fighter

Hermione - Mage

Sirius - Paladin

Remus - Priest

Ginny - Cleric

Dudley - Knight

Draco - Soldier

Fleur - Falcoknight

Charlie - Dragon Lord

Albus - Sage

Gabrielle - Pegasus Knight

Kingsley - Swordmaster

Lucius - Harberdier

Tonks - Myrmidon

 

 

 

[Çå®∂îñål]

this is spam this belongs in fan fic

[Brushfire]

It isn't SPAM and it doesn't belong in Fan-Fic as nothing has been wrote yet; so stfu noob.

 

And this sounds god damn awesome (being a huge HP FF lover myself), and I wish to help out as much as I can. ^^;;

[∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮]

I'd be willing to help you =)

[Brushfire]

Harry - Ranger

Heh, could work.

Ron - Fighter

Makes sense.

Hermione - Mage

Definitely.

Sirius - Paladin

... works I guess. :P

Remus - Priest

Not sure how a Werewolf can be a Priest. =P

Ginny - Cleric

Yup.

Dudley - Knight

If you do it right. He'd be a slow one. ;D

Draco - Soldier

Yeah, agreed.

Fleur - Falcoknight

Hehe, are you hinting at her part-veelaness? :P

Charlie - Dragon Lord

Definitely.

Albus - Sage

He'd have to be one hell of a powerful one.

Gabrielle - Pegasus Knight

Hmm... she was only a kid so I can only agree with this.

Kingsley - Swordmaster

Makes sense.

Lucius - Harberdier

No idea what that is. o.O

Tonks - Myrmidon

Yeah, ;D

 

Make someone a Necromancer and another a Druid. =D

[Shrekstasy]

Remus should be Laguz.

 

Make someone a Necromancer and another a Druid. =D

 

Hagrid could be a druid and the one dude that resurrected Voldemort in the 4th book should be a necromancer.

[texaschickenlittle]

Well for starters, I didn't want the laguz in this story. The main reason I chose Remus to become a priest was because of Rhys from FE9 and 10.

 

Rhys was always sickly and needed constant medical attention and rest so he wouldn't hurt himself too much. This I wanted to tie in with Remus. Now if I wanted to bring in Remus' lycanthopy into this, I could make it so he would turn into a wolf during certain chapters (because of the full moon) and he would became a Berserker-like unit that couldn't tell friend from foe. Also wanted to throw a bone to Mia/Rhys paring fans with Tonks being a Myrmidon

 

As for the Harberdier, it is an improved Soldier that was introduced in FE9. I wanted Lucius to be a Harberdier so that Draco would aspire to be one himself and give reason behind the choices.

 

I also have some new classes and someclasses for characters

 

[spoiler=New Stuff]

[spoiler=New Classes]

House Elf

Unit that Specializes in a particular form of magic that never wears out and increases in strength with practice. Most House Elves are fast, can dodge well, and have a High Magic Power, but have incredibly weak defenses. Class specific talent: Teleport

 

 

[spoiler=New Characters]

Hagrid - Berserker

Wormtail - Druid

Belletrix - Swordmaster

Bill - Rouge

Fred and George - Thieves

 

 

[spoiler=Skills]

Teleport

Talent only natural to House Elves. Allows Unit to Instantly move to any spot in that Unit's movement range that isn't occupied already; allowing them to go through enemy lines.

 

 

 

 

[Cyber Altair]

I stopped reading at Harry Potter.

 

Some originality please.

[Brushfire]

I stopped reading at Harry Potter.

 

Some originality please.

 

The funk.

 

Do you even know what a Fan-Fic is?

[SushiTheLegend]

this is spam this belongs in fan fic

Do you have some kind of screw inserted into your brain that has screwed with your brain patterns and made you mildly retarded? Anyway this sounds good, I'd like to see the outcome.

[Umbra]

this is spam this belongs in fan fic

Do you have some kind of screw inserted into your brain that has screwed with your brain patterns and made you mildly retarded? Anyway this sounds good' date=' I'd like to see the outcome.

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The fact that this belongs in fanfic is irrelevant to you? It's there - take it from the guy who wrote those rules.

[SushiTheLegend]

this is spam this belongs in fan fic

Do you have some kind of screw inserted into your brain that has screwed with your brain patterns and made you mildly retarded? Anyway this sounds good' date=' I'd like to see the outcome.

[/quote']

 

The fact that this belongs in fanfic is irrelevant to you? It's there - take it from the guy who wrote those rules.

Make a sub-forum and we'll agree.

[Cyber Altair]

I stopped reading at Harry Potter.

 

Some originality please.

 

The f***.

 

Do you even know what a Fan-Fic is?

yes hoe'. An hp fanfic isn't originality at it's best or even near it's decency level

[Brushfire]

I stopped reading at Harry Potter.

 

Some originality please.

 

The f***.

 

Do you even know what a Fan-Fic is?

yes hoe'. An hp fanfic isn't originality at it's best or even near it's decency level

 

Yeah, guess what? Get the funk out; someone's writing ability hasn't got anything to do with the subject they're writing on so learn how Fan-Fics and writing works, then come back and flood this thread with your bullshit.

[Umbra]

Haptism, an off-topic forum for FF is about as unneeded as the off-topic forum for RP you suggested a while ago. In other words, incredibly unneeded. Everything that such a forum can maintain is already at such a low level that the present forums can hold them.

[Soul Legacy]

1. calm down brushfire., theres no point in getting angry

2. this seems like a good idea, keep it up :)

[Brushfire]

1. calm down brushfire.' date=' theres no point in getting angry

2. this seems like a good idea, keep it up :)

[/quote']

 

The funk?

 

I'm getting angry? Yes, and his un-needed provocation and attacks against me are allowed and not commented on? Sheesh, you people are all retarded...

[SushiTheLegend]

So, you want to mix discussion and ideas with actual stories? While we're at it let's just merge Showcase and Shops/Requests, then they are the same no?

[Umbra]

Ideas lead to a story, and discussion is centered around a story. (What else do you expect people to post in the thread, anyway? "This was great, I like it" comments only?) Work presented in Shops or that are requested are most likely not ending up in Showcase.

[texaschickenlittle]

@Cyber: if you don't like Harry Potter, don't even comment on this thread. Its as simple as that and don't try taking it out on brushfire. Also if you can find me a fanfic that mixes Fire Emblem and Harry Potter then I'd like for you to send me a link of it. Until then, don't tell me this is not original.

 

@brushfire: I agree with legacy, calm down brushfire. If you really want to argue with someone about this then take it to PM instead of flooding my thread with useless arguments.

 

@Nitton: I understand where you are coming from. If you wish to move it go ahead. My thought was that if I placed it here in General it would get more replies. Alas...

 

@ everyone who liked the idea: don't just say you like it HELP ME!, give me ideas to work with.

[Cyber Altair]

I'm giving you both sides of the discussion. "WOW This is a fantastic idea" don't help someone.

 

I stopped reading at Harry Potter.

 

Some originality please.

 

The f***.

 

Do you even know what a Fan-Fic is?

yes hoe'. An hp fanfic isn't originality at it's best or even near it's decency level

 

Yeah' date=' guess what? Get the f*** out; someone's writing ability hasn't got anything to do with the subject they're writing on so learn how Fan-Fics and writing works, then come back and flood this thread with your bullshit.

[/quote']

 

My aren't you a calm one. All I'm saying is basing a fan-fic on novel characters instead of taking time to make some characters in your own isn't original.

[SushiTheLegend]

I do want it in fanfiction but I don't believe mixing it with actual stories is good.

[Brushfire]

I'm giving you both sides of the discussion. "WOW This is a fantastic idea" don't help someone.

I actually agree with you here.

My aren't you a calm one. All I'm saying is basing a fan-fic on novel characters instead of taking time to make some characters in your own isn't original.

 

While it may not be original, it's a lot harder to use ready-made characters as they have personalities that you MUST keep to and keep their feelings canon, you don't wanna make them OoC (Out of Character). It's a lot easier to create crappy new characters that are just based on you and your friends. Get me?

[Cyber Altair]

Yes. but as hard it is to stay true to the characters you have pretty much a lot already done to you. All you need is a good plot to just drive them. Creating good solid characters from start to finish is way better imo =\

 

Opinions are opinions in the end.

[Brushfire]

Yes. but as hard it is to stay true to the characters you have pretty much a lot already done to you. All you need is a good plot to just drive them. Creating good solid characters from start to finish is way better imo =\

 

Opinions are opinions in the end.

 

This is where ability comes into play; not the topic and characters themselves.

 

And yes, yes they are.